Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence stating you enjoy looking out the window, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar (e.g., singular/plural, verb forms) and natural phrasing. Keep answers to no more than 4–5 sentences and use a linking word when adding a reason (for example, "because").

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy watching the passing scenery because it helps me relax and notice new places. For example, when I travel by bus I often watch old houses and fields, which gives me ideas for photography.

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, I often take photos") and one specific reason or brief example. Avoid absolute claims like "every" and correct tense and article errors. Use a linking word such as "so" or "because" to connect reason and result.

Example: Yes, I often take photos from the car window because I want to capture unique scenes that I might not see again. For example, last month I photographed a colourful sunset over rice fields while driving home.

Suggestion: Answer directly: state your preference clearly, then give one or two specific reasons with correct grammar and natural expressions. Replace unclear phrases (e.g., "prefer the singing") with precise language and use linking words like "because" and "so". Keep it concise and avoid poetic but unclear metaphors unless you explain them.

Example: I prefer the sea because listening to the waves relaxes me and helps me forget stress. For instance, I often go to the beach with my family on weekends to swim and watch the sunset, which always calms me down.

× I really love to look out the window when I am traveling by bus.

✓ I really love looking out of the window when I travel by bus.

Use present simple for habitual actions (I travel) and prefer the gerund 'looking' after 'love'. Also use 'out of the window' or 'out the window' for clarity; keep tense consistent for routines.

× I feel it is coming for me and giving me a new atmosphere to see.

✓ I feel it comes alive for me and gives me a fresh view to enjoy.

Original uses awkward personification and incorrect tense/forms. 'Comes alive' and 'gives' use present simple to describe a general feeling. This corrects sentence structure and verb choice to match meaning.

× It is a really great things that I would do if I travel.

✓ It is a really great thing that I would do if I travel.

Mismatch between singular article 'a' and plural noun 'things'. Use singular 'thing' to agree with 'a'. Also 'if I travel' (present simple) is acceptable for a real possibility.

× I regularly take the photo outside window because I know that this moment cannot be replaced again.

✓ I regularly take photos out the window because I know that this moment cannot be repeated.

Use plural 'photos' for habitual action; 'take the photo' implies a specific photo. 'Out the window' is idiomatic. 'Cannot be replaced again' is redundant; use 'cannot be repeated' or 'cannot be recreated'.

× I'm not going to miss the moment.

✓ I won't miss the moment.

Contraction 'I'm not going to' is grammatical but 'I won't' is more natural for a resolved intention; both are acceptable. Changed to 'won't' to fit concise spoken style.

× I try to take every scenery that came across my eyes.

✓ I try to capture every scene that catches my eye.

'Scenery' is an uncountable noun and not used with 'every'; use 'scene' or 'photo'. Use present simple 'catches' for habitual action instead of past 'came'. 'Capture' is more natural for taking photos.

× I prefer the singing, watching the waves comes, it makes me so calm and relaxed.

✓ I prefer the sea; watching the waves come in makes me feel calm and relaxed.

Original mixes ideas and has subject-verb errors. 'Waves come' uses base verb with plural subject 'waves' (come). Use 'watching' + clause and 'feel calm and relaxed' for natural expression. Also declare preference clearly: 'I prefer the sea.'

× I often go to the sea with my family and I can see that it is on my heart.

✓ I often go to the sea with my family and I feel it in my heart.

'Can see that it is on my heart' is unidiomatic. Use present simple 'feel' for habitual emotion and idiomatic 'feel it in my heart'.