Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar and word choice, reduce hesitations, and structure the answer with a clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and choose 'scenery' (not 'scenario') and avoid extraneous words like 'worker'. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus because I enjoy the changing scenery. For example, watching trees and city streets pass by helps me relax and feel calmer during the journey.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and hesitations, correct grammar (e.g. 'helps me preserve memories', 'I love taking photos'), and give a specific reason or brief example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and keep it concise.

Example: Yes, I often take photos and short videos from the car window because they help me preserve memories of places I visit. For instance, I recorded the coastal road last summer so I can remember the light and colours later.

Suggestion: Clarify the preference (use 'the sea' not 'CBS'), give a clear topic sentence stating your choice, and support it with specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Reduce fillers and keep sentences well-formed.

Example: I prefer the sea because it is relaxing and ideal for spending time with family. For example, we can walk along the beach, watch the sunrise or sunset, and enjoy the fresh air together.

× Yes, I often look out the window at the scenario when travelling by bus worker.

✓ Yes, I often look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus.

The student used 'scenario' (a situation or plot) and 'bus worker' incorrectly. The correct word for landscape seen from a window is 'scenery', and 'bus' is the vehicle; 'bus worker' is not appropriate. This is a word choice error; replace with 'scenery' and 'bus' to match intended meaning and maintain grammatical structure. Note: This error is handled under vocabulary choice though not in the provided list; treat as 'Incorrect use of adjectives or nouns' by correcting to the proper noun 'scenery'. Please be careful to use the list items only when applicable.

× I enjoying the beautiful scenery outside the window.

✓ I enjoy the beautiful scenery outside the window.

The student wrote 'I enjoying' which mixes subject 'I' with a present participle without an auxiliary. The correct simple present form is 'I enjoy' to express a habitual action. Use subject + base verb (I enjoy) for present habits. (Grammar problem type corresponds to Present tense issue / Subject-verb agreement.)

× It give me a sense of relax and uh, help me to feel calm.

✓ It gives me a sense of relaxation and helps me to feel calm.

Subject 'It' requires the third-person singular verb form 'gives' and 'helps'. Also 'relax' as a noun is incorrect; use 'relaxation'. Ensure verbs agree with singular subject and use correct noun forms. (Grammar problem type ID:27 Subject-verb agreement and ID:13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs for the noun form.)

× Yes, I enjoy taking photos and short videos of the scenery outside the car window, uh, because uh, it uh, helps me preserve my beautiful memory and I love to taking photos and videos.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking photos and short videos of the scenery outside the car window because it helps me preserve my beautiful memories and I love taking photos and videos.

Remove unnecessary filler 'uh' for clarity. Use 'helps' for third-person singular 'it'. 'Memory' should be plural 'memories' when speaking generally. Replace 'I love to taking' with 'I love taking' (infinitive 'to' cannot be used with gerund 'taking'). This fixes verb form and noun number errors. (Grammar problem types: 2 Third person singular issue; 1 Singular and plural issue; 8 Verb + -ing form.)

× It uh, gives me a sense of relax.

✓ It gives me a sense of relaxation.

Use 'gives' for third-person singular and replace 'relax' (verb) with the noun 'relaxation'. Ensure correct verb form and noun form for clarity. (Grammar problem types: 2 Third person singular issue; 13 Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs / nouns.)

× I prefer CBS because I can spend quality time and enjoy the beautiful moment with my family or friends.

✓ I prefer the sea because I can spend quality time and enjoy beautiful moments with my family or friends.

'CBS' is unclear; likely the student meant 'sea'. Use 'the sea' as a specific place and pluralize 'moments' for general experiences. Also remove 'the' before 'beautiful moment' when pluralizing. This fixes vocabulary and article/number usage. (Grammar problem types: 11 Incorrect use of prepositions / 22 Article errors / 1 Singular and plural issue.)

× Uh, we can watch sunset and sunrise together, Uh, we get fresh air and walking along the beach, uh.

✓ We can watch the sunset and sunrise together, and we can get fresh air and walk along the beach.

Use 'the sunset' and 'the sunrise' with definite article. Maintain parallel verb forms: 'we can get' and 'walk' rather than 'walking'. Replace 'walking' with base verb 'walk' to match 'we can'. Remove fillers 'uh'. This corrects article usage and verb form/parallelism. (Grammar problem types: 17 Incorrect use of the definite article; 8 Verb + -ing form; 26 Sentence structure errors.)