Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and articles, and avoid unnecessary words. Add a brief specific example to enrich the answer and use a linking word to contrast the two situations.

Example: Yes — I usually look out of the window when I travel because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, I like seeing countryside farms and forests pass by on long bus trips, but on motorways the view is often repetitive and less interesting.

Suggestion: Make the response smoother and remove hesitation. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add specific detail and a linking phrase. Correct minor grammar (e.g., 'a good photographer') and avoid filler words like 'umm'.

Example: Yes, I often take photos from the car, although I never do so while I am driving because it would be dangerous. Because modern smartphones have good cameras, I can usually capture clear images of scenes like sunsets or coastal roads.

Suggestion: Correct vocabulary and pronunciation errors, give one clear opinion sentence then support it with two specific reasons linked logically. Replace incorrect words ('see' -> 'sea', 'center of sea breeze', 'pop') and provide clearer details about childhood memory.

Example: I prefer the sea because I love the fresh sea breeze and relaxed atmosphere. I grew up in a coastal city with a lovely beach, although we were often not allowed to swim when I was a child because the waves were very strong.

× Yes, I often look out the windows at the scenery when traveling and especially I enjoy a lot when the landscape is changes dynamically.

✓ Yes, I often look out the window at the scenery when travelling, and I especially enjoy it when the landscape changes dynamically.

Errors: incorrect plural ('windows' -> 'window') is optional but context prefers singular; 'enjoy a lot' is unnatural phrasing and needs an object ('it'); 'the landscape is changes' mixes auxiliary 'is' with simple present 'changes'. Use simple present 'changes' for habitual observations. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('look out the window', 'enjoy it') and correct verb form for subject-verb agreement.

× It can be boring if I'm just driving on Hwy. though.

✓ It can be boring if I'm just driving on the highway, though.

Abbreviation 'Hwy.' is informal; expand to 'highway'. Sentence otherwise correct; keep present continuous 'I'm driving' for current action. Minor punctuation: comma before 'though' works. Suggestion: avoid abbreviations in formal speech.

× Yes, I do take pictures, unless I'm driving, because of course it can be quite difficult and dangerous.

✓ Yes, I do take pictures unless I'm driving, because, of course, it can be quite difficult and dangerous.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable; corrected punctuation: remove extra comma after 'pictures' and add commas around 'of course' for clarity. Keep 'I'm driving' using present participle to indicate simultaneous action.

× I'm not, umm, good photographer, but these days, thanks to the advancement of smartphone cameras, I can take decent pictures I like.

✓ I'm not a good photographer, but these days, thanks to the advancement of smartphone cameras, I can take decent pictures that I like.

Missing article 'a' before 'good photographer' (article error type ID 22 but here corrected under adjectives/adverbs); also missing relative pronoun 'that' to link 'pictures' and 'I like'. Suggestion: include articles with singular count nouns and use 'that' or reorder as 'pictures I like' is okay conversationally but clearer with 'that'.

× I enjoy both but if I had to choose I would say see because I love the center of sea breeze.

✓ I enjoy both, but if I had to choose I would say the sea because I love the scent of the sea breeze.

Multiple errors: 'see' is a misspelling of 'sea' and needs the definite article 'the' before 'sea' when choosing one option; 'center of sea breeze' is incorrect wording — likely intended 'scent of the sea breeze'. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary ('sea' not 'see') and collocations ('the sea', 'scent of the sea breeze').

× Also I'm from a coastal city.

✓ Also, I'm from a coastal city.

Add comma after 'Also' for natural flow. Sentence otherwise correct; article 'a' before 'coastal city' is present and correct.

× My hometown had great beach but when I was a child swimming was prohibited because waves were so pop.

✓ My hometown had a great beach, but when I was a child swimming was prohibited because the waves were so rough.

Missing article 'a' before 'great beach' (article error); 'pop' is incorrect word choice — likely meant 'rough' or 'powerful'. Use 'the waves' with definite article. 'Swimming was prohibited' is fine passive past. Suggestion: include articles for singular count nouns and choose appropriate adjectives ('rough', 'strong').