Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce redundancy and correct collocations (e.g. say “feel happy and excited,” “when I travel by bus or car,” “look at the scenery”).

Example: Yes. I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because watching the changing landscape relaxes me. For example, I enjoy seeing mountains at dawn or colorful sunsets, which makes the journey more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer, then explain with a specific reason and one brief example. Use smoother phrasing (e.g. “I don’t usually take photos from a moving car because it can be dangerous; I wait until we stop”).

Example: No, I don’t usually take photos from a moving car because it’s unsafe and the images are often blurred. Instead, I wait until the car stops at a viewpoint so I can take sharp, well-composed pictures.

Suggestion: Answer directly then give specific reasons and avoid unclear words like “over wind” or “enjoyed the movements.” Use linking words and concrete details (e.g. sounds, activities, atmosphere). Keep it to two to three sentences.

Example: I prefer the mountains because they are peaceful and fresh. The cool air, quiet trails and wide views help me relax, and I enjoy hiking and listening to birds rather than the busy atmosphere of the seaside.

× Yes, of course, I look out of the window at the scenes whenever I'm travelling with the bus or car because it makes me feel more happy and overwhelmed in the travelling session that I can view different things, that is the mountains and the sunset or sunrise by looking out of the windows.

✓ Yes, of course, I look out of the window at the scenery whenever I'm travelling by bus or car because it makes me feel happier and amazed during the journey; I can see different things, such as mountains and the sunrise or sunset, by looking out of the window.

Multiple preposition issues: 'look out of the window' -> acceptable but 'by bus or car' is more natural than 'with the bus or car'; 'at the scenes' should be 'at the scenery' (uncountable) or 'scenes' is uncommon here; 'in the travelling session' -> 'during the journey'; 'by looking out of the windows' -> singular 'window' matches earlier. Suggestions: use 'by' for modes of transport, 'during' for time spans, use uncountable 'scenery' and keep consistent singular/plural for 'window'.

× No, I don't prefer to take the pictures of the scenery outside the car window because it is risky and we can meet any incident or accident whenever we are travelling. So I prefer to take the pictures whenever the car stops around the sceneries or the views.

✓ No, I don't prefer to take pictures of the scenery outside the car window because it is risky and we might have an accident while travelling. So I prefer to take pictures when the car stops near scenic spots or viewpoints.

Quantifier and word choice issues: 'take the pictures' -> 'take pictures' (general reference, no article); 'any incident or accident' -> 'an accident' or 'anything dangerous'; 'whenever we are travelling' -> 'while travelling' is more natural; 'around the sceneries or the views' -> 'near scenic spots or viewpoints'. Suggestions: omit definite article for general actions, use 'an' for singular incidents, prefer clearer nouns like 'scenic spots'.

× I prefer the mountains because the view is so over wind and good, we can feel calm and the nature is so pleasing that everyone enjoyed the movements at that place.

✓ I prefer the mountains because the view is refreshing and beautiful; we feel calm and the nature is so pleasing that everyone enjoys being there.

'so over wind and good' is incorrect adjective use and unclear — likely intended 'refreshing' or 'windy' and 'good' -> 'beautiful'; 'we can feel calm' -> 'we feel calm' is more natural; 'everyone enjoyed the movements at that place' is ungrammatical and unclear — corrected to 'everyone enjoys being there'. Suggestions: choose accurate adjectives ('refreshing', 'peaceful', 'beautiful'), maintain present tense for general preferences, and use clear verbs for experiences ('enjoy being there').