Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 句子意思表达清楚，但语言有些冗余和不够地道。建议在回答时先直接给出主题句，然后用一到两句具体细节支持，避免重复表达（例如“appreciation”与“appreciate”重复）；注意冠词与单复数（the beauty / the scenery 或 scenery）。可以使用连接词如 “because” 或 “so” 使句子更连贯。

Example: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy observing the city. For example, I like watching people’s daily routines and the changing architecture, which helps me feel connected to the place.

Suggestion: 回答意思明确但时态与表达不够准确或自然（“would photograph them in the future”显得不确定且不自然；“have some memories that I revisited again”有语法和措辞问题）。建议使用更直接的现在时或过去时，说明具体情境和原因，且使用连接词如 “because” 或 “so” 来衔接原因与结果。

Example: Yes, I often take photos of interesting scenery when traveling by car because it’s an easy way to preserve memories. Later, I look at those pictures to remember the places and the moments I experienced.

Suggestion: 回答不清晰且有语法与词汇错误（例如“see what I look at”, “sense of familiar and quiet”, “She has a vast UMM area”）。建议首先直接表明偏好（mountains or the sea），然后用一至两句具体原因支持，使用正确的名词和形容词，并保持句子简短清晰。避免使用不明词汇或代词指代不清。

Example: I prefer the sea because the sound of the waves helps me relax and the wide horizon feels peaceful. For instance, walking on the beach at sunset always makes me feel calm and refreshed.

× Yes, because I think that is a way of appreciation, the beauty of a certain city.

✓ Yes, because I think that is a way of appreciating the beauty of a certain city.

原句中使用名词短语“a way of appreciation, the beauty of a certain city”结构不自然。英語中常用“a way of + V-ing”來表示“...的一種方式”，因此應把“appreciation”改為動名詞“appreciating”，並把“the beauty of a certain city”作為賓語連接在後，合為“a way of appreciating the beauty of a certain city”。建議多練習“a way of + V-ing”的用法。

× You can watch the daily life of city residents and appreciate the sceneries outside the window.

✓ You can watch the daily lives of city residents and appreciate the scenery outside the window.

“daily life”應使用複數“daily lives”以匹配多個居民的生活；“sceneries”在英文中很少用作可數複數，通常用不可數“scenery”。因此將“the sceneries”改為“the scenery”，並將“daily life”改為“daily lives”。

× Yes, if the scenery is beautiful or remarkable, I would photograph them in the future.

✓ Yes, if the scenery is beautiful or remarkable, I would photograph it in the future.

“scenery”是不可數名詞，應使用單數代詞“it”而不是複數代詞“them”。此外句中時態與情態動詞“would”可接受（表達未來可能性），主要錯誤在代詞與名詞數一致，建議注意不可數名詞使用單數代詞。

× When looking at those photos, I have some memories that I revisited again.

✓ When looking at those photos, I have memories that I revisit.

原句“have some memories that I revisited again”時態混亂且有多餘的重複（revisited again）。如果想表達“看照片時會回想起回憶”，應用現在時或現在完成時。可改為“I have memories that I revisit”或“I recall memories”。同時避免使用“revisited again”造成重複。

× To be honest, I would say see what I look at.

✓ To be honest, I would say it depends on what I see.

原句語序與動詞形式不正確，“say see what I look at”不符合英語習慣。想表達“取決於我看到的東西”，常用表達是“it depends on what I see”。此外使用“look at”與“see”差別要注意，這裡用“see”更自然。

× To see it gives me the sense of familiar and quiet.

✓ Seeing it gives me a sense of familiarity and calmness.

原句中“the sense of familiar and quiet”用法錯誤。“familiar”是形容詞，要名詞形式應為“familiarity”；“quiet”作名詞時不常用，應用“calmness”或“tranquility”。另外“To see it”更自然的表達為動名詞“Seeing it”。因此改為“Seeing it gives me a sense of familiarity and calmness”。

× She has a vast UMM area and it's beautiful.

✓ It has a vast UMM area and it's beautiful.

此處前後指代不明。原句上下文在談論“the mountains or the sea”，而“She”用於指代風景不合適，應使用“It”來指代地區或地貌。另外“a vast UMM area”若“UMM”是地名或縮寫，需確認是否需要冠詞。總體建議用“It has a vast area”或直接“It is vast and beautiful”。