Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更自然、简洁，并注意句子结构与连贯性。避免口头语（如 uh, umm）并用一两句直接表达主旨，再用1句具体细节支持。例如把“atmospheric background”改为更常用表达并说明哪类景色吸引你。

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by car or bus. I especially enjoy watching the sky and the changing clouds because they can be very calming. For example, I like seeing the sun setting behind distant hills.

Suggestion: 回答要突出主句并避免重复，同时减少口头语。说明如何拍照（用手机、拍短视频）和拍照的目的，可用连接词让句子更连贯。

Example: Yes, I often take photos or short videos of the scenery from the car. If I am driving, I usually ask a passenger to take a picture for me so I can keep the memory. I mainly photograph interesting landscapes like mountains or coastal views.

Suggestion: 回答应更流畅并纠正语法与发音错误（e.g. "I have climbed a lot of mountains"）。先给出直接答案，再用一两句具体原因或经历支持，使用连接词提升逻辑性。

Example: I prefer the mountains. I enjoy hiking and have climbed many mountains in Taiwan, so I appreciate the fresh air and the sense of achievement. However, I also like the sea for relaxation when I want to unwind.

× I usually like to see the sky and watch the clouds format and dissipate.

✓ I usually like to see the sky and watch the clouds form and dissipate.

错误类型：动词 + -ing 形式/动词形式使用不当。 说明：原句中 “format” 是一个完整的动词，意思与句意不符，且这里要用不带 -ing 的动词原形或动词短语 “form and dissipate”。“watch” 后面可以接动词原形或现在分词构成小句，但常见搭配为 “watch the clouds form” 表示看见云朵形成。建议多背常用搭配（watch + 宾语 + 动词原形）并注意不要把单词写错。

× It is one of my uh, favourites habits.

✓ It is one of my favourite habits.

错误类型：形容词/名词形式使用不当。 说明：短语应为 “one of my favourite habits” —— “favourite” 修饰复数名词 “habits”，且不需要复数形式的形容词 “favourites”。此外，habit 应为单数或与 one of 搭配的复数形式放在 of 之后（habits）。建议记住固定结构 “one of my + 复数名词”。

× Even if I am driving the car, I will ask umm, one of my passenger to take photo for me because I want to uh, make some clips of my memories.

✓ Even if I am driving the car, I will ask one of my passengers to take photos for me because I want to make some clips of my memories.

错误类型：代词/名词单复数使用错误。 说明：短语应为 “one of my passengers” —— one of 后面接复数名词。并且 “photo” 在此上下文中应使用复数 “photos”，更自然。建议注意 “one of” 结构后接复数，名词复数要与上下文一致。

× So I would like to take photo of those sceneries.

✓ So I would like to take photos of those scenes.

错误类型：介词或名词搭配使用不当。 说明：英语中通常用 “take photos of” 表示拍照；“sceneries” 不是常用复数形式，常用单词 “scenery” 作不可数名词或用 “scenes” 表示具体场景。这里改为 “photos of those scenes” 更自然。建议记住 “take photos of” 的固定搭配，并区分 scenery（不可数）和 scene/scenes（可数）。

× Actually I am uh an outdoor girl so I like both mountain and sea.

✓ Actually I am an outdoor girl so I like both mountains and the sea.

错误类型：单复数问题。 说明：当表示“山”和“海”作为类别并列时，“mountain” 应为复数 “mountains”；“the sea” 更常用于泛指海。建议注意可数名词在泛指多项时使用复数形式，并且在某些固定表达中加上定冠词。

× But if I need to choose I will choose mountain.

✓ But if I need to choose I will choose the mountains.

错误类型：现在时/时态及名词形式问题。 说明：条件句中使用现在时/将来时表达将来选择是可以的，但 “mountain” 应为复数或加定冠词以指代一类事物。改为 “the mountains” 更符合英语表达习惯。建议在此类句子中把可数名词按语境改为复数或用定冠词。

× I have climbed on a lot of mountain here in Taiwan so I think IA little bit prefer the mountains.

✓ I have climbed a lot of mountains here in Taiwan so I think I a little bit prefer the mountains.

错误类型：过去时/现在完成时使用及单复数问题。 说明： 1) “climbed on a lot of mountain” 中 “climbed” 与 “a lot of” 搭配时，名词应为复数 “mountains”，且通常不加介词 on，直接说 “climbed a lot of mountains”。 2) 原句还有拼写和词序问题 “IA little bit prefer” 应为 “I a little bit prefer” 或更自然的 “I prefer the mountains a little bit.” 建议把句子整理为更自然的语序并注意现在完成时后接复数可数名词，以及避免多余介词。