Travelling— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 用词和句子结构要更自然、准确，避免重复并补充具体细节。注意时态和语法（例如 make → makes / made → make），并用连接词使表达更连贯。可以把回答控制在3-4句内：一句主题句 + 1-2句具体细节/例子。

Example: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel because the scenery helps me relax. For example, watching people and passing cars gives me something interesting to focus on, and I sometimes notice small details like shop signs or street performers that I wouldn’t see otherwise.

Suggestion: 句子要简洁自然，避免重复（例如 I I'd）。使用更地道的表达说明拍照的目的和频率，并加上具体例子（什么时候拍、拍什么）。保持不超过5句。

Example: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside because I like to keep memories of my trips. For instance, I usually take pictures of interesting buildings or sunsets when passing through a new town, so I can look back later and remember how it felt.

Suggestion: 回答整体较好，但可提高连贯性与词汇多样性。把主题句更自然地表述，并用连接词增加流畅度。可以补充一个具体例子（去过的山名或一次难忘的徒步经历）来增加细节。注意单复数（climb mountains / climb the mountain）。

Example: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and fresh air. For example, I often go hiking with friends on weekends to nearby trails, where the green trees and quiet atmosphere help me unwind after a busy week.

× the scenery outside can often made me relax, make me relax.

✓ the scenery outside can often make me relax.

句中使用了情态动词短语“can often”后，动词应使用原形。原句使用了过去分词/过去式“made”，与情态动词搭配不正确。建议记住：情态动词（can/could/may/might等）后接动词原形。

× For example seeing the moving cars and people can always want me up.

✓ For example, seeing the moving cars and people can always wake me up.

原句结构和用词错误：动词短语“want me up”在此语境不合适，正确应为“wake me up”（使我醒来／让我振奋）。此外，缺少逗号以分隔插入短语。建议学习常见动词搭配，并注意用逗号分隔引导性副词短语。

× I often take photos of the sceneries outside because I I'd like to keep these memories in a photo so when I see these photos I can remember this beautiful experience.

✓ I often take photos of the scenery outside because I'd like to keep these memories in photos, so when I see them I can remember this beautiful experience.

“scenery”是不可数名词，不能用复数“sceneries”；此外重复使用“a photo”与复数“photos”不一致，使用复数“photos”或不可数表述更自然；代词指代用“them”更简洁。建议把不可数名词单数形式记住，并保证代词和名词数的一致性。

× I prefer mountains because I like climbing the mountain.

✓ I prefer the mountains because I like climbing mountains.

习惯搭配：谈论一般事物时常用复数形式“mountains”或在特定情境加定冠词“the mountains”。原句中“climbing the mountain”暗示特定某座山，与前半句不一致。建议将两处统一为复数或在上下文明确特定时使用定冠词。

× Being surrounded by the fresh air and green trees can help me relax, and I often climb the mountain with my friends at weekends.

✓ Being surrounded by fresh air and green trees helps me relax, and I often climb mountains with my friends at weekends.

“can help me relax”虽不是错误，但与事实陈述更自然用一般现在时“helps me relax”；另外“the fresh air”可省冠词为“fresh air”，更自然；“climb the mountain”应改为复数“climb mountains”以保持习惯搭配。建议根据事实陈述使用一般现在时，并注意冠词使用与可数/不可数名词的一致性。