Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer typing because typing have many advantages. For example, I use my smartphone typing something rude for my friends. Also I can type my.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Actually I tap on laptop keyboard everyday costs. Our laptop need to move to every office and have a meeting. So a desktop is unconvenient, then laptop keyboard when we need to move.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
Well, I can't remember the exact date, but I started learning to tap in primary schools 'cause we have a weekly car computer class and teacher touch us.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
Well, to be honest, I practiced my typing from check with my friend on laptop. It is the best and faster way to improve my speed. Yes, I often write some article on computer.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 32.0Suggestion: 句子有多处语法错误和用词不当,内容也不够具体或恰当。回答应直接给出观点(我更喜欢打字),然后用1–2个明确、相关且礼貌的理由支撑,注意主谓一致、时态和搭配,并避免不合适的例子。控制在不超过5句内。
Example: I prefer typing because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write notes or emails I can quickly correct mistakes and reorganize ideas. It also helps me save documents digitally for easy access.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 38.0Suggestion: 回答有逻辑但表达混乱,词汇使用和句子结构有问题。应先直接回答(我每天用笔记本),然后用清晰连贯的原因说明:便携、开会携带方便等。注意单复数、一致性和连词使用,使句子自然且不冗长。
Example: I use a laptop keyboard every day because I often move between offices and attend meetings. A laptop is portable and allows me to work anywhere, unlike a desktop which is fixed in one place.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 回答含糊且存在词汇误用(如car computer, teacher touch us),需要更准确和礼貌的表达。应给出大致时间(e.g. primary school)并用清晰的细节说明学习方式(课堂练习、老师教授、练习软件等)。保持句子简短且连贯。
Example: I can't remember the exact year, but I started learning to type in primary school. We had a weekly computer class where the teacher showed us basic typing exercises and we practiced using typing software.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 36.0Suggestion: 答案意思能理解但表达不流畅且有语法问题。应先回答方法(练习打字、用练习软件、写文章),然后用连词解释原因和具体做法(与朋友比拼、定时练习、使用线上课程等)。避免模糊短语,句子不超过5句。
Example: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing tests and by writing articles on my computer. Sometimes I challenge friends to typing races, which motivates me and helps increase my speed and accuracy.
× I prefer typing because typing have many advantages.
✓ I prefer typing because typing has many advantages.
这是主谓一致错误。主语“typing”(不可数名词或动名词)在句中作主语,应使用单数动词“has”。建议记住动名词或不可数名词作主语时动词用第三人称单数形式。
× For example, I use my smartphone typing something rude for my friends.
✓ For example, I use my smartphone to type something quickly for my friends.
原句结构不正确且动词形式使用混乱。动词短语应为“use ... to do ...”表示用途,而不是直接跟现在分词。建议用“use + 物 + to + 动词原形”或改为完整的从句;另外根据语境把“rude”改为更合适的副词或形容词短语(此处我改为“quickly”作为示例)。
× Also I can type my.
✓ Also I can type on my phone.
原句缺少宾语或介词短语,导致句子不完整。应明确“type”后接宾语或说明在何处打字,比如“type on my phone”或“type messages”。建议写完整的宾语或介词短语来表达意思。
× Actually I tap on laptop keyboard everyday costs.
✓ Actually I tap on my laptop keyboard every day.
原句中“everyday costs”错误并且“every day”为时间副词短语应分开写。还有缺少冠词“my”或“the”。建议把时间副词放在句尾并使用“every day”。
× Our laptop need to move to every office and have a meeting.
✓ Our laptop needs to be moved to every office for meetings.
原句主谓不一致且语态不当。若要表达“笔记本需要被搬到各办公室参加会议”,应使用被动结构“needs to be moved”并将“have a meeting”改为复数或用不定式短语“for meetings”。建议注意主语单数时动词用第三人称单数形式,并根据需要使用被动语态。
× So a desktop is unconvenient, then laptop keyboard when we need to move.
✓ So a desktop is inconvenient; we use a laptop keyboard when we need to move.
原句拼写“unconvenient”错误且句子连接混乱。应把两部分分清,用分号或连词连接,并保持逻辑顺序。建议注意拼写并将句子重新组织为主谓结构完整的两部分。
× Well, I can't remember the exact date, but I started learning to tap in primary schools 'cause we have a weekly car computer class and teacher touch us.
✓ Well, I can't remember the exact date, but I started learning to type in primary school because we had a weekly computer class and the teacher taught us.
多处时态和词汇错误:1) “started”是过去时,后面的时间状语应与之对应,故将“have”改为过去时“had”;2) “tap”在此处应为“type”;3) 单复数和冠词问题,“primary schools”改为“primary school”更自然;4) “teacher touch us”应为过去式“the teacher taught us”。建议保持叙述时态一致,使用正确动词形式并注意冠词与名词单复数。
× Well, to be honest, I practiced my typing from check with my friend on laptop.
✓ Well, to be honest, I practiced my typing by practicing with my friend on a laptop.
原句表达混乱,“from check with”不是正确短语。可用“by + -ing”结构表示方式,或说“I practiced my typing by checking with my friend”取决于原意。建议使用正确的方式短语如“by practicing with”或“by checking with”。
× It is the best and faster way to improve my speed.
✓ It is the best and fastest way to improve my speed.
原句中形容词比较级使用混乱,同时“best”是最高级,“faster”是比较级,两者不能并列使用。应使用“best and fastest”或仅用“the best”或“the fastest”。建议注意比较级与最高级的使用规则,若并列应一致使用级别。
× Yes, I often write some article on computer.
✓ Yes, I often write some articles on the computer.
名词“article”若表示泛指应使用复数“articles”。另外“on computer”缺少冠词,应为“on the computer”。如果想强调写作行为,也可说“I often write articles on my computer”。建议注意可数名词复数形式和冠词使用。