Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer typing because it's more faster and inventiveness than handwriting. When I have an essay or report to write, it can say help me save more time and easier for me to editing and mistakes.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
I prefer to type on laptop keyboard everyday because it's more easier for me to carry the laptop to everywhere I want to work. Can you help me work more efficiently?
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
I first learned typing on keyboard when I'm in primary school. We have UH classes for teaching this and I learn a lot of techniques with foster typing on those classes.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
I trust practice makes perfect, so I always, uh, write my report or essay on a laptop to give me more, umm, to give me more chances to practice.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 56.0Suggestion: 用更自然、简洁且语法正确的句子直接回答问题。避免语法错误(例如比较级、冠词、动词形式)和多余词汇;提供一到两条具体理由并用连接词衔接,控制在最多五句内。可以说明具体情境(写论文、记笔记)和具体好处(速度、更方便修改、易于保存)。
Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it’s faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write essays or reports I can quickly correct mistakes and reorganize paragraphs, which saves a lot of time.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 直接回答并说明原因,避免无关的请求或重复。修正形容词和副词用法(easier、every day),并用连接词扩展说明如何使用笔记本(如地点、场景)以及笔记本的优点(便携、续航)。将句子控制在不超过五句。
Example: I usually type on a laptop because it’s portable and convenient. I often work in cafes or at university, so being able to carry my laptop makes it much easier to work anywhere.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 用正确的时态和更清晰的表达说明时间点和学习方式,纠正语法(过去式、介词和冠词)。可以简短描述课程内容或练习方法,用连接词使句子连贯。避免拼写错误或不明词语(如UH)。
Example: I first learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school. We had computer classes where the teacher taught typing techniques and we practiced regularly with timed exercises.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 避免填充词(uh, umm),用简洁有力的话说明具体做法。可以提到具体练习方法(在线练习、盲打练习、定时练习)以及练习频率和效果,用连接词解释因果关系,保持回答自然且不冗长。
Example: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice: I type reports and essays on my laptop and also use online typing programs for timed drills. This helps me increase both speed and accuracy over time.
× I prefer typing because it's more faster and inventiveness than handwriting.
✓ I prefer typing because it's faster and more inventive than handwriting.
原句中“more faster”属于形容词比较级重复使用(错误地同时使用more和-er形式),应只用“faster”。此外“inventiveness”是名词,用来比较需用形容词“inventive”,并且比较级结构中形容词前的“more”应与可比较的形容词搭配,故改为“more inventive”。建议:当比较两个事物时,短音节形容词用“-er”(fast→faster),较长形容词用“more + 形容词”(inventive→more inventive)。
× When I have an essay or report to write, it can say help me save more time and easier for me to editing and mistakes.
✓ When I have an essay or report to write, it can help me save time and make it easier for me to edit and avoid mistakes.
原句句子结构混乱:1) “it can say help me”中“say”毫无必要且错误;2) “save more time and easier for me to editing and mistakes”并列结构不一致:前半部分是动词短语(save time),后半部分用形容词“easier”后接不定式或动名词需保持一致,且“editing and mistakes”搭配错误,应为“edit and avoid mistakes”。因此将句子调整为并列且语法一致的结构。建议:保持并列成分的语法形式一致(动词短语对动词短语),不要插入无意义词。
× I prefer to type on laptop keyboard everyday because it's more easier for me to carry the laptop to everywhere I want to work.
✓ I prefer to type on a laptop keyboard every day because it's easier for me to carry the laptop wherever I want to work.
问题包含几处:1) “on laptop keyboard”缺少冠词,应为“on a laptop keyboard”(但按指示只修正符合问题列表的项,本处主要为副词/形容词及副词位置错误);2) “everyday”是形容词,表示“日常的”,表示频率应使用副词短语“every day”;3) “more easier”为比较级重复(见前例),应为“easier”;4) “to everywhere I want to work”中介词使用不当,常用“wherever”或“everywhere”无需“to”。综合改为“every day”与“wherever”。建议:区分“everyday”(形容词)和“every day”(副词短语),并避免重复比较结构。
× I first learned typing on keyboard when I'm in primary school.
✓ I first learned to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school.
原句时态混用:主句用过去式“learned”,从句却用现在时“I'm”,应保持一致使用过去时,故改为“was”。另外,习惯搭配为“learned to type”或“learned typing”,以及名词前加定冠词“the keyboard”。建议:叙述过去经历时,主句和时间状语从句均使用过去时。
× We have UH classes for teaching this and I learn a lot of techniques with foster typing on those classes.
✓ We had computer classes that taught this, and I learned a lot of techniques to improve my typing in those classes.
原句问题包括时态与量词/搭配不当:按上下文为过去经历,应使用过去时(have→had,learn→learned)。“UH”不明,应改为“computer”或上下文合适词(在这里只做合理替换)。“with foster typing”搭配错误,意图为“to improve typing”或“to foster my typing skills”。建议:使用合适的动词短语“improve my typing”并保持时态一致。
× I trust practice makes perfect, so I always, uh, write my report or essay on a laptop to give me more, umm, to give me more chances to practice.
✓ I believe practice makes perfect, so I always write my reports or essays on a laptop to give myself more chances to practice.
原句问题:1) “I trust”在此可用但“believe”更常用;2) “write my report or essay”数一致性问题,若泛指应使用复数“reports or essays”;3) “to give me more... to give me more chances”重复且不自然,应使用反身代词“myself”表示动作对自己的影响;4) 动名词相关用法保持“chances to practice”。根据问题列表应修正动词+ing形式相关错误(使用反身代词及动名词搭配)。建议:避免重复,使用反身代词“myself”,并保持名词数一致。