Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
Well I'd like to type in more because I think it's more convenient and efficient for our daily life. I have my laptop and and it's really a good way to save save time and do homework by type.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
For now, I type on my keyboard every day because I have a lot of homework to do and I'm typing on the keyboards can check my spell, check my spell and more convenient and it it can save my time to finish my documents.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
Uh, when I was young, uh, my pro primary school, we have a computer lessons and we use a app called the Golden Mountain typing Appli application and it can umm, help us to umm, improve our typing skills.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
To be honest, I have a a really good typing skills now. I can type really quick. But I think there's a way to improve your typing skill by practicing more and reading more and and use the keyboard more often.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: 回答要更简洁且结构化:先直接给出立场(I prefer typing),然后用一到两句具体原因支持,避免重复和语法错误。可以加入具体例子或场景增强说服力。练习时注意句子连贯和去掉填充词(uh, um, and and)。
Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's more convenient and efficient. For example, I can quickly edit documents on my laptop and use spell-check to avoid mistakes, which saves time when I do homework.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答应先明确设备(desktop or laptop),然后给出一到两条具体原因,避免重复表达和语法错误。使用连接词(for example, because, so)使句子更连贯。练习时注意主谓一致和去掉冗余词。
Example: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I do a lot of homework on it. For example, the laptop lets me use spell-check and easily edit documents, so I can finish my work faster.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: 回答要更准确并减少填充语:先给出时间点(e.g. when I was in primary school),然后说明学习方式和具体工具或课程的名称并简要描述其作用。注意发音单词拼写(application)和句子连贯。
Example: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had computer lessons and used an application called Golden Mountain Typing, which helped us practice finger placement and increase our speed.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答应先直接回答方法,然后给出具体可操作的步骤或技巧(例如练习指法、使用在线练习网站、设置每天练习时间等),并避免重复。用连接词(first, then, finally)使步骤清晰。
Example: To improve typing, I practice regularly using online typing programs. First, I do 15 minutes of touch-typing exercises daily, then I practice typing real texts like articles to build speed and accuracy.
× Well I'd like to type in more because I think it's more convenient and efficient for our daily life.
✓ Well, I'd like to type more because I think it's more convenient and efficient for daily life.
句中“type in more”与意图不符且多余,此外“our daily life”用复数搭配不自然,常用“daily life”泛指日常生活。改为“type more”和“daily life”更地道。建议:去掉多余介词“in”,把“our daily life”改为“daily life”。
× I have my laptop and and it's really a good way to save save time and do homework by type.
✓ I have my laptop, and it's a really good way to save time and do homework by typing.
原句有重复词“and and”“save save”,且“by type”使用错误。此处应使用动名词“typing”表示方式。根据列表,应修改为动名词(项8)但本条主要为冠词/用法错误(22:Article errors)和形式错误,故把“type”改为“typing”,并去掉重复单词并加逗号。
× For now, I type on my keyboard every day because I have a lot of homework to do and I'm typing on the keyboards can check my spell, check my spell and more convenient and it it can save my time to finish my documents.
✓ For now, I type on my keyboard every day because I have a lot of homework to do. Typing on the keyboard can check my spelling, is more convenient, and it can save me time to finish my documents.
原句结构混乱,存在主谓不一致和重复(“check my spell, check my spell”)、冠词与复数问题(“the keyboards”应为“the keyboard”或“a keyboard”),以及代词/宾语位置错误(“save my time”更常见为“save me time”)。将长句拆分并调整动词形式和名词(spelling)使主谓一致并更通顺。
× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
✓ When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
该句为考官问句,时态正确,无需修改。
× Uh, when I was young, uh, my pro primary school, we have a computer lessons and we use a app called the Golden Mountain typing Appli application and it can umm, help us to umm, improve our typing skills.
✓ When I was young, at my primary school we had computer lessons and we used an app called the Golden Mountain typing application, and it helped us improve our typing skills.
原句时态混用(现在时“we have”、“we use”与过去时间“when I was young”矛盾),且有冠词错误(“a app”应为“an app”)、复数/单数搭配(“a computer lessons”应为“computer lessons”或“a computer lesson”)、冗余词(“Appli application”重复)和不必要填充词。修改为过去时并修正冠词与名词形式。
× To be honest, I have a a really good typing skills now.
✓ To be honest, I have really good typing skills now.
原句有重复冠词“a a”且名词短语与冠词不匹配(“a … skills”不对,skills为复数不需不定冠词)。去掉多余冠词即可。
× I can type really quick.
✓ I can type really quickly.
“quick”是形容词,而在修饰动词“type”时应使用副词“quickly”。建议将形容词改为副词以正确修饰动词。
× But I think there's a way to improve your typing skill by practicing more and reading more and and use the keyboard more often.
✓ But I think there are ways to improve your typing skills by practicing more, reading more, and using the keyboard more often.
原句存在主谓与数的错误(“there's a way”可接受但后面列举多个方法时用复数更自然)、名词单复数一致(“typing skill”改为复数“typing skills”与列举方法一致)、并列结构中动词形式不一致(“practicing... and use...”应统一为动名词形式)。同时去掉重复“and”。建议统一使用复数并保持并列项形式一致。