Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
Will I into typing rather than handwriting cause use computer typing is more convenient in nowadays?
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Actually I use laptop keyboard every day 'cause when I was studying the laptop keyboard is more convenient and faster.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
Well, back then about my primary school, I first used the keyboard. My teacher touched me how to use it and on the computer class.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
Well, why was I tried in the primary school? My teacher taught me how to use it and help my teacher help me to improve the speech and the vocabulary.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 表达要直接且语法正确。先给出明确的观点(如 “I prefer typing”),然后用一到两句具体原因支持,避免语法错误和冗长。可以使用连接词如 because / since / as 来衔接原因。保持在3-4句以内。
Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because typing is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit and save documents easily on a computer. Besides, typed notes are easier to organize and search later.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答要更自然、时态准确并给出简短理由或细节。先直接回答(I use a laptop),然后用because补充1-2个具体原因或场景。避免口语缩写过多,注意句子连贯。
Example: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it's portable and convenient. For instance, I can take it to classes and work from different places, which makes studying and typing faster.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 先给出明确时间(e.g. in primary school / when I was at primary school),然后描述具体学习经历并用连接词如 when / where / because。注意动词选择和语序(teacher taught me)。保持答案简洁且逻辑清晰。
Example: I learned to type when I was in primary school during computer class. My teacher taught us basic typing skills and I practiced with simple exercises until I became faster.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 问题询问现在如何提高打字技能,回答应聚焦在具体方法(如练习软件、在线课程、每天练习)。先直接回答(I improve my typing by...),然后举1-2个具体例子并说明效果。避免无关内容(speech/vocabulary 无关)。
Example: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing programs like TypingClub and setting daily goals for speed and accuracy. I also practice touch-typing exercises and monitor my progress to reduce errors.
× Will I into typing rather than handwriting cause use computer typing is more convenient in nowadays?
✓ I prefer typing rather than handwriting because using a computer is more convenient nowadays.
该句有多个问题,主要是情态动词/句式误用和句子结构混乱。原句用“Will I”错误地把疑问句形式放入陈述句;“cause”用法不当,想表达原因应使用“because”;“use computer typing”词序和搭配错误,应为“using a computer”或“computer typing”;“in nowadays”冗余且介词不当,应为“nowadays”。建议:用陈述句直接表达偏好,使用 because 引出原因,注意动词-ing形式作非谓语动词或名词短语。
× Actually I use laptop keyboard every day 'cause when I was studying the laptop keyboard is more convenient and faster.
✓ Actually I use a laptop keyboard every day because when I was studying, the laptop keyboard was more convenient and faster.
主要问题是现在分词/时态和冠词使用。应使用“a laptop keyboard”而非省略冠词;原句时态混用,既说现在(use...every day)又讲过去原因(when I was studying),因此在从句中动词应使用过去时“was”。此外省略了逗号使句子难懂。建议:注意冠词 a/the 的使用,保持主句和从句时态一致,并用 because 连接原因从句。
× Well, back then about my primary school, I first used the keyboard. My teacher touched me how to use it and on the computer class.
✓ Well, back in primary school, I first used the keyboard. My teacher taught me how to use it in computer class.
主要是过去时和动词选择错误。“back then about my primary school”表达冗长且不自然,改为“back in primary school”。“touched me”是错误动词,正确应为“taught me”。另外“on the computer class”介词错误,应为“in computer class”。建议:选择正确的过去时动词 taught,并使用固定搭配 in class/back in primary school。
× Well, why was I tried in the primary school? My teacher taught me how to use it and help my teacher help me to improve the speech and the vocabulary.
✓ Well, when I was in primary school, my teacher taught me how to use it and helped me improve my speaking and vocabulary.
句子结构混乱。原句“why was I tried in the primary school?”不合逻辑且时态颠倒,意图应该是说明在小学学会的时间,改为“When I was in primary school”。第二句里“and help my teacher help me to improve”重复且语序错误,应为“helped me improve”并使用过去时与前文一致;“the speech”用词不当,应为“speaking”。建议:理清时间状语从句的位置,使用正确的过去时形式和动词短语(help someone do sth),简洁地表达“提高口语和词汇”。