Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
Well in the past I used to like handwriting because I was very familiar with the I'm junior high study life so I prefer hot writing. But nowadays I use computer for most of the time so I know I change to typing is more convenient and less.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Absolutely the laptop, because nowadays without a muse desktop is not very convenient and not so portable as a laptop. And when I was in university I always carried my laptop here and there, so it's very convenient for my study time, so I usually use it laptop.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
Well, actually I, uh, didn't have take any specific lessons for uh, typing. It's just the practice makes it perfect. And when I entered the university, I had a lot of homework that need to be done at a laptop. So at that time, I just gradually master the skills and type it more accurately and.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
What I think is just that practice makes perfect. We don't need to take some specific lessons to practice our skills. We need just to tap more each day and find some useful website and to record our test speed and gradually we will find we have made a lot of progress on it.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 用简洁、连贯的句子直接回答,避免冗余和不准确的表达。注意时态和词汇选择(如 "prefer handwriting"、"I switched to typing")。可以先给出主观点,再用一两句具体原因作支持,最多不超过五句。
Example: I used to prefer handwriting when I was in junior high because I was more comfortable with it. However, I now type most of the time since using a computer is more convenient and faster for writing and editing.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 64.0Suggestion: 回答要直接并用连贯的原因支持,避免语法和发音错误写入文字(如 "without a muse" 无意义)。可用连接词(because, so, therefore)使结构清晰。注意代词和冠词("use a laptop")。
Example: I usually type on a laptop because it's portable and convenient. When I was at university I carried it everywhere, so it became my main tool for studying and doing assignments.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 少用口头语(uh, well),注意语法(如 "didn't take any lessons"、"practice made it perfect"、"homework that needed"、"gradually mastered the skill")。保持句子简短且逻辑清晰,先给出时间点,再说明方式与过程。
Example: I didn't take formal typing lessons; I learned mainly at university. Because I had a lot of computer-based assignments, I practiced a lot and gradually mastered typing, becoming more accurate over time.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 66.0Suggestion: 回答要具体说明方法并用连词组织(for example, by doing X, by using Y)。注意用词准确("type" not "tap"),语法("record our test speed" 可更自然为 "track my typing speed")。给出一两条具体可操作的提升方法。
Example: I improve my typing mainly through daily practice and using online typing websites. For example, I practice for 20 minutes a day on typing.com, track my typing speed, and focus on exercises for accuracy and common key combinations.
× Well in the past I used to like handwriting because I was very familiar with the I'm junior high study life so I prefer hot writing.
✓ Well, in the past I used to like handwriting because I was very familiar with my junior high school life, so I preferred handwriting.
句子结构混乱且含有多处词语使用错误:“the I'm junior high study life” 不合逻辑,应为“my junior high school life”;“I prefer hot writing” 是拼写/用词错误,应为“preferred handwriting” 与前半句过去时一致。建议:理清句子主干(主语+谓语+宾语),注意代词与名词短语的正确搭配,并保持时态一致。
× But nowadays I use computer for most of the time so I know I change to typing is more convenient and less.
✓ But nowadays I use a computer most of the time, so I know switching to typing is more convenient and easier.
原句时态和表达不自然:应使用一般现在时(I use a computer),并用名词/动名词短语或动词-ing结构表示动作(switching to typing);“less” 后需比较对象或改为“easier”。建议:用正确的名词冠词(a computer),使用动名词表达转换,并选择合适的形容词来比较。
× Absolutely the laptop, because nowadays without a muse desktop is not very convenient and not so portable as a laptop.
✓ Absolutely a laptop, because nowadays a desktop is not very convenient and is not as portable as a laptop.
原句中“the laptop”与冠词使用不当,应为“不带特指”的“a laptop”;“without a muse desktop” 是语误(多余词或拼写错),应为“a desktop”。还需保持谓语完整(is not ... and is not ...)。建议:注意冠词的使用,删除无意义词并保持句子谓语一致。
× And when I was in university I always carried my laptop here and there, so it's very convenient for my study time, so I usually use it laptop.
✓ When I was at university I always carried my laptop here and there, so it was very convenient for my study; therefore I usually used my laptop.
原句重复使用连接词“so”,并且时态不一致(前句过去时,后句却用现在时);“use it laptop” 语序错误且多余代词。建议:保持时态一致,避免重复连接词,使用正确的代词或直接用名词(my laptop)。
× Well, actually I, uh, didn't have take any specific lessons for uh, typing.
✓ Well, actually I didn't take any specific lessons for typing.
“didn't have take” 是助动词与实义动词重复错误。英语否定过去式用 did not + 动词原形,因此应去掉“have”。建议:在过去否定句中使用 did not + 动词原形,避免多余助动词。
× It's just the practice makes it perfect.
✓ It's just that practice makes perfect.
“the practice” 和“it perfect” 使用不当。习惯表达为“practice makes perfect”,前面可加“it's just that”。建议:学习并使用固定搭配短语。
× And when I entered the university, I had a lot of homework that need to be done at a laptop.
✓ And when I entered university, I had a lot of homework that needed to be done on a laptop.
关系从句中谓语时态应与主句过去时一致,故“need”应为过去式“needed”;介词应为“on a laptop”而不是“at a laptop”。建议:时态保持一致,注意常用介词搭配(do homework on a laptop)。
× So at that time, I just gradually master the skills and type it more accurately and.
✓ So at that time, I just gradually mastered the skills and learned to type more accurately.
动词时态需为过去式(mastered);“type it” 中“it”多余,应使用不定式“learned to type” 或直接“typed more accurately”。句末不完整,“and” 后无内容。建议:保持时态一致,删除多余代词,补全句子结构。
× What I think is just that practice makes perfect.
✓ What I think is that practice makes perfect.
原句多余“just”;保持句子简洁更自然。建议:在此处省略“just”以保持正式表达。
× We don't need to take some specific lessons to practice our skills.
✓ We don't need to take any specific lessons to practice our skills.
否定句中搭配“some”不自然,应使用“any”。建议:在否定句或疑问句中用“any”替代“some”。
× We need just to tap more each day and find some useful website and to record our test speed and gradually we will find we have made a lot of progress on it.
✓ We just need to type more each day, find some useful websites, and record our test speed; gradually we will find that we have made a lot of progress.
原句中“tap” 用词不当,应为“type”;“website” 需复数以匹配语境;并列结构中动词形式应一致(type, find, record),不需要重复“to”。最后“progress on it” 不自然,改为“made a lot of progress”。建议:使用正确词汇,保持并列结构动词形式一致,注意名词单复数和自然搭配。