Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문법과 자연스러운 표현을 고쳐야 합니다. 현재 문장은 문법 오류(예: 'to typing', 'I tend to take mistake', 중복된 'handwriting handwrite')와 어색한 어휘 사용이 있습니다. 간단한 주제문으로 직접적으로 답하고, 이유를 두세 개의 구체적 세부사항으로 연결어로 이어 말하세요. 예: 'I prefer typing because it's faster and more accurate. Also, typed notes are easier to organize and search later.'처럼 표현하세요. 또한 문장 수는 3문장 내외로 유지하고 불필요한 반복을 피하세요.

Example: I prefer typing because it’s faster and usually more accurate. For example, I can correct mistakes quickly and organize notes on my computer. In addition, typed documents are easier to search when I need information later.

Suggestion: 중복과 문법 오류를 바로잡고 자연스러운 이유 제시를 연습하세요. 현재 문장은 반복('I use laptop keyboard'와 'I prefer laptop keyboard')과 문법 오류('so laptop keyboard is get along with me')가 있습니다. 주제문을 한 번만 말하고, 한두 개의 구체적 이유를 연결어로 설명하세요. 예: 'I use a laptop keyboard because it’s shallow and comfortable, which helps me type faster.'처럼 말하세요.

Example: I use a laptop keyboard every day because it’s compact and the keys are shallow, so it’s more comfortable for long typing sessions. As a result, I can type faster and feel less strain on my wrists.

Suggestion: 기본 정보는 잘 전달했지만 문법과 연결 표현을 더 자연스럽게 다듬으세요. 'have'→'had' 등 시제 일치와 자연스러운 연결어 사용을 연습하세요. 추가로 간단한 배경을 한 문장 더 덧붙이면 좋습니다(예: 어떤 방식으로 배웠는지).

Example: I learned how to type about 15 years ago at elementary school. They had basic computer classes where we practiced typing exercises, so I became familiar with the keyboard early on.

Suggestion: 발음이나 반복을 줄이고 문장을 명확하게 구성하세요. 'Bible typing'이 의미하는 바가 불명확하므로 정확한 활동을 명시하세요(예: typing practice app, online exercises). 또한, 현재완료/과거 시제와 기능 설명을 정확히 사용하세요. 한두 문장으로 방법과 효과를 연결해 설명하세요.

Example: I improve my typing by using a typing practice app that offers daily exercises and records my speed and accuracy. Using the app regularly has helped me reduce mistakes and increase my words-per-minute score.

× I prefer to typing.

✓ I prefer typing.

The verb 'prefer' is followed by either the gerund (verb+ing) or the infinitive without 'to' rarely; the correct form is 'prefer typing'. Use: prefer + verb-ing. Suggestion: say 'I prefer typing.'

× It is faster than handwriting and I tend to take mistake when I handwriting handwrite.

✓ It is faster than handwriting and I tend to make mistakes when I handwrite.

'Take mistake' is not correct in English; the correct expression is 'make a mistake' or 'make mistakes'. Also 'handwriting' is a noun meaning the style of writing by hand; the verb form is 'handwrite'. Use plural 'mistakes' with 'make' for habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'make mistakes' and the verb 'handwrite'.

× Yes, I use laptop keyboard and I prefer laptop keyboard.

✓ Yes, I use a laptop keyboard and I prefer a laptop keyboard.

Countable singular nouns like 'laptop keyboard' need an article ('a' or 'the') when mentioned generally. Use 'a laptop keyboard' for one unspecified keyboard. Suggestion: include the indefinite article 'a'.

× I like the I I don't like deep keyboard so laptop keyboard is get along with me.

✓ I don't like deep keyboards, so a laptop keyboard suits me.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'deep keyboard' likely means 'deep keys' or 'deep keyboard' but 'keyboards' should be plural; 'get along with me' is incorrect for objects—use 'suits me' or 'gets on well with me' (for people). Also remove duplicate words and add 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. Suggestion: say 'I don't like deep keyboards, so a laptop keyboard suits me.'

× I learned it about 15 years ago.

✓ I learned it about 15 years ago.

This sentence is grammatically correct for expressing a past action. No change needed. Suggestion: none.

× The elementary school have classes for computer, so I learned typing there.

✓ The elementary school has computer classes, so I learned typing there.

Subject 'the elementary school' is singular and needs the singular verb 'has' not 'have'. Also 'classes for computer' is awkward; use 'computer classes'. Suggestion: use 'has' and reorder to 'computer classes'.

× I practiced the Bible typing by application.

✓ I practiced typing from the Bible using an app.

'Practice' is followed by a gerund: 'practiced typing'. 'The Bible typing' is awkward; better: 'typing from the Bible'. 'By application' is non-idiomatic; use 'using an app'. Suggestion: 'I practiced typing from the Bible using an app.'

× I can, I I could, I could.

✓ It recorded my speed and accuracy.

The original fragment 'I can, I I could, I could.' is incomplete and unclear. Based on context, the student likely meant that the app recorded performance. Provide a clear, complete sentence: 'It recorded my speed and accuracy.' Suggestion: state the app's function in one clear sentence.

× It recorded my speed and correction.

✓ It recorded my speed and accuracy.

'Correction' is not the appropriate noun here; 'accuracy' or 'errors' fits better. 'Recorded my speed and accuracy' clearly describes what a typing app measures. Suggestion: use 'accuracy' or 'number of errors'.