Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural, grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, fix grammar (e.g. "more easy" → "easier"), and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it under five sentences.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's much faster and more convenient for long documents. Moreover, it's easier to edit and share my work with classmates and teachers, which helps when I collaborate on group projects.

Suggestion: Use a clear topic sentence and precise vocabulary (e.g. "use" or "type on" instead of "tap"). Remove repetition and give a specific reason or example. Use a linking word to connect ideas and keep it concise.

Example: I type on my laptop every day because I often move between home and school. For example, the laptop lets me finish assignments on the bus or in the library, so I don't have to carry paper and pens.

Suggestion: Provide a complete, grammatically correct response with a clear time reference and one specific detail about the learning experience. Use past tense consistently and avoid unfinished sentences.

Example: I learned to type in middle school during a computer class when I was about 12 years old. The teacher showed us touch-typing techniques, and I found it exciting because I could suddenly finish essays much faster.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence about your method to improve, use specific activities as examples, and avoid filler words like "uh." Use a linking word to connect the general strategy with concrete examples.

Example: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For instance, I type all my homework and school reports on the laptop, and I also use online typing exercises to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I definitely prefer typing because it's much faster and convenient, especially for long documents.

✓ I definitely prefer typing because it's much faster and more convenient, especially for long documents.

The adjective phrase compares two qualities and requires a parallel form: 'much faster and convenient' mixes an adverb ('much') with two adjectives but omits 'more' before 'convenient'. Use 'more convenient' to make the comparison parallel and grammatically correct. Suggestion: Use parallel comparative forms (e.g., 'faster and more convenient').

× What's more easy to edit and share with others with my work, which is very important for my study.

✓ It is also easier to edit and share my work with others, which is very important for my studies.

The original sentence has awkward structure and incorrect word order. 'What's more easy to edit...' is ungrammatical; use 'It is also easier to...' and place 'with others' after 'share' for clarity. 'My study' should be pluralized to 'my studies' in this context to mean academic work. Suggestion: Use clear subject + verb structure and correct word order: 'It is easier to edit and share my work with others.'

× I tap on laptop every day because I need to go different places and the laptop keyboard is very convenient for me because I can tap whatever I want and I don't need to handwrite.

✓ I type on my laptop every day because I need to go to different places, and the laptop keyboard is very convenient for me because I can type whatever I want and I don't need to handwrite.

Use the verb 'type' instead of 'tap' for keyboards. Include the article 'my' before 'laptop' and the preposition 'to' after 'go' ('go to different places'). Also use commas to separate clauses and replace 'tap' with 'type'. Suggestion: Use correct verbs and include necessary articles and prepositions: 'type on my laptop' and 'go to different places.'

× I tap on laptop every day because I need to go different places and the laptop keyboard is very convenient for me because I can tap whatever I want and I don't need to handwrite.

✓ I type on my laptop every day because I need to go to different places, and the laptop keyboard is very convenient for me because I can type whatever I want and I don't need to handwrite.

Missing article 'my' before 'laptop' and missing preposition 'to' before 'different places' cause singular/plural and article issues. 'Laptop' as a singular noun requires an article in this context. Suggestion: Include articles where required: 'my laptop'.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard at my middle school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard in middle school.

'At my middle school' is not incorrect but 'in middle school' is the more natural idiomatic expression. Maintain past tense 'learned' which is correct. Suggestion: Prefer 'in middle school' for natural phrasing.

× There is a computer class which teacher will tell us how to type in and this experience is very exciting and new because it means.

✓ There was a computer class where the teacher taught us how to type, and this experience was very exciting and new.

Use past tense to match 'I learned' (so 'was' and 'taught' rather than 'is' and 'will tell'). The relative clause should be 'where the teacher taught us how to type.' The original 'how to type in' and 'it means' are incomplete or ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use 'where' for classes and keep verb tenses consistent: 'There was a computer class where the teacher taught us how to type.'

× There is a computer class which teacher will tell us how to type in and this experience is very exciting and new because it means.

✓ There was a computer class where the teacher taught us how to type, and this experience was very exciting and new because it helped me learn an important skill.

The clause 'because it means' is incomplete and unclear. Provide a complete clause explaining why it was exciting, e.g., 'because it helped me learn an important skill.' Also change tense to past to match 'learned'. Suggestion: Complete the thought and keep tenses consistent.

× I improve my typing by, uh, I did my homework paper, uh, I did my job documents and, uh, other kind of things.

✓ I improve my typing by doing my homework, typing my work documents, and doing other kinds of tasks.

After 'improve my typing by', use the -ing form (gerund) for actions that are methods: 'by doing'. Also make nouns plural and natural: 'homework' doesn't need 'paper'; use 'work documents' and pluralize 'other kinds of tasks.' Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'by' and correct noun forms: 'by doing my homework'.

× Uh, I think, uh, practice makes perfect.

✓ I think practice makes perfect.

Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary commas. The adverb placement is fine, but the original contains disfluencies that should be omitted in a written answer. Suggestion: Omit fillers in written responses and keep the sentence concise.