Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct vocabulary/grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition (don’t repeat 'handwriting'). Fix small grammar errors (e.g., 'it allows me' → keep subject consistent) and unclear phrases like 'many font a type of words'.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient and faster. For example, typing makes correcting mistakes easy, and I can quickly change fonts and formats when I write. Therefore, I usually choose typing for notes and essays.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence, then add one specific reason and a clear future plan. Correct grammar and finish your sentence. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas and avoid incomplete phrases like 'more comfort and.'

Example: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I don't own a desktop. However, in the future I plan to buy an external keyboard so that I can type more comfortably for long periods.

Suggestion: Give a clear time reference and correct grammar. Use one linking phrase to explain where or how you learned. Avoid filler words like 'you know' and unclear terms like 'technology called collection'. Be specific about the class or method.

Example: I learned to type on a keyboard several years ago when I took an information technology class at school. The teacher showed us proper finger placement and we practised with typing exercises weekly.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific methods with correct vocabulary. Replace 'tapping' with 'typing', remove hesitations like 'umm', and explain what the website does (timed tests, progress tracking). Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'also'.

Example: I improve my typing by practising regularly to increase both speed and accuracy. For example, I use a website called '10 Finger Typing' that offers timed tests and progress reports, and I also do daily drills focusing on accuracy.

× I would say that I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much more convenient compared to handwriting.

✓ I would say that I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much more convenient than handwriting.

Using 'compared to' is not wrong but redundant after 'more convenient'. Use 'than' for direct comparisons: 'more convenient than handwriting'. This is stylistic and reduces repetition.

× It allows me to correct mistakes and also al allows me to use many font a type of words.

✓ It allows me to correct mistakes and also allows me to use many fonts and different word styles.

This sentence has word choice and form errors: 'al allows' is a typo, 'font' should be plural 'fonts' when referring to many, and 'a type of words' is incorrect — use 'different word styles' or 'different fonts and styles'. Correcting these makes the sentence grammatical and clear.

× I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I don't own a desktop computer, but in the future I would definitely buy an external keyboard so that I could type more comfort and.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I don't own a desktop computer, but in the future I will definitely buy an external keyboard so that I can type more comfortably.

Several issues: 'would definitely buy' is unnecessary conditional for a planned future action — use 'will'. 'So that I could' should be 'so that I can' to match the future intention. 'More comfort' is a noun; the adverb 'more comfortably' is required to modify 'type'. Removed trailing 'and' to finish the sentence.

× I learned how to type it on a keyboard several years ago.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard several years ago.

'Learned how to type it on a keyboard' contains an extra pronoun 'it' that is unnecessary. Remove 'it' to make the verb phrase correct and natural: 'learned how to type on a keyboard'.

× You know I have a technology called collection in class and teachers taught me to type on keyboards.

✓ I had a technology class called 'Collection' in school, and the teachers taught me to type on keyboards.

Original has incorrect word order and article use. 'I have a technology called collection in class' should be past tense 'I had a technology class called Collection' to match 'several years ago'. Add 'the' before 'teachers' or 'the teachers' for clarity, and 'in school' is clearer than 'in class' here. Capitalize proper noun 'Collection' if it's a course name.

× I practice regularly to improve my tapping speed and accuracy.

✓ I practice regularly to improve my typing speed and accuracy.

'Tapping' is a wrong word choice here; the correct gerund for using a keyboard is 'typing'. The structure 'practice to improve' is acceptable; keep as is but replace 'tapping' with 'typing'.

× I use a website called 10 finger speech to umm practice and it gives time or check progress.

✓ I use a website called '10 Finger Typing' to practice, and it tracks my time and checks my progress.

Several issues: '10 finger speech' seems incorrect for a typing site — suggest '10 Finger Typing' (or the correct site name). Remove filler 'umm'. 'Gives time or check progress' is ungrammatical; use 'tracks my time and checks my progress'. Use articles and verbs correctly to form a coherent sentence.