Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve accuracy and clarity: correct grammar errors (e.g., "I'm prefer" → "I prefer", "staring" → likely "studying" or "reading"), fix noun phrases ("them material" → "the material"), and avoid redundancy. Keep to 2–4 sentences: state preference clearly, give one concise reason, and add a brief contrasting point if needed. Use linking words like "however" or "because".

Example: I use both, but I prefer typing for social media and quick messages because it's faster and more convenient. However, I prefer handwriting when I'm studying or reading because writing by hand helps me remember the material better.

Suggestion: Fix grammar and remove unnecessary words: eliminate extra conjunctions (remove "but and"), correct collocations ("browse the Internet" is fine), and replace colloquial or unclear phrase "Internet cave" with "Internet cafe" if intended. Keep the answer direct: state what you use, frequency, and a brief reason. Use a linking word like "so" or "because".

Example: I don't own a desktop or laptop, so I sometimes use my sister's laptop when I need to browse the Internet or do research for school. I prefer using her laptop because it's more convenient than going to an Internet cafe.

Suggestion: Correct tense and word choice: change "I want to a" to "I went to a", "by the end of the time" to "by the end of the course". Make it concise: give the age, the context, and the result in 2–3 sentences. Use linking words like "there" and "so" for coherence.

Example: I learned to type when I was 13. I went to a business computer course that included typing lessons, and by the end of the course I could touch-type fairly quickly.

Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and precise vocabulary: change "improved" to "improve" (present tense), "predicting" seems incorrect—use "practicing", and correct subject-verb agreement ("This helps"). Mention specific activities and frequency concisely. Use linking words like "for example" or "so".

Example: I improve my typing by practicing every day, usually twice a day, using online lessons and typing games. This helps me build speed and accuracy and learn useful keyboard shortcuts I didn't know before.

× Actually I use both and prefer typing when I'm on social media or writing quick messages because it is faster and more convenient. But I'm prefer handwriting when I'm staring or reading because writing by hand help me remember and understand them material better.

✓ Actually I use both and prefer typing when I'm on social media or writing quick messages because it is faster and more convenient. But I prefer handwriting when I'm studying or reading because writing by hand helps me remember and understand the material better.

Problems: 'I'm prefer' uses incorrect auxiliary with main verb (Present tense/Third person form); 'staring' is wrong word choice for 'studying'; 'help' needs third-person singular 'helps'; 'them material' has incorrect pronoun/determiner. Suggestions: Remove unnecessary auxiliary 'am' and use simple present 'prefer'; replace 'staring' with 'studying' to match meaning; use 'helps' for third-person singular subject 'writing by hand'; use 'the material' for correct determiner.

× I don't own a desktop or laptop but and sometimes use my sister's laptop when I need to browse the Internet or to research for school.

✓ I don't own a desktop or laptop, but I sometimes use my sister's laptop when I need to browse the Internet or research for school.

Problems: Extra conjunction 'and' is unnecessary; missing subject 'I' before 'sometimes'; 'to research' can be simplified to infinitive without 'to' after 'or' but either 'to research' or 'research' is acceptable—use parallel structure. Suggestions: Remove 'and', add comma before 'but', include 'I' to complete clause, and make verbs parallel ('browse' and 'research').

× I prefer using her laptop because it is more convenient than going to an Internet cave.

✓ I prefer using her laptop because it is more convenient than going to an internet café.

Problems: 'Internet cave' is incorrect word choice; use 'internet café' (or 'Internet cafe') to refer to a public place with computers. Suggestion: Replace with the standard term 'internet café' and keep lowercase 'internet' if not capitalized in style.

× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was 13. I want to a business computer course where we had typing lessons and by the end of the time I could touch type fairly quickly.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was 13. I went to a business computer course where we had typing lessons, and by the end I could touch type fairly quickly.

Problems: 'I want to a business computer course' uses wrong verb and article; should be past tense 'went to' to match 'learned' time frame (Past tense issue) and 'a' is correct but verb was wrong. 'by the end of the time' is awkward—use 'by the end'. Suggestions: Use past tense 'went to', keep 'a business computer course', and simplify 'by the end'. Ensure commas for compound sentences.

× I improved my typing by predicting every day, usually twice a day with the online lessons and typing games.

✓ I improved my typing by practicing every day, usually twice a day, with online lessons and typing games.

Problems: 'predicting' is wrong verb; context requires 'practicing'. Commas needed around adverbial phrase for clarity. Suggestions: Use 'practicing' (verb + -ing) to show the method, add commas for readability, and remove 'the' before 'online lessons' unless referring to specific ones.

× This help me build speed and accuracy and learn useful keyboard shortcut I didn't know before.

✓ This helped me build speed and accuracy and learn useful keyboard shortcuts I didn't know before.

Problems: 'This help' should be past tense 'helped' to match previous sentence; subject-verb agreement issue; 'shortcut' should be plural 'shortcuts'. Suggestions: Use past tense 'helped' and plural 'shortcuts' to agree with 'learn' and context; consider adding 'that' before 'I didn't know before' for clarity.