Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장이 자연스럽고 의사 전달은 되지만, 반복 표현("easy to easy")과 문장 구조의 단순함 때문에 점수를 더 얻기 어렵습니다. 주제 문장을 명확히 하고 이유를 두세 문장으로 구체화하세요. 또한 연결어(for example, therefore, because)나 비교 표현(faster than, more convenient)으로 논리를 강화하세요.

Example: I prefer typing because it is much faster and more convenient than handwriting. For example, I can quickly correct mistakes and rearrange sentences on a computer, which saves me time when working on essays or emails.

Suggestion: 의도는 전달되지만 문법 오류(then → than), 반복("same type of same type"), 그리고 어순 문제가 있어 이해를 방해합니다. 비교할 때는 정확한 비교 표현을 사용하고, 이유나 상황을 한두 문장으로 덧붙여 구체적으로 설명하세요.

Example: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I find it more portable and comfortable than a desktop keyboard. Actually, I bought an extra keyboard that has a similar layout to my laptop’s, so I can keep the same typing feel when I work at my desk.

Suggestion: 시제와 표현이 다소 어색하고 정보가 부족합니다. 연도를 말할 때는 확신을 주는 표현을 쓰거나 정확하지 않다면 약간의 설명을 덧붙이세요. 또한 'typing was the regular class' 대신 자연스러운 표현을 사용하세요.

Example: I think I learned to type around 2013 or 2014 when I was in elementary school. Typing was part of our regular computer class, so we practiced typing skills every week.

Suggestion: 앱 이름과 설명을 말하려는 의도는 좋지만 어순과 표현(then named, almost of Korean)에서 오류가 있습니다. 앱을 소개할 때는 이름을 정확히 말하고, 그 앱이 왜 인기 있는지 구체적 이유(예: exercises, levels, feedback)를 추가하세요.

Example: I improved my typing by using an app called "Hong Kong Tajansu," which is very popular in Korea. The app offers timed exercises and instant feedback, so I could practice regularly and track my progress.

× I prefer typing. It's because it's faster than handwriting and easy to easy to revise.

✓ I prefer typing. It's because it's faster than handwriting and easier to revise.

The adjective 'easy' must be used in comparative form 'easier' to compare revising by typing with handwriting. Also there is a duplicated phrase 'easy to' which is redundant. Use 'easier to revise' to correctly modify the verb phrase 'to revise' and show the comparative relationship. Suggestion: Remove the duplicate words and use the comparative adjective 'easier' when comparing two methods.

× I use laptop keyboard and I like laptop keyboard then desktop keyboard.

✓ I use a laptop keyboard and I prefer the laptop keyboard to the desktop keyboard.

Missing articles cause noun phrase problems and the verb 'like...then' is incorrect for making comparisons. Use 'a laptop keyboard' for singular countable noun and 'prefer...to...' to compare two options. Also include 'the' when referring to the specific laptop and desktop keyboards mentioned. Suggestion: Use appropriate articles ('a' or 'the') and the verb 'prefer' with 'to' for comparisons.

× So actually I bought one more keyboard but it is same type of same type with laptop keyboard.

✓ So actually I bought an extra keyboard, and it is the same type as my laptop's keyboard.

The original sentence has repetition ('same type of same type') and incorrect preposition 'with'. Use 'an extra' for 'one more' and the comparative structure 'the same type as' to compare things. Also use a possessive 'my laptop's keyboard' or 'my laptop keyboard' for clarity. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and use correct comparative structures: 'the same type as' or 'similar to'.

× Maybe it was 2013 or 2014. I learned at elementary school and the typing was the regular class.

✓ Maybe it was 2013 or 2014. I learned at elementary school and typing was a regular class.

'The typing was the regular class' is awkward and uses unnecessary definite article. Use past tense 'was' correctly but adjust noun phrases: 'typing was a regular class' or 'typing was taught as a regular class'. If you mean you attended typing as a regular class, use 'typing was a regular class' or 'typing was part of the regular curriculum.' Suggestion: Remove unnecessary 'the' and use natural collocations like 'a regular class' or 'part of the regular curriculum'.

× I practiced through application then named Hong Kong Tajansu. It is the popular application for every Korean. Maybe almost of Korean have used this application.

✓ I practiced using an application called Hong Kong Tajansu. It is a popular application for Koreans. Maybe almost all Koreans have used this application.

Use 'using' to show the method of practice (verb + -ing). 'Then named' is incorrect; use 'called' or 'named' after the noun. 'The popular application' needs the article 'a' and 'for every Korean' should be 'for Koreans'. 'Maybe almost of Korean have used' has multiple errors: use 'almost all Koreans have used' for subject-verb agreement and correct quantifier usage. Suggestion: Use 'using' after 'practiced', use 'called' to introduce the app name, and correct quantifier and noun forms: 'a popular application for Koreans' and 'almost all Koreans have used this application.'