Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
MMM I definitely prefer typing because I think it's really convenient and I can send my message to my friend as soon as I could. Although the hydrazine is maybe more meaningful but I don't think it's important.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Not really. I used to my smartphone to send some messages to my friends because I think it's really convenient and quickly. Although I were sometimes used top door keyboard to.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school. We have a computer lessons and we take about two lessons to learn that and I learn and some some people in my class to learn really faster at that time I can't.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
To be honest I don't really pay attention on it, I just improvement improve it in my daily life. I always communicate through social medias with my friends so I need to type somethings on the keyboard and I think it's.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答要更直接并避免含糊与错误词汇。先给出明确立场,然后用一两句具体原因支持,避免不相关或错误的单词(如“hydrazine”)。注意语法时态和数的一致性,控制在最多5句内。
Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient and faster. For example, I can reply to messages immediately and use tools like spellcheck to avoid mistakes. Although handwriting feels more personal, I usually choose typing for everyday communication.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答要用完整句子并纠正常见语法错误(主谓一致、过去时与现在时),提供具体频率或场景。避免拼写错误(如“quickly”、“desktop”)。使用连接词使句子连贯。
Example: Not every day. I usually type messages on my smartphone because it is convenient and always with me. Sometimes I use a laptop when I need to type long documents or emails at home.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 42.0Suggestion: 回答要更清晰地陈述时间点并用具体细节说明学习过程。注意时态一致、单复数和表达顺序,避免重复词。可以提及课程时长、练习方法或个人进步。
Example: I learned to type when I was in primary school during our computer lessons. We had about two lessons where the teacher taught basic typing and we practiced simple exercises, and I gradually improved with regular practice.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 38.0Suggestion: 回答要具体说明改进方法,给出例子和频率,避免语法和拼写错误。可以提到练习工具、练习时间或目标。保持句子完整,不要留下未完成的句子。
Example: I improve my typing mainly through daily use: I chat with friends on social media and write short posts. In addition, I sometimes use online typing practice websites for ten minutes a day to increase my speed and accuracy.
× I definitely prefer typing because I think it's really convenient and I can send my message to my friend as soon as I could.
✓ I definitely prefer typing because I think it's really convenient and I can send my messages to my friends as soon as I can.
这里涉及动词时态与主谓一致问题:原句中使用“as soon as I could”与现在时的主句不一致,应使用现在时“can”。另外“my message to my friend”在语境中指泛指多次交流,应使用复数“my messages to my friends”。建议保持时态一致,注意单复数搭配。
× Although the hydrazine is maybe more meaningful but I don't think it's important.
✓ Although handwriting may be more meaningful, I don't think it's important.
原句用词错误,“hydrazine”是化学物质,应为“handwriting(手写)”。句子中有‘Although... but...’的重复连词错误,保留‘Although’时后面不要加‘but’。建议用正确词汇并避免重复连词。
× Not really. I used to my smartphone to send some messages to my friends because I think it's really convenient and quickly.
✓ Not really. I use my smartphone to send messages to my friends because I think it's really convenient and quick.
原句结构混乱:‘I used to my smartphone’应为现在习惯用法‘I use my smartphone’或过去习惯‘I used to use’。此处回答现在的习惯,故用现在时。副词‘quickly’修饰动词,形容词‘quick’更适合修饰形容词位置的‘convenient and quick’。此外‘some messages’可简化为‘messages’。建议理清时态并选择正确词类(形容词/副词)。
× Although I were sometimes used top door keyboard to.
✓ Sometimes I used to use a laptop keyboard though.
原句有多处错误:‘Although I were’中主语和动词不匹配且时态错误,应为‘sometimes I used to’表示过去经常做某事;‘top door keyboard’疑为‘laptop keyboard’的拼写错误。建议改为'Sometimes I used to use a laptop keyboard though.'以清晰表达过去习惯。
× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.
✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in primary school.
该句时态正确,无需修改。用于叙述过去事实,过去式‘l e a r n e d’恰当。保持原句。
× We have a computer lessons and we take about two lessons to learn that and I learn and some some people in my class to learn really faster at that time I can't.
✓ We had computer lessons and we took about two lessons to learn it. Some people in my class learned much faster than I did at that time.
原句有时态、数、结构和比较问题:应使用过去时‘had’和‘took’;‘a computer lessons’名词单复数不一致,改为‘computer lessons’或‘a computer lesson’;‘learn really faster’比较级错误,改为‘learned much faster’并用‘than I did’进行比较。建议拆成两句,明确主体和时态。
× To be honest I don't really pay attention on it, I just improvement improve it in my daily life.
✓ To be honest I don't really pay attention to it; I just improve it in my daily life.
原句错误包括介词用法和词类:应使用‘pay attention to’而不是‘on’;‘just improvement improve’是重复且词类错误,应为动词‘improve’。此外将两个并列分句用分号或句号分开更清晰。建议记住固定搭配并避免重复词。
× I always communicate through social medias with my friends so I need to type somethings on the keyboard and I think it's.
✓ I always communicate through social media with my friends, so I need to type things on the keyboard, and I think it's useful.
原句中‘social medias’不正确,正确说法是不可数名词‘social media’;‘somethings’应为不可数/复数形式‘things’或‘sometime’视语境而定。句尾不完整,补充合理结尾‘I think it's useful’。建议注意不可数名词与可数名词的用法并完成句子。