Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and correct verb forms (e.g., "we type" → "I type").

Example: I prefer typing. Firstly, my job requires fast digital communication, so I type most documents and emails. Secondly, technology makes typing more convenient than handwriting for storing and sharing work.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and organize supporting details with linking words. Remove hesitations and finish your sentence. Mention specific activities that require typing. Keep it to two or three concise sentences.

Example: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. I use it for work tasks like writing reports and emails, and I also type on my phone for messaging and social media.

Suggestion: Start with a clear time reference, then add one specific supporting detail. Use correct tense and fewer hesitations. For example mention the exact school level and how practice continued into adulthood.

Example: I learned to type in primary school during our computer lessons. Since then I have improved a lot through daily use at work on my laptop and by typing on my phone.

Suggestion: Provide a clear method and one specific example of how you practice. Avoid repetition and filler words. Mention a concrete practice technique or resource to sound more precise.

Example: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing tests and timed exercises. I also completed a short typing course that taught proper finger placement, which increased my speed and accuracy.

× But nowadays, because of professional life and because of technological development, we're type.

✓ But nowadays, because of professional life and technological development, we type.

The phrase 'we're type' mixes a contracted 'we are' with a base verb, causing subject-verb agreement and verb form error. Use the simple present 'we type' to describe a habitual action. Also remove the redundant 'because of' repetition for fluency.

× I type uh, on laptop keyboard every day uh, because of work, I think and also uh in telephone uh, in mobile, uh, I type uh, for uh, chatting and uh, I think because of the.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because of work, and I also type on my phone for chatting.

Missing articles: 'on laptop keyboard' should be 'on a laptop keyboard'; 'in telephone' and 'in mobile' are incorrect preposition and article use — use 'on my phone'. The final fragment 'because of the.' is incomplete and should be removed. Also streamline redundant fillers for clarity.

× Uh, when I was at, uh, primary school, we have a computer lessons and a first time I learned there and I practice in my professional life a lot, Uh, and I use it in my daily life in laptop and also in my phone.

✓ When I was in primary school, we had computer lessons and I learned to type there for the first time. I have practiced a lot in my professional life, and I use it daily on my laptop and my phone.

Multiple tense and article problems: 'when I was at primary school' — use 'in primary school'; 'we have a computer lessons' mixes present with plural noun and wrong article — use past 'we had computer lessons'; 'a first time I learned there' should be 'I learned to type there for the first time'; 'I practice' should be 'I have practiced' to show continued practice up to the present. Also correct articles 'in my laptop' -> 'on my laptop' and 'in my phone' -> 'on my phone'.

× Uh, by practicing more, I believe even, uh, with umm, lots of practice, I think everyone can improve their typing on the phone or on laptop keyboard.

✓ By practicing more, I believe that with lots of practice everyone can improve their typing on the phone or on a laptop keyboard.

This sentence is mostly correct but needs a conjunction 'that' for clarity and article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. The gerund 'practicing' is used correctly; adjust word order and remove extra fillers for fluency.

× There is some courses for that as well, but I think, uh, practice makes it perfect.

✓ There are some courses for that as well, but I think practice makes it perfect.

'There is some courses' is incorrect because 'courses' is plural and requires 'There are' and 'some'. Also 'practice' does not need a comma before it. Consider the idiomatic phrase 'practice makes perfect' rather than 'practice makes it perfect.'