Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um) and repeated phrases, correct subject-verb forms and word choice, and provide one specific reason with a brief example. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because long handwriting makes my fingers and thumbs hurt. For example, most of my college assignments are submitted online, so typing is faster and more convenient for my daily work.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence (I use a laptop every day). Reduce fillers and fix grammar (e.g., 'daily' not 'on the daily basis'; 'if my colleague asks' -> 'if a colleague asks'). Give one specific supporting detail and use a linking word to connect ideas.

Example: I use a laptop every day because my college portal and course materials are on it. Therefore, I regularly submit assignments and share important documents with classmates using my laptop.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear time reference, avoid awkward phrasing ('8th standard' -> 'eighth grade' or 'when I was 13'), and use one or two concise supporting details. Use past tense consistently and remove filler words.

Example: I learned to type when I was in eighth grade at about 13 years old. At school we had a weekly computer lab class where the teacher taught basic typing techniques and practice exercises.

Suggestion: Start with a clear method (I improve my typing by...), avoid vague phrases and incorrect nouns ('keyboard' not 'keyword'), and give a specific example of a resource or practice routine. Keep it structured with a linking phrase like 'for example' or 'for instance'.

Example: I improve my typing by using online tutorials and practice websites. For example, last week I watched a YouTube video that demonstrated proper finger placement and exercises, and then I practiced those drills for 20 minutes a day to increase my speed.

× To be honest, I prefer typing uh, because if I do the head head writing, at that time, my fingers and thumb hurt.

✓ To be honest, I prefer typing because when I do handwriting, my fingers and thumbs hurt.

The sentence uses incorrect prepositions and awkward phrases. Replace 'if I do the head head writing' with 'when I do handwriting' to indicate the time/situation. Use plural 'thumbs' to match 'fingers'. Also remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'at that time'. Suggestion: Use 'when' to introduce a habitual situation and ensure plural forms for body parts used together.

× That's why on the daily, I prefer to the typing and most of the, uh, sign assignments of my call is on the computer.

✓ That's why, on a daily basis, I prefer typing, and most of my assignments are on the computer.

'on the daily' is incorrect; use 'on a daily basis'. 'Prefer to the typing' is ungrammatical — use 'prefer typing' or 'prefer to type'. 'Most of the sign assignments of my call' is unclear; likely 'most of my assignments'. Use simple present 'are' for location/state. Remove filler words. Suggestion: Use fixed expressions ('on a daily basis') and keep subject and verb close ('most of my assignments are on the computer').

× So I am, uh, have virtual offer, uh, doing typing.

✓ So I have a virtual offer to do typing.

The original mixes 'am' and 'have' incorrectly; use one verb phrase. 'Virtual offer' is awkward but preserved; add article 'a' and use infinitive 'to do typing'. Remove fillers. Suggestion: Use appropriate verb forms ('have') and include articles when needed.

× On the daily basis I use laptop to do typing, uh, because, uh, on my laptop, uh, there is my, uh, college portal.

✓ On a daily basis I use a laptop to type because my college portal is on it.

Use 'on a daily basis' instead of 'On the daily basis'. Include the article 'a' before 'laptop'. 'Use laptop to do typing' is wordy; use 'use a laptop to type'. Express possession/location as 'my college portal is on it'. Remove fillers. Suggestion: Use concise verbs ('type') and correct articles ('a laptop').

× So which is important for me to, uh, submit my assignments as well as I have to submit important document if my colleague ask.

✓ This is important for me because I have to submit my assignments and important documents if my college asks.

'So which is important' is incorrect clause structure; use 'This is important for me because'. 'As well as' is fine but the sentence needs parallel nouns: 'assignments and important documents'. 'If my colleague ask' has subject-verb disagreement and wrong noun: likely 'college' or 'colleague'. I used 'college asks' per context, but if meaning 'colleague asks' then use plural verb 'asks'. Suggestion: Use clear conjunctions ('because') and ensure subject-verb agreement ('asks').

× So I have account in my laptop.

✓ So I have an account on my laptop.

Use the article 'an' before 'account'. Preferred preposition for software/services located on a device is 'on' not 'in'. Suggestion: Use correct articles and common prepositions ('an account on').

× I remember when I was in 8th standard, at that time I started typing because at that class there is a one period which we attend in a computer lab.

✓ I remember when I was in 8th grade; at that time I started typing because that class had a period when we attended the computer lab.

Mixes past and present tense: 'there is a one period' should be past 'that class had a period'. Use '8th grade' instead of '8th standard' for natural phrasing. Use 'attended' or 'we attended' (I used 'we attended' with past 'had') and correct article usage. Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense when narrating past events and use natural educational terms.

× So at that time umm my teachers give information about how to type.

✓ At that time my teachers gave information about how to type.

The verb 'give' should be past tense 'gave' to match the past-time frame. Remove filler 'umm'. Suggestion: Maintain past tense for actions that occurred in the past.

× I can improve my typing with the help of website YouTube videos.

✓ I can improve my typing with the help of YouTube videos on websites.

Word order and articles are off: 'website YouTube videos' is incorrect. Place 'YouTube videos' and optionally 'on websites' after. Alternatively, say 'with the help of YouTube videos' without 'website'. Suggestion: Use the common collocation 'YouTube videos' and place modifiers correctly.

× I remember last week I saw a video related to the typing on the YouTube uh ad.

✓ I remember last week I saw a YouTube ad about typing.

Simplify and correct article use: 'the YouTube uh ad' -> 'a YouTube ad'. Use past tense 'saw' is correct; reorder for natural English. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Use concise phrasing ('a YouTube ad about typing').

× At that time, the one person explained everything about the keyword and how we can use it for the fast typing.

✓ At that time, a person explained everything about the keyboard and how we can use it to type faster.

'The one person' is unnatural; use 'a person'. 'Keyword' is incorrect — should be 'keyboard'. 'For the fast typing' is awkward; use 'to type faster'. Maintain modal consistency: 'we can use it to' is fine. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary ('keyboard') and natural adverb placement ('type faster').