Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more concise, avoid repetition, add a clear topic sentence and one specific supporting reason with linking words. Correct minor grammar and word choice (e.g., “sometimes”, avoid repeating “these days”).

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is much more convenient. For example, typing lets me easily edit and reorganize my notes without making a mess, so my study materials stay neat and searchable.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence, reduce redundancy, and fix grammar (capitalization, verb tense, possessive). Add a brief specific detail about how you use the laptop and a linking word to improve coherence.

Example: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because I use my laptop for both work and study. For instance, I write reports and take lecture notes on it, so the laptop is my main device for typing.

Suggestion: Give a clear past-time answer using correct past tense and avoid unclear phrases. Use a linking phrase to connect the specific year with the circumstance and keep it concise.

Example: I learned to type in primary school. Specifically, in 2004 when I was in fourth grade we had a computer class, and that’s when I started practicing keyboard skills.

Suggestion: Answer directly about how you improved typing using past actions, correct awkward phrasing, and add a brief result or current practice. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make it coherent.

Example: I improved my typing by taking formal classes in 2015 after graduation because I wanted to qualify for a government steno exam. As a result, I practiced regularly and my typing speed and accuracy increased, which still helps me today.

× Well, these days definitely typing because typing is really convenient for me these days.

✓ Well, these days I definitely prefer typing because it is really convenient for me.

Missing subject and verb for a complete present tense statement and redundant phrase 'these days'. Add subject 'I' and verb 'prefer' to show habitual present preference; remove duplicated 'these days' for conciseness.

× It is always easy to erase and rewrite while we are typing.

✓ It is always easy to erase and rewrite when typing.

Using 'while we are typing' is grammatical but wordy. 'When typing' is more natural and keeps the present progressive idea without unnecessary pronoun 'we'.

× But when we use handwriting on paper then it would be a mess sometime.

✓ But when we use handwriting on paper, it can be a mess sometimes.

Mixes present habitual with conditional 'would'. Use 'can' to describe a possible habitual outcome and pluralize 'sometimes'. Add comma for clarity.

× So typing is always better.

✓ So typing is usually better.

'Always' is too strong; 'usually' fits habitual comparison. Tense is present habitual; adjust adverb for naturalness.

× Yes, I always use my laptop for my work as well As for studying something as I am keen interested in education so I used to use my laptop for studying and I always use laptops keyboard for typing.

✓ Yes, I always use my laptop for work and for studying because I am interested in education, so I use my laptop's keyboard for typing.

Run-on sentence with capitalization error 'As' and incorrect verb 'used to' implying past habit. 'Keen interested' is wrong collocation; use 'interested in'. Also possessive 'laptop's keyboard' needed and redundant phrases removed. Maintain present habitual tense.

× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

✓ When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?

This question sentence is correct; no article or tense errors. Provided for completeness.

× Well in my primary school I have computer subject so I will really remember.

✓ Well, in primary school I had a computer class, so I clearly remember it.

Present perfect 'have' is incorrect for past time; use past 'had'. 'Computer subject' is better as 'computer class'. 'I will really remember' is wrong for past memory; use 'I clearly remember' (present simple describing current memory).

× It was in 2004 when I was in my 4th standard so computer subject was added to our study.

✓ It was in 2004 when I was in fourth grade, so the computer class was added to our curriculum.

Use 'fourth grade' or '4th grade' and include definite article 'the' and natural noun 'curriculum'. Past tense 'was added' is fine; adjust word choice for clarity.

× So from that time I started typing on computer.

✓ So from that time I started typing on the computer.

Add definite article 'the' before 'computer' for specificity. Past tense 'started' is correct.

× Well, I vividly remember in 2015, after my graduation, my father had enrolled me in typing classes because I was about to give paper for a steno.

✓ Well, I vividly remember that in 2015, after my graduation, my father enrolled me in typing classes because I was going to take an exam for a steno position.

Use simple past 'enrolled' rather than past perfect 'had enrolled' because sequence is clear. 'About to give paper for a steno' is nonstandard; use 'going to take an exam for a steno position' for clarity.

× It was a kind of government job in India.

✓ It was a type of government job in India.

'Kind of' is informal; 'type of' is clearer in formal speech. Tense is correct past.

× So that time I learned typing course.

✓ So at that time I took a typing course.

'Learned typing course' is ungrammatical; use 'took a typing course' or 'learned typing' with no 'course'. 'At that time' is the correct phrase.