Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장 구조와 어휘 선택을 간단하고 정확하게 고치세요. 중복 표현(예: 'when I'm when I')을 제거하고, 비교 표현은 'prefer A to B' 형태로, 이유는 한 문장으로 간결히 제시하세요. 또한 발음상 문제를 줄이기 위해 문장을 천천히 명확하게 말하는 연습을 하세요. 예: 주제문 + 이유(구체적 설명) + 간단한 예시. 문장 수는 3문장 이내로 유지하세요.

Example: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me brainstorm more freely. When I write by hand, I can quickly sketch ideas and make connections. For example, I often draw diagrams in my notebook before I type a final version.

Suggestion: 불필요한 중복 단어('yeah, I yes, I', 'a a')를 제거하고 직업 설명은 더 자연스럽게 표현하세요. 직업 관련 이유를 구체적으로 덧붙이면 답변이 풍부해집니다. 연결어로 간단히 이유를 제시하세요. 총 문장은 2~3문장으로 유지하세요.

Example: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I work as an online seller. I use it to manage listings, answer customer messages, and update inventory.

Suggestion: 시간 표현과 과거 시제 사용을 정확히 하세요('When I was in primary school'). 'Computer class taught us how to type'처럼 능동태로 간단히 말하고, 구체적인 시점(approximate years ago)을 깔끔하게 제시하세요. 불필요한 음성적 중복('uh')를 줄이세요.

Example: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had a computer class where the teacher taught us typing, so that was about 20 years ago.

Suggestion: 문장 흐름을 정리하고 시제와 이유를 명확히 하세요. 'I practiced every day using a typing program with small games, which was fun'처럼 간결한 구조를 사용하고, 현재의 개선 방법(예: 연습, 온라인 코스)을 덧붙이면 답변이 더 완성됩니다. 불필요한 반복('primary primary')과 'uh'를 제거하세요.

Example: When I was in primary school, I practiced typing every day using a fun typing program with small games. Nowadays, I improve my typing by doing daily typing drills and using online exercises to increase speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting over than typing because I feel it's more com convenient to brainstorm with my idea when I'm when I hand write something, then I typing on the.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because I feel it's more convenient to brainstorm ideas when I handwrite something than when I type.

'over than' is incorrect collocation; use 'prefer A to B'. 'com convenient' is typo, use 'convenient'. 'brainstorm with my idea' is unidiomatic; use 'brainstorm ideas'. 'hand write' should be 'handwrite' (verb). 'then I typing on the.' has incorrect tense and structure; use 'than when I type.' Suggestions: use correct collocations and verb forms, remove extra words, and compare parallel structures.

× Yeah, I yes, I use laptop keyboard everyday because I'm a a seller man. I have to use it every day for work.

✓ Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day because I'm a salesman. I have to use it daily for work.

Remove redundant fillers ('Yeah, I yes, I'). 'laptop keyboard' needs an article: 'a laptop keyboard'. 'everyday' as adjective vs 'every day' adverb: here 'every day' is correct. 'a seller man' is wrong word order and word choice; use 'a salesman' or 'I sell things' depending on context. Suggestions: avoid filler repetitions, use correct articles and choose appropriate compound words.

× Whenever I send primary school, uh, our school had the class, uh, computer class that teaches, teach IT students to how to type. So I learned that about 20 years ago.

✓ When I was in primary school, our school had a computer class that taught students how to type. So I learned to type about 20 years ago.

'Whenever I send primary school' is incorrect; use 'When I was in primary school'. 'had the class, uh, computer class' should be 'had a computer class'. Verb tense: 'teaches, teach' should be past 'taught' because the event is in the past. 'to how to type' incorrect word order; use 'how to type' or 'to type'. Suggestions: use correct time expressions for past events, match past tense verbs, and fix article usage.

× Back then when I was in primary primary school, uh, learning how to type, firstly I used to uh, type every day, but the typing program that I can learn typing with a small games, it was very fun.

✓ Back then, when I was in primary school learning how to type, I used to type every day, and the typing program I used, which had small games, was very fun.

Remove duplicate 'primary primary'. 'learning how to type' is fine as a participle clause. 'firstly' and 'used to uh, type every day' has unnecessary fillers; streamline to 'I used to type every day'. 'the typing program that I can learn typing with a small games' has several issues: modal/misuse and plurality: use 'the typing program I used, which had small games'. 'a small games' should be 'small games' or 'a small game'. Suggestions: eliminate repetitions and fillers, ensure noun-number agreement, and use relative clauses correctly.