Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer handwriting because staring at the screen will make me be uncomfortable and take notes in the on the paper is easy to remember. However, sometimes I use e-mail because it help me.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Losses are really type on a desktop or laptop because many tasks can be done on my mobile phone, because the mobile phone is very convenient to carry and I can do my job at every time at any.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
I learn to type on keyboard about 20 years ago when I was a student in college. I felt is very convenient to study and I enjoy typing and practicing every day.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
For improving my typing, I use two methods. First, I learned some skills from my classmates or my partners. Additionally, I bought some books from the library about how to.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答要更直接并注意语法与逻辑连贯。开头先给出明确观点,随后用一到两句具体原因支持,避免重复和多余词语,并注意时态和主谓一致(例如:it helps)。可以用连接词(because, although, however)来组织句子但不要过度使用。
Example: I prefer handwriting because writing on paper helps me remember information better. Also, looking at a screen for a long time makes me uncomfortable, so I usually take notes by hand. However, I sometimes use email when I need to send information quickly.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 答案不够清晰且有大量语法错误。先直接回答是或不是,然后给出具体原因并用连词使逻辑清楚。避免不准确的词汇(如"Losses")和冗长重复。注意表达频率(every day)和时间短语的位置。
Example: I don't always use a desktop or laptop every day because I do many tasks on my mobile phone. My phone is convenient to carry, so I can do work anytime and anywhere, which means I don't need a keyboard daily.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 注意动词时态和句子结构。使用过去时描述过去的学习经历,并给出简短具体的细节(例如练习方式或场景)。避免多余或不完整的从句(例如"I felt is")。
Example: I learned to type on a keyboard about 20 years ago when I was at university. I found it very convenient for studying, so I practiced typing every day to improve my speed and accuracy.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 答案缺少细节和完整性。说明具体方法时要给出具体例子和结果,例如練习软件、打字练习量或学习内容。使用完整句子并用连接词列出方法。避免未完成的句子(如结尾处)。
Example: I use two main methods to improve my typing. First, I learned techniques from classmates and practiced with them regularly. In addition, I used typing books and online typing exercises to practice accuracy and speed, which helped me improve significantly.
× I prefer handwriting because staring at the screen will make me be uncomfortable and take notes in the on the paper is easy to remember.
✓ I prefer handwriting because staring at the screen makes me uncomfortable, and taking notes on paper is easier to remember.
句中用詞和詞性錯誤:1) “will make me be uncomfortable” 不自然,正確用法為 “makes me uncomfortable”(主動簡單現在時表示一般情況)。2) “take notes in the on the paper” 有介詞冗餘和順序錯誤,正確應為 “taking notes on paper”。另外,用動名詞(taking)作主語或並列時更合適。建議:使用簡單現在時描述習慣,注意動詞形式(makes)與形容詞(uncomfortable),以及正確介詞短語(on paper)。
× However, sometimes I use e-mail because it help me.
✓ However, sometimes I use e-mail because it helps me.
此句為一般現在時第三人稱單數主語(it),動詞需加 -s。原句缺少第三人稱單數變化。建議:記住一般現在時第三人稱單數動詞要加 -s(help → helps)。
× Losses are really type on a desktop or laptop because many tasks can be done on my mobile phone, because the mobile phone is very convenient to carry and I can do my job at every time at any.
✓ I rarely type on a desktop or laptop because many tasks can be done on my mobile phone; the mobile phone is very convenient to carry and I can do my work anytime.
原句結構混亂且用詞錯誤:1) “Losses are really” 顯然錯誤,推測想表達“rarely”。2) “type on a desktop or laptop” 主語缺失,應為“I rarely type…”。3) 重複使用 because 並且最後的時間短語“at every time at any” 不正確,應為 “anytime” 或 “at any time”。建議:整理句子主語和動詞位置,使用恰當頻率副詞(rarely)和時間副詞(anytime),避免重複連詞。
× When did you learn how to type on a keyboard? Student: I learn to type on keyboard about 20 years ago when I was a student in college. I felt is very convenient to study and I enjoy typing and practicing every day.
✓ I learned to type on a keyboard about 20 years ago when I was a student in college. I felt it was very convenient for studying, and I enjoyed typing and practicing every day.
問句使用過去式(When did you learn...),回答也應使用過去時:1) “I learn” 應為過去式 “I learned”。2) “I felt is very convenient” 結構錯誤,應為 “I felt it was very convenient” 或 “I found it very convenient”。3) 關於習慣性過去行為,後半句應使用過去時態 “enjoyed”。建議:注意問句時態並保持時態一致;使用完整的從句(it was ...)表達感受。
× I learn to type on keyboard about 20 years ago when I was a student in college.
✓ I learned to type on a keyboard about 20 years ago when I was a student at college.
介詞和冠詞使用不當:1) “on keyboard” 缺少冠詞,應為 “on a keyboard”。2) 關於就讀場所,英式英語常說 “at college” 或 “at university”;在美式英語可用 “in college”。建議:注意可數名詞前加不定冠詞 a/an,並根據英式或美式習慣選擇介詞(at/in)。
× I felt is very convenient to study and I enjoy typing and practicing every day.
✓ I felt it was very convenient to study, and I enjoyed typing and practicing every day.
雖然主要問題是時態,但也涉及動名詞使用:在“enjoy”後面應接動名詞(typing, practicing)是正確的;錯誤在於時態不一致(enjoy → enjoyed)。建議:保持時態一致,確認在 enjoy 後使用動名詞形式。
× How do you improve your typing? Student: For improving my typing, I use two methods. First, I learned some skills from my classmates or my partners. Additionally, I bought some books from the library about how to.
✓ To improve my typing, I use two methods. First, I learned some skills from my classmates and partners. Additionally, I borrowed some books from the library about how to improve.
原句有時態與片語結構問題:1) “For improving my typing” 不自然,建議用不定式 “To improve my typing”。2) 問句使用一般現在時詢問習慣,但回答混合現在與過去時;若在說過去學到的技能,使用過去時(learned)可以,但要一致。3) “bought some books from the library” 通常應為 “borrowed” 因為圖書館的是借不是買。4) 結尾 “about how to.” 未完成,應補全為 “about how to improve.” 建議:選擇合適的不定式或動名詞結構,使用正確動詞(borrow),並完成不完整的片語。