Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Улучшите грамматику и ясность ответа: избегайте лишних повторов и исправьте ошибки в согласовании слов. Дайте чёткое сравнение с конкретными причиной(ми) и примером. Используйте связку для плавного перехода между идеями.

Example: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient for most tasks. However, handwriting can feel more personal and memorable, for example when writing a birthday card or a handwritten note. Therefore I usually type for work but handwrite special messages.

Suggestion: Упростите структуру предложения и исправьте порядок слов. Укажите конкретную причину и один краткий пример того, что вы делаете на ноутбуке. Используйте связки для логичности.

Example: I type on my laptop every day because it is linked to my work accounts. For example, I use it to send emails and join team video meetings, so it is my main device.

Suggestion: Сократите паузы и повторения, исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, «said me» → «told me», «technology are» → «technology is»). Дайте краткую последовательность событий и причину обучения, используя связку.

Example: I learned to type about five years ago because my mother told me it would be important for my future. Since technology is central to most jobs, I practised regularly to improve my skills.

Suggestion: Исправьте формы глаголов и сделайте предложение более конкретным: укажите метод практики и частоту. Добавьте пример ресурса или упражнения и используйте связку для объяснения результата.

Example: I improved my typing by attending an IT course where the teacher advised daily practice. For instance, he shared an online typing tutor website, so I practised for 20 minutes every day and gradually increased my speed.

× Of course I prefer typing because it's easier and more convenient than handwriting, but when people use and writing, it's more personal and memorable for for each other.

✓ Of course I prefer typing because it's easier and more convenient than handwriting, but when people use handwriting, it's more personal and memorable for each other.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes 'use and writing' and repeats 'for'. Replace with 'use handwriting' to use the correct noun and remove the duplicate 'for'. Also 'each other' is appropriate for mutual feeling. Suggestion: say 'when people write by hand' for a more natural expression.

× Or every day I type on my laptop because my laptop connected with my work and that's why to communicate with my work team I use it.

✓ Every day I type on my laptop because my laptop is connected to my work, and that's why I use it to communicate with my work team.

Missing auxiliary verb 'is' and wrong preposition 'with'; word order 'that's why to communicate' is incorrect. Use 'is connected to' and move 'to communicate' after 'use it'. Also remove initial 'Or' which is unnatural here.

× It was five years ago, uh, because my mom said me that it's really important for your future because nowadays technology are important and everything connected with technology.

✓ It was five years ago because my mom told me that it's really important for my future, since nowadays technology is important and everything is connected with technology.

Use 'told me' (not 'said me'). Use consistent pronouns ('my future' not 'your future'). 'Technology are' should be 'technology is' (singular). Add 'is' in 'everything is connected'. Also remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary commas.

× And that's why I think keyboard is really useful thing.

✓ And that's why I think the keyboard is a really useful thing.

Missing article 'the' before 'keyboard' and 'a' before 'really useful thing'. Add articles to form a correct noun phrase. More natural: 'the keyboard is really useful' or 'keyboards are really useful'.

× I visited IT course in the past and my teacher gave me really good advice.

✓ I took an IT course in the past, and my teacher gave me some very good advice.

Use 'took' or 'attended' rather than 'visited' for courses. Add article 'an' before 'IT course'. Use 'some' and 'very' for natural phrasing.

× He said me that every day I need to practice in my laptop and he share me with one link where it's easy to.

✓ He told me that every day I need to practice on my laptop, and he shared a link with me where it is easy to practice.

Use 'told me' not 'said me', 'shared' for past tense, and correct preposition 'on my laptop'. 'Share me with one link' is incorrect; use 'shared a link with me'. Complete the clause 'where it is easy to practice'.