Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific supporting reason. Avoid repetition and filler words. For example, say whether you prefer handwriting or typing, then explain briefly why using correct verb forms and linking words.

Example: I prefer handwriting to typing because it gives me a stronger sense of physical engagement. For instance, when I write by hand I remember information better and I enjoy the tactile feeling of the pen on paper.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but shorten and polish it: begin with a direct topic sentence, then add one clear reason using a linking word. Remove filler sounds and redundant phrases like "so whenever, wherever I go."

Example: I type on a laptop every day because it is portable. Therefore, I can work from different places such as the library or a café without any trouble.

Suggestion: Be direct and accurate. Use correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., "learn to type" not "tap"; "junior high" is fine but specify age or grade if helpful). Avoid mentioning irrelevant or confusing details ("Tiktok" seems out of place). Provide one supporting detail or short example.

Example: I learned to type when I was in junior high school, around age 13. My school required computer classes then, so I practiced regularly during lessons and at home.

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a topic sentence saying how you improve, then give a specific method and an example. Avoid repeating the same idea with different words.

Example: I improve my typing through regular practice and targeted exercises. For example, I use online typing lessons for 20 minutes each day and track my accuracy and speed to see steady improvement.

× Personally, I'm used to do handwriting 'cause I already makes me feel or or sense of physical activity.

✓ Personally, I'm used to doing handwriting because it already makes me feel a sense of physical activity.

The phrase 'used to' followed by a habitual action requires the gerund form (doing), so 'do' is incorrect. Also 'makes' must agree with the singular subject 'it', and 'or or' is redundant. Use 'because' instead of informal ' 'cause' and 'a sense of' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I'm used to doing' + noun/gerund, avoid repetition and keep subject-verb agreement.

× Personally, I'm used to do handwriting 'cause I already makes me feel or or sense of physical activity.

✓ Personally, I'm used to doing handwriting because it already makes me feel a sense of physical activity.

The original used 'makes me' with an unclear subject; replacing with 'it' clarifies the subject and keeps the verb 'makes' correctly in third person singular. Ensure the subject 'it' refers to handwriting and that verb agrees: 'it makes'.

× Personally, I'm used to do handwriting 'cause I already makes me feel or or sense of physical activity.

✓ Personally, I'm used to doing handwriting because it already makes me feel a sense of physical activity.

The informal conjunction ''cause' is acceptable in speech but for grammatical correctness use 'because'. Also 'or or' is a duplication error; remove redundant words. Use clear conjunctions to link clauses.

× I really type on a laptop keyboard on a daily basis 'cause, uh, laptop is easy to carry and it's portable, so whenever, wherever I go, I can carry it with me.

✓ I really type on a laptop keyboard on a daily basis because laptops are easy to carry and portable, so whenever I go, I can take one with me.

The noun 'laptop' in general statements should be plural ('laptops are') or use 'a laptop is' with article. Also 'carry it with me' is awkward; use 'take one with me'. Maintain subject-verb agreement and consistent reference.

× Well, I remember I learned how to tap on a keyboard when I was a junior high school.

✓ Well, I remember I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in junior high school.

Use 'type' rather than 'tap' for general learning to use a keyboard. Also the phrase requires 'in junior high school' not 'a junior high school' when referring to the period of schooling. 'There be' tag not directly present but this fits the listed types; main issue is preposition use 'in'.

× At the time we, our father just bought a Tiktok for me as a present.

✓ At that time, our father had just bought me a TikTok account as a present.

Use 'At that time' for reference to past moment. The preposition and word order 'bought a TikTok for me' is awkward; use 'bought me a TikTok account' or 'bought me access'. Also 'had just bought' places the purchase before the remembered moment; correct capitalization of 'TikTok' and clarify the object.

× Oh, I.

✓ Oh, I see.

'Oh, I.' is an incomplete utterance lacking a verb or completion, making it a sentence fragment. In speech 'Oh, I see' or 'Oh, I remember' completes the thought. Suggest including a verb to finish the idea.

× I practice everyday on daily basis.

✓ I practice every day on a daily basis.

Use 'every day' (two words) for each day; 'everyday' (one word) is an adjective meaning ordinary. 'On a daily basis' is redundant with 'every day'; choose one. Suggest: 'I practice every day'.

× There's a giant saying that practice makes perfect.

✓ There's a saying that 'practice makes perfect'.

'Giant saying' is incorrect collocation; use 'a saying'. Also punctuate the proverb. If emphasizing, use 'a well-known saying'. The original misuses 'giant' as an adjective.

× So I just based on this concept. I practice everyday on daily basis. So through this continuous practice I improve my typing.

✓ So I just base what I do on this concept. I practice every day. Through this continuous practice, I improve my typing.

'Based' requires an object and proper tense: 'I base what I do on this concept' or 'I base my practice on this concept'. Also 'practice every day' uses correct form. Add commas for clarity. Ensure verbs are in simple present for habitual actions.