Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
Actually, I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting is more convenient and I can, uh, write something more, uh, more free. But I think in this digital age, the typing maybe more, uh, more convenient for, for finish my homework.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Yeah, I I need to finish my homework so I need to type in on on laptop every day because.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
Umm, I think maybe I learn how to type on a keyboard since I was a kid, maybe in the primary school, because at that time we have the IT class, so we learn how to type on keyboard at that time.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
Actually I don't improve my typing intentionally because in my age of the middle school or primary school primary school I have many time to practice that, but I think when I need to chat with my friends on WeChat, I need to type so my.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 66.0Suggestion: 回答要更直接并避免重复。开头先一句明确观点,然后用1–2句具体理由支持,并用连接词衔接。如解释为什么手写更自由,再承认打字在某些情况下更方便,最后给出简短对比。注意填充词(uh, um)和语法(‘for finish my homework’应为‘for finishing my homework’)的改进。
Example: I prefer handwriting because it helps me think more clearly and write more freely. However, typing is more efficient for long assignments and editing, so I usually type when I need to finish homework quickly.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 54.0Suggestion: 回答应完整且简洁。先直接回答(Yes, I use a laptop),然后说明频率和原因。避免重复词和未完成句子,使用连词如 'because' 后完成原因。
Example: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because most of my assignments require online submission and it's more convenient to carry my laptop to school.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: 回答要用正确时态并去掉犹豫词。开头直接给时间点(e.g. in primary school),接着说明原因或背景,使用连接词如 'because' 或 'when' 来使句子更连贯。注意语法(‘I learned’ 而不是 ‘I learn’)。
Example: I learned to type in primary school because we had IT lessons where the teacher taught us basic keyboard skills and practice exercises.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答要完整并具体说明方法或习惯。先说是否刻意练习,然后给出具体改进方式或练习频率,使用连接词(however, so)并避免重复和不完整句子。语法需修正(‘I have much time’ 或 ‘I had a lot of time’)。
Example: I haven't practiced typing formally; however, I improved naturally by using keyboards a lot in primary and middle school and by chatting with friends online, which helped me type faster over time.
× Actually, I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting is more convenient and I can, uh, write something more, uh, more free.
✓ Actually, I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting is more convenient and I can write more freely.
错误类型:不正确的量词/词语搭配以及副词使用(归入“Incorrect use of quantifiers”类别)。原句中“write something more free”不符合英语表达习惯。英语中应使用副词“freely”来修饰动词“write”,并且不需要“something more”。建议:用副词修饰动词,简化短语。示例:"write more freely"。
× But I think in this digital age, the typing maybe more, uh, more convenient for, for finish my homework.
✓ But I think in this digital age, typing may be more convenient for finishing my homework.
错误类型:时态/动词形式及动词不定式和动名词使用错误(归入“Incorrect use of quantifiers”大类中列出的相关问题)。原句中使用了“maybe”搭配不当,且“for finish my homework”应使用动名词“finishing”。建议:用“may be”或“may”表达可能性,并把动词改为动名词形式作为介词“for”的宾语。示例:"may be more convenient for finishing my homework"。
× Yeah, I I need to finish my homework so I need to type in on on laptop every day because.
✓ Yeah, I need to finish my homework, so I need to type on my laptop every day.
错误类型:句子结构错误与介词使用错误。原句含重复词"I I"和"on on",且介词搭配不当,应该说"type on my laptop"而不是"type in on on laptop"。另外句子末尾不应以“because”独立停顿,要把原因完整表达或删去“because”。建议:删除重复,修正介词并完成从句或去掉不完整的“because”。
× Umm, I think maybe I learn how to type on a keyboard since I was a kid, maybe in the primary school, because at that time we have the IT class, so we learn how to type on keyboard at that time.
✓ Umm, I think maybe I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was a kid, maybe in primary school, because at that time we had IT classes, so we learned how to type on a keyboard.
错误类型:过去时使用错误(应使用过去式,而不是现在式)。句中“learn”应改为过去式“learned”,并且“since I was a kid”用于持续到现在的情况,不适合这里,改为“when I was a kid”。同时“we have”应为过去式“we had”,以及“we learn”改为“we learned”。建议:将句中动词改为过去式并用“when”代替“since”来表示过去某时发生的动作。
× Actually I don't improve my typing intentionally because in my age of the middle school or primary school primary school I have many time to practice that, but I think when I need to chat with my friends on WeChat, I need to type so my.
✓ Actually I didn't improve my typing intentionally because when I was in primary or middle school I had plenty of time to practice, but I think when I need to chat with my friends on WeChat, I have to type.
错误类型:时态和句子结构错误。句中描述过去的情况应使用过去时(didn't improve / was / had),而关于现在的需要应使用现在时(have to type)。原句还存在重复“primary school primary school”、不自然的“in my age of the middle school”以及句子未完结。建议:整理时间状语顺序,改用过去时描述过去的习惯,用现在时描述当前需要,并删去重复词,补全句子。