Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
For me, I prefer handwriting 'cause I think handwriting can enhance my remembering 'cause when I write down some words I can I always get a better a better remembering of things rather than typing on the computer or.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Yes, exactly, I used the laptop everyday, especially when I take lectures or tortoise 'cause I'm a student in a university right now, I need to use the laptop every day, especially take notes or write my assignments.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
Well, I learned to use the keyboard to tap the words, I think when I was 12, I think at the time it's in primary school, uh, we got the classes like in computer class and for right for me right now, I can take notes by using the keyboard quite quickly.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
Well, I think regularly practice is really important, but sometime, but sometimes these can be really boring, you know. So I think that kind of tapping games or speed tests at this time is really helpful. I usually spend about 15 to 20 minutes a day. That's really increase.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: 回答要更简洁、有条理,并使用连词连接观点和原因。注意避免重复和犹豫词(如“I can I”)。可以先给出主题句,然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持。发音和流利度方面要减少重复与停顿。
Example: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. When I write notes by hand, the act of forming letters and summarizing ideas makes the material stick in my memory, whereas typing often feels more passive.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 64.0Suggestion: 回答应更直接并纠正词汇错误(如“tortoise”应为“tutorials”或“tutorials/online courses”)。避免冗余(重复“especially”)。可以先说类型,再说明用途和频率。
Example: Yes, I use a laptop every day. As a university student I need it for attending lectures, taking notes and writing assignments, so it's an essential tool for my studies.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答要结构清晰:直接给出时间,然后说明学习地点或方式,最后简单总结现在的能力。避免重复‘I think’,减少犹豫词和多余描述。
Example: I learned to type when I was about 12 in my primary school's computer classes. Since then I have practised regularly, so now I can type quite quickly for taking notes.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 72.0Suggestion: 回答要更流畅、用词准确(如“tapping games”可改为“typing games”)。结构上先给方法,再解释并举例说明频率或效果。避免结尾的语法错误(“That's really increase”)。
Example: I improve my typing by practising regularly, usually with online typing games and speed tests. I spend about 15 to 20 minutes a day, which has noticeably increased my speed and accuracy.
× For me, I prefer handwriting 'cause I think handwriting can enhance my remembering 'cause when I write down some words I can I always get a better a better remembering of things rather than typing on the computer or.
✓ For me, I prefer handwriting because I think handwriting can enhance my memory; when I write down words I always remember things better than when I type on the computer.
问题类型:动词的现在分词形式(ID 10)。原句使用了“remembering”作为名词,且存在重复和口语填充词("I can I always get a better a better remembering"),使句子不通顺。应使用名词“memory”或使用动词短语“remember things better”。建议去掉重复和口语化的填充词,保持句子简洁。
× Yes, exactly, I used the laptop everyday, especially when I take lectures or tortoise 'cause I'm a student in a university right now, I need to use the laptop every day, especially take notes or write my assignments.
✓ Yes, exactly, I use the laptop every day, especially when I attend lectures, because I'm a university student now; I need to use the laptop every day, especially to take notes or write my assignments.
问题类型:过去时问题(ID 5)。原句中“used the laptop everyday”使用了过去式,但上下文表明是现在习惯,应使用现在时“use”。另外有词汇错误“tortoise”应为“tutorials”或“attend lectures”,并且不定式结构“especially to take notes”更合适。建议根据时间状语选择正确时态,纠正错词并使用正确的动词不定式结构。
× Well, I learned to use the keyboard to tap the words, I think when I was 12, I think at the time it's in primary school, uh, we got the classes like in computer class and for right for me right now, I can take notes by using the keyboard quite quickly.
✓ Well, I learned to use the keyboard to type when I was 12. At that time I was in primary school and we had computer classes. As for me now, I can take notes using the keyboard quite quickly.
问题类型:过去时问题(ID 5)。原句时态和时序混乱,应把学会键盘操作的动作用过去时(learned),并把现在的能力用现在时表述(I can take notes)。另外“tap the words”不常用,应改为“type”。建议分句清晰,分别用过去时和现在时表达不同时间的动作。
× Well, I think regularly practice is really important, but sometime, but sometimes these can be really boring, you know. So I think that kind of tapping games or speed tests at this time is really helpful. I usually spend about 15 to 20 minutes a day. That's really increase.
✓ Well, I think regular practice is really important, but sometimes it can be really boring. So tapping games or speed tests are really helpful. I usually spend about 15 to 20 minutes a day; that really helps me improve.
问题类型:现在时问题(ID 6)。原句中“regularly practice”搭配不当,应为“regular practice”;“sometime”应为副词复数形式“sometimes”;“these can be”与后文的单数对象不一致,应改为“it can be”或把主语改为复数;“is really helpful”用于复数主语应改为“are really helpful”;最后“That’s really increase”语法错误,应用现在时动词短语如“that really helps me improve”。建议检查主谓一致与名词/动词搭配,使用正确的时态形式。