Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer handwriting because compared to typing on laptops, I'm more good at handwriting in papers and handwriting always help me remember informations more easily.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
Yes, I tap on laptop keyboards every day because recently I'm preparing for the IELTS test so and attending a online lessons, so I have to use it to finish my assignments and take notes.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
I learned how to type on laptop in primary school. A class called the computer. The teacher told us basic technique and we practiced every.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
I improve my typing skills by typing a lot and use it more often. For example, when I was taking online lessons, I tend to typing on laptops so as to I can improve.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答要更自然且語法正確,避免重複表達。開頭直接回應問題,接著用一兩個句子給出具體原因或例子,並使用連接詞使語意連貫。例如注意語法(more good → better;informations → information)和冠詞用法。
Example: I prefer handwriting. I find I can concentrate better when I write on paper, and writing things down helps me remember information more effectively.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答應更簡潔且語法正確,避免口語填充(so and)。先直接回答,再用一到兩句具體說明原因,使用連接詞並注意冠詞(a online → an online)。
Example: Yes, I use a laptop keyboard every day. I'm preparing for the IELTS exam and attending online lessons, so I often type to complete assignments and take notes.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 需要更連貫完整的句子並補足細節。以時間句開頭,接著解釋學習情況並給出具体細節或例子,避免片語不完整(A class called the computer → There was a class called Computer)。
Example: I learned how to type on a laptop in primary school. We had a class called Computer where the teacher taught basic techniques and we practised regularly on the school computers.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答要具體說明方法並使用正確時態和動詞形式(use → using;tend to typing → tend to type;so as to I can → so that I can)。提供具體活動或練習頻率會更好。
Example: I improve my typing by practising regularly and using online typing exercises. For example, during online lessons I try to type my notes quickly and I also use typing websites for 15–20 minutes each day to build speed and accuracy.
× I prefer handwriting because compared to typing on laptops, I'm more good at handwriting in papers and handwriting always help me remember informations more easily.
✓ I prefer handwriting because, compared to typing on laptops, I'm better at handwriting on paper, and handwriting always helps me remember information more easily.
句中有多处错误: 1) “more good” 用法不正确,应使用比较级“better”。 2) “handwriting in papers” 介词搭配错误,应该是“handwriting on paper”。 3) 主语“handwriting” 为第三人称单数,谓语应为“helps”。 4) “informations” 为不可数名词,正确形式是“information”。 建议:使用正确的形容词比较级(good → better),注意介词搭配(on paper),主谓一致(单数主语用单数动词),以及不可数名词不用复数形式。
× Yes, I tap on laptop keyboards every day because recently I'm preparing for the IELTS test so and attending a online lessons, so I have to use it to finish my assignments and take notes.
✓ Yes, I type on laptop keyboards every day because recently I'm preparing for the IELTS test and attending online lessons, so I have to use them to finish my assignments and take notes.
句中问题: 1) “tap” 用词不最佳,改为常用的“type”。 2) “so and attending” 连接词冗余且语序错误,应为“and attending”。 3) “a online lessons” 冠词和单复数错误,应为“online lessons”。 4) 指代“laptop keyboards”应使用复数代词“them”而非“it”。 建议:注意动词选择(tap → type),并正确连接并列成分,用复数或无冠词形式匹配名词(lessons),以及代词与先行词在数上一致。
× I learned how to type on laptop in primary school.
✓ I learned how to type on a laptop in primary school.
问题主要是冠词和名词短语:英语中应在单个可数名词前加不定冠词“a”。此外“on laptop”通常表达为“on a laptop”。建议:可数单数名词前加合适冠词。
× A class called the computer.
✓ There was a class called Computer.
原句缺乏动词,结构不完整。根据上下文应使用存在句或过去式描述过去有一门课,因此改为“There was a class called Computer.”(过去有一门叫“Computer”的课)。建议:确保句子包含谓语动词并与时态一致。
× The teacher told us basic technique and we practiced every.
✓ The teacher taught us basic techniques, and we practiced every day.
问题点: 1) “told us basic technique” 搭配不当,通常用“teach/taught”而不是“tell”来表达教某项技能;“basic technique”应为复数“basic techniques”。 2) 句尾“we practiced every” 不完整,缺少名词“day”。 建议:用正确的动词搭配(teach)和复数形式表示多个技术点,并补全短语(every day)。
× I improve my typing skills by typing a lot and use it more often.
✓ I improve my typing skills by typing a lot and using it more often.
并列结构中两个动作应保持形式一致;前半句用动名词“typing”,因此后半句也应使用动名词形式“using”。此外“use it”中“it”指代不明,改为省略或用更明确表达。建议:保持并列动词形式一致(-ing)。
× For example, when I was taking online lessons, I tend to typing on laptops so as to I can improve.
✓ For example, when I was taking online lessons, I tended to type on laptops so that I could improve.
问题有几处: 1) 时态不一致:前半句是过去进行时,后半句应使用过去倾向“tended”。 2) “tend to typing” 搭配错误,应为“tend to type”。 3) “so as to I can improve” 语序和从属连词错误,正确为“so that I could improve”(且要与过去时态一致)。 建议:注意时态一致性(过去描述用过去形式),动词不定式搭配(tend to do),以及从属连词“so that”后用完整句子并匹配时态。