Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer typing. With the Internet development. Typing brings us more convenient if we face some difficulties or we need to finish some some works. Typing is faster than handwriting.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
I use laptop keyboard every day because it is more and easy to borrow it everywhere. When I go to school I can bring it that is more convenient for me to study and take writing.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
When I had my first phone, I learned to type on my keyboard. It was quite convenient for me, but I become much faster. I truly understand how convenient for messenger and quickly research.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
I will use some apps to practical actually everyday would not use WeChat. I also wear typing. It's also improve my typing skills in my daily lives.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答要更连贯、完整,避免语法错误和重复。先用一句话直接回答,再给出一到两条具体理由并用连接词衔接。注意单复数和时态,以及删除重复词(如“some some”)。
Example: I prefer typing because it is generally faster than handwriting and easier to edit. In addition, with the development of the Internet, typing allows me to quickly search information and communicate with others when I have problems.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 回答要结构清晰,使用正确的词汇搭配(例如 'easier to carry' 而非 'easy to borrow')。用连接词把句子连起来,给出具体情境说明为何方便。注意冠词和语法(a/an, be 动词)。
Example: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it is easier to carry around than a desktop. For example, I can bring my laptop to school or a cafe, which makes studying and writing assignments more convenient.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答需要更准确的时态和表达。先给出时间点或阶段,然后说明过程和结果,使用连接词使句子流畅。避免不自然的短句和语序错误(如 'become much faster' 应为 'became much faster')。
Example: I started learning to type when I got my first smartphone as a teenager. Over time I became much faster, and now I find typing very convenient for messaging and quick online research.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答要更具体并且语法正确。说明使用哪些应用或练习方法,并解释频率和效果。避免不连贯的短语(如 'wear typing'),使用清晰的连接词来组织信息。
Example: I improve my typing by practising with typing apps such as TypingClub or online exercises for at least 15 minutes a day. I also avoid using apps that use autocomplete so that I can practise typing full words, which helps increase my speed and accuracy.
× With the Internet development.
✓ With the development of the Internet.
句子缺少正确的结构表达现在的状态。应使用名词短语“the development of the Internet”来说明背景,而不是不完整的片段。建议使用完整短语来表达“随着互联网的发展”。
× Typing brings us more convenient if we face some difficulties or we need to finish some some works.
✓ Typing makes things more convenient for us if we face some difficulties or need to finish some work.
“more convenient”是形容词,需与动词make连用构成使役结构;原句中缺少主语-谓语搭配且“some works”不自然,复数可去掉或用“some tasks”。建议用“make ... more convenient”并将“works”改为“work”或“tasks”。
× Typing brings us more convenient if we face some difficulties or we need to finish some some works.
✓ Typing makes things more convenient for us if we face some difficulties or need to finish some work.
“works”在此语境中不常用,应使用不可数名词“work”或可数名词“tasks”。重复的“some”也需删除。建议根据上下文用“work”或“tasks”。
× Typing is faster than handwriting.
✓ Typing is faster than handwriting.
该句语法正确,主谓一致,无需修改。保留原句。
× I use laptop keyboard every day because it is more and easy to borrow it everywhere.
✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is easy to carry and borrow everywhere.
缺少冠词“a”;“more and easy”结构不正确,应该直接用“easy”或比较结构。将“borrow it everywhere”改为更自然的“carry and borrow everywhere”。建议加冠词并调整形容词结构。
× I use laptop keyboard every day because it is more and easy to borrow it everywhere.
✓ I use a laptop keyboard every day because it is easy to carry and borrow everywhere.
可数名词“laptop keyboard”在单数时需要冠词“a”或“the”。建议在单数可数名词前加冠词。
× When I go to school I can bring it that is more convenient for me to study and take writing.
✓ When I go to school, I can bring it, which is more convenient for me for studying and writing.
原句中“that is more convenient”连接不当,应使用非限定性定语从句“which is more convenient”。“take writing”不自然,改为“writing”或“take notes”。建议使用正确的从句连接词并改成“study and write”或“study and take notes”。
× When I had my first phone, I learned to type on my keyboard.
✓ When I got my first phone, I learned to type on the keyboard.
“had my first phone”在此上下文更自然的表达是“got my first phone”。此外“my keyboard”改为“the keyboard”更常用。建议用“get”表示获得手机的时间点。
× It was quite convenient for me, but I become much faster.
✓ It was quite convenient for me, and I became much faster.
时态不一致:前半句用过去时“was”,后半句应与之对应使用过去时“became”。此外连接词用“and”比“but”更合适表示并列转折。建议保持时态一致。
× I truly understand how convenient for messenger and quickly research.
✓ I truly understand how convenient it is for messaging and quick research.
原句缺少形式主语“it is”并且名词/动名词形式错误。“messenger”应为动名词“messaging”,“quickly research”应为名词短语“quick research”。建议使用“it is for ...”结构并将动词改为动名词或名词短语。
× How do you improve your typing?
✓ How do you improve your typing?
问题句本身无语法错误,时态使用正确,保持不变。
× I will use some apps to practical actually everyday would not use WeChat.
✓ I use some apps to practice every day; actually I don't usually use WeChat for that.
原句结构混乱,混用了将来时和现在时,单词“practical”用错,且“would not use WeChat”表达不清。建议改为现在时“use ... to practice every day”并清晰说明不常用微信。
× I also wear typing.
✓ I also practice typing.
“wear typing”是错误搭配,应使用动词“practice”来表示练习打字。建议用“practice typing”。
× It's also improve my typing skills in my daily lives.
✓ It also improves my typing skills in my daily life.
动词形式错误,主语“It”后应使用第三人称单数动词“improves”;“daily lives”应为单数短语“daily life”更自然。建议动词与主语一致并使用固定搭配“daily life”。