Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
So if I had to choose between typing or handwriting, my answer would be handwriting. I've always liked, uh, writing in different fonts and styles, and I just like using my hand to express myself instead of typing because it feels more authentic and I remember more things.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
I do not have much to type on a laptop or a keyboard. As I am a college student in India. More of my assignments are handwritten and since the boom of artificial intelligence, teachers prefer us writing, uh, assignments by hand rather than typing them out.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
I do not remember the exact age where I learned how to write on a keyboard, but I would assume it would be pretty early on. Perhaps I would be, uh, a second grader in school. Or it could be in 4th or 5th as well. I'm 18 now, so I don't really have much memory of the exact timeline.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
The only way you can improve your writing is by practicing consistently. If you have computer classes, you might want to use them efficiently. If you have a laptop at home, then you can practice pretty often, even daily or consistently, and you will be very quick and efficient with it pretty soon.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 78.0Suggestion: Make the answer more concise and natural by removing fillers, giving one clear reason, and adding a specific example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.
Example: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and helps me remember information better. For example, when I take lecture notes by hand I later recall details more easily. Also, I enjoy experimenting with different handwriting styles, which makes studying more engaging.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: Combine short fragments into full sentences, avoid vague statements and filler, and give a specific frequency or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain reasons clearly.
Example: I don't type on a laptop every day because most of my college assignments here in India are handwritten. For instance, in my courses professors often ask for written submissions rather than typed documents, so I rarely use a keyboard regularly.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: Give a single clear estimate instead of several hesitant guesses; remove fillers and add a brief supporting detail (context) to sound more confident and fluent.
Example: I don't recall the exact age, but I probably learned to type in second grade when my school introduced basic computer lessons. I remember practicing simple typing games during those classes, which helped me build basic skills early on.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: Be more specific about methods and give concrete examples or routines; use linking words to structure advice and avoid repeating 'consistently' multiple times.
Example: You improve typing mainly through regular, focused practice. For example, you could do 15 minutes of touch-typing exercises each day, use online typing tutors to track speed and accuracy, and apply those skills when typing assignments to build speed over a few weeks.
× So if I had to choose between typing or handwriting, my answer would be handwriting.
✓ So if I had to choose between typing and handwriting, my answer would be handwriting.
Use 'between A and B' not 'between A or B'. The preposition 'between' pairs with 'and' when offering two alternatives. Replace 'or' with 'and' to be grammatically correct.
× I do not have much to type on a laptop or a keyboard.
✓ I do not have much to type on a laptop or a keyboard.
This sentence is awkward rather than strictly ungrammatical; the intended meaning likely is 'I do not have much to type on my laptop or keyboard.' The issue is omission of a possessive; add 'my' to clarify: 'I do not have much to type on my laptop or keyboard.' This fixes noun reference and preserves singular/plural agreement.
× As I am a college student in India.
✓ I am a college student in India.
The original is a sentence fragment because it begins with 'As' which makes it dependent. Remove 'As' to form a complete independent sentence: 'I am a college student in India.' If you wish to keep the causal sense, write 'As I am a college student in India, ...' followed by a main clause.
× More of my assignments are handwritten and since the boom of artificial intelligence, teachers prefer us writing, uh, assignments by hand rather than typing them out.
✓ Most of my assignments are handwritten, and since the boom of artificial intelligence, teachers prefer us to write assignments by hand rather than typing them out.
Use 'most' not 'more' to indicate majority. Also use the correct verb pattern 'prefer someone to do something' or 'prefer doing something'; here 'prefer us to write' is appropriate. Replace 'writing' with 'to write' and add a comma before 'and' to join clauses.
× I do not remember the exact age where I learned how to write on a keyboard, but I would assume it would be pretty early on.
✓ I do not remember the exact age when I learned how to type on a keyboard, but I would assume it was pretty early on.
Use 'when' not 'where' to refer to time. Use 'type' not 'write' for keyboard input. Use simple past 'was' rather than conditional 'would be' when referring to a past assumption.
× Perhaps I would be, uh, a second grader in school.
✓ Perhaps I was a second grader in school.
When referring to a past state, use past tense 'was' not conditional 'would be'. 'Would be' is speculative about the future or conditional situations.
× Or it could be in 4th or 5th as well.
✓ Or it could have been in fourth or fifth grade as well.
Referencing past possible times requires past modal perfect or 'could have been'; use 'could have been' or 'was' and write grades in words with 'grade' for clarity: 'fourth or fifth grade.'
× I'm 18 now, so I don't really have much memory of the exact timeline.
✓ I'm 18 now, so I don't really remember the exact timeline.
Use 'remember' rather than 'have memory of' for natural English. The original is understandable but wordy; 'remember' is simpler and idiomatic.
× The only way you can improve your writing is by practicing consistently.
✓ The only way you can improve your typing is by practicing consistently.
Context refers to typing, not handwriting, so 'typing' is the correct noun. Grammatically, using 'practicing' after 'by' is correct; this suggestion aligns content with context.
× If you have computer classes, you might want to use them efficiently.
✓ If you have computer classes, you might want to use them effectively.
'Use efficiently' is not wrong but 'use effectively' is more idiomatic when advising someone to get the most benefit from classes. This is a stylistic improvement rather than strict grammar.
× If you have a laptop at home, then you can practice pretty often, even daily or consistently, and you will be very quick and efficient with it pretty soon.
✓ If you have a laptop at home, you can practice often, even daily, and you will become quick and efficient with it soon.
Simplify adverbs: 'pretty often' -> 'often', remove redundant 'consistently' and 'pretty soon' -> 'soon'. Use 'become' to indicate development over time. This fixes awkward redundancy and improves tense and aspect usage.