Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. I prefer handwriting), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words (umm, uh) and grammatical errors (use singular/plural and possessives correctly). Aim for 2–4 sentences with precise vocabulary like “expressive,” “memory,” or “focus.”

Example: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember and process ideas better. When I write by hand, the physical movement makes my thoughts clearer and I feel more emotionally connected to what I’m writing.

Suggestion: Answer directly (Yes/No), then provide one clear supporting detail. Use correct tense and simpler sentences. Remove unclear phrases and correct pronoun/reference errors. Use linking words like “because” or “so” appropriately.

Example: Yes, I use both a desktop and a laptop keyboard every day because I have been typing since childhood. As a result, typing feels natural and I can type quickly and accurately.

Suggestion: Give a clear time frame and two concise supporting details. Correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and avoid awkward metaphors. Replace unclear similes with concrete descriptions of improvement (e.g. “my fingers move automatically”).

Example: I learned to type when I was a child after my father bought a computer for our home. At first it was difficult, but with practice my typing became automatic and much faster.

Suggestion: Describe a specific method you use to improve typing (practice routines, online exercises, posture). Use linking words like “first” and “then” correctly. Avoid vague expressions and fillers, and write in 2–3 clear sentences.

Example: First, I practiced daily using online typing exercises to reduce my mistakes. Then I focused on accuracy before speed, and now I can type comfortably with fewer errors.

× It's absolutely general question, but a proper handwriting 'cause it's connected with emotions and connected with my brain.

✓ It's a general question, but I prefer proper handwriting because it's connected with emotions and with my brain.

Incorrect or missing articles and word choice. 'Absolutely general question' is unnatural; use 'a general question'. 'A proper handwriting' should be 'I prefer proper handwriting' (verb needed). 'Cause' is informal; use 'because'. Use parallel prepositional phrases 'connected with emotions and with my brain' for clarity. Suggestion: Add the article 'a', supply the subject and verb 'I prefer', replace 'cause' with 'because', and keep parallel structure.

× When my hand is moving umm at the underside my brain is thinking and my umm heads is cleaning by umm many thoughts.

✓ When my hand is moving under the page, my brain starts to think and my head is cleared of many thoughts.

Multiple structural and word choice errors. 'At the underside' is awkward; use 'under the page' or 'beneath the paper'. 'My brain is thinking' is awkward; 'my brain starts to think' or 'I start thinking' is better. 'Heads is cleaning by many thoughts' is ungrammatical—use passive or active correctly: 'my head is cleared of many thoughts' or 'my mind clears away many thoughts'. Verb agreement also wrong ('heads is'). Suggestion: Use coherent clause order, correct singular 'head', and choose appropriate verbs ('starts to think', 'is cleared').

× Yes, I type on the desktop and laptop keyboard every day and it's, uh, absolutely organic for me because I'm typing like this from since my childhood and it's absolutely connected with me.

✓ Yes, I type on desktop and laptop keyboards every day, and it's completely natural for me because I have been typing like this since my childhood and it feels connected to me.

Subject-verb and noun-number issues: 'desktop and laptop keyboard' should be plural 'keyboards' when referring to both. 'Absolutely organic' is odd; use 'completely natural'. 'I'm typing ... from since my childhood' mixes tenses and prepositions; correct is 'I have been typing ... since my childhood' (present perfect continuous or present perfect). 'It's absolutely connected with me' is awkward; 'it feels connected to me' is clearer. Suggestion: Make plural nouns agree, use proper tense 'have been typing', and choose natural collocations.

× My mind knows we are is one of the keyboards, so it's easy for me.

✓ My mind knows how to use the keyboard, so it's easy for me.

Nonsensical phrase 'we are is one of the keyboards' mixes pronouns and verbs incorrectly. The intended meaning is that the speaker is familiar with the keyboard; use 'knows how to use the keyboard' or 'is familiar with the keyboard'. Ensure meaningful subject-verb structure. Suggestion: Replace unclear clause with a clear present-tense statement describing familiarity.

× When I was a child my father bought me computer with keyboard and I was learning how to type it in my childhood.

✓ When I was a child, my father bought me a computer with a keyboard, and I learned how to type during my childhood.

Missing articles before 'computer' and 'keyboard' — should be 'a computer' and 'a keyboard'. 'I was learning how to type it in my childhood' is wordy and awkward; use simple past 'I learned how to type' or present perfect depending on context. Remove redundant 'in my childhood' when 'When I was a child' already indicates time. Suggestion: Add indefinite articles and use concise past-tense phrasing.

× At first time it was really hard, but now my fingers feeling like automatically the kiss.

✓ At first it was really hard, but now my fingers feel automatic.

Tense and verb form errors. 'My fingers feeling like automatically the kiss' is ungrammatical and contains strange metaphor 'the kiss'. Use present simple 'my fingers feel automatic' or 'move automatically'. 'At first time' should be 'At first' or 'At first it was'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms ('feel' or 'move automatically') and remove unclear metaphors.

× It's first time I was taking my mistake but finally I remember umm the address of alphabets.

✓ At first I made many mistakes, but finally I remembered the order of the alphabet.

Awkward structure and word choice: 'It's first time I was taking my mistake' is incorrect. Use 'At first I made many mistakes'. 'I remember umm the address of alphabets' is incorrect—likely intended 'the order of the alphabet'. Use past tense 'remembered' to match timeline. Suggestion: Rephrase to clear, idiomatic past-tense statements and use 'order of the alphabet'.

× So today my fingers are filling umm all of them and it's comfortable now.

✓ So today my fingers can reach all the keys and it's comfortable now.

Incorrect verb 'filling' and pronoun 'all of them' unclear. Likely intended 'cover' or 'reach all the keys'. Use 'can reach all the keys' or 'hit all the keys' for clarity. 'It's comfortable now' is fine. Suggestion: Use accurate verb collocation for typing actions ('reach', 'press', 'hit') and specify the object 'keys'.