Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations and repetitions, and add one brief specific reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' once and avoid filler sounds ('uh').

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting. Because I work in an office where I need to send emails and messages daily, typing is faster and more convenient for communication.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly: begin with which device you use, then give one specific reason or context. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid repetitions. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: I use a laptop every day. I prefer it because I study and email my professors from my laptop, which is more portable and convenient than a desktop.

Suggestion: Provide a clear time reference and a concise explanation. Use past tense for past events, avoid repetitions, and give one specific detail about the class or how long you practiced.

Example: I learned to type at school when I was about 12. It was an optional computer class where we practiced typing exercises and basic computer skills for a few months.

Suggestion: Give a direct method and a specific example of practice. Use present simple to describe habits, avoid hesitation and unclear phrases like 'capture'. Mention one targeted activity (e.g., timed practice, online lessons) to show intentional improvement.

Example: I improve my typing by practicing every day while doing assignments and emails. In addition, I use online typing tests for ten minutes daily to increase my speed and accuracy.

× Well, I prefer typing because in this era, uh, typing is more valuable because we have to send a lot of emails and messages to, to for our profession and to send our loved ones. So I will prefer typing.

✓ Well, I prefer typing because in this era typing is more useful since we have to send a lot of emails and messages for our profession and to our loved ones. So I prefer typing.

Errors: awkward present tense phrasing and unnecessary future 'will' after expressing a general preference. Fix: Use simple present consistently for habits and general truths ('prefer', 'is more useful', 'have to send'). Remove filler words and redundant prepositions ('to for'). Use 'to our loved ones' not 'to send our loved ones'. Suggestion: Keep verbs in simple present when stating preferences or general facts.

× The student are you always use the desktop or a laptop in my everyday life because with the help of desktop and laptop I completed my study and I always prefer to send the e-mail with the help of laptop to to my professor or or to the my employee.

✓ I always use a desktop or a laptop in my everyday life because with the help of a desktop or laptop I complete my studies and I usually prefer to send emails from my laptop to my professor or my employer.

Errors: subject-verb disagreement ('The student are you always use' unclear subject), wrong article usage and tense inconsistency ('completed' past vs general habit), duplicated words ('to to', 'or or'), incorrect noun ('employee' vs 'employer'). Fix: Clarify subject 'I', use simple present for habitual actions ('use', 'complete'), plural 'studies', use articles correctly ('a desktop'), remove duplicates, and use 'employer'. Suggestion: Start with the correct subject and use simple present for routines; proofread for repeated words.

× In my school I learn how to type on keyword because there are because in school it's so OP optional subject that we can learn how to use computer and how to type. How to type on laptops.

✓ At my school I learned how to type on a keyboard because it was an optional subject where we could learn how to use computers and how to type on laptops.

Errors: wrong tense ('learn' should be past 'learned' for a past event), incorrect word 'keyword' instead of 'keyboard', redundant phrases ('because there are because'), article and count nouns ('computer' should be plural 'computers'). Fix: Use past tense for past learning, correct vocabulary, and streamline sentence. Suggestion: Use past tense when referring to completed actions in the past and check word choice ('keyboard').

× I'll, uh, I think every day when I use a laptop for completing my assignments and for, uh, emails it, it already improved my typing because, uh, I have not a lot of time. So it's become a my capture to type in a speed, uh, because of everyday usage of.

✓ I think that using a laptop every day to complete my assignments and send emails has improved my typing because I do not have a lot of time. So it has become a habit to type quickly because of daily use.

Errors: tense inconsistency ('I think' present vs 'already improved' awkward; should use present perfect 'has improved' for a past action with present relevance), incorrect negative form 'I have not a lot of time' (use 'I do not have a lot of time'), wrong noun 'capture' should be 'habit', awkward phrase 'type in a speed' -> 'type quickly', and incomplete ending. Fix: Use present perfect for improvement over time, correct negatives, and choose correct nouns and adverbs. Suggestion: Use present perfect to show change over time and select correct collocations ('habit', 'type quickly').