Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 内容は明確ですが、文法と語順、冗長な繰り返しを修正し、接続語で理由をスムーズに示すとよいです。具体的には：1) 冗長な語や繰り返し（"when I when I" や "more faster"）を避ける。2) 比較表現は正しい形（"faster" だけで十分）を使う。3) トピック文で答えを明確にし、その後に理由を一文で補足する。4) 例を一つだけ短く示す。

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster. For example, when I do assignments I can finish them more quickly, which saves time for other studies.

Suggestion: 答えは意図が伝わりますが、文法ミスと語順、語彙の選択を改善してください。具体的には：1) 冠詞（a/an/the）を正しく使う（"a laptop keyboard" ではなく "a laptop" や "a laptop keyboard" のどちらか）。2) 理由を論理的に並べる（まず利便性、次に軽さなど）。3) 不要な語の重複（"put it put in my back"）を避け、正しい表現（"in my backpack"）を使う。4) 接続詞（for example, because, and）で文をつなぐ。

Example: I use a laptop keyboard every day because my laptop is brighter and more portable than a desktop. It’s slim and light, so I can easily carry it in my backpack.

Suggestion: 答えの流れは良いですが、時制や前置詞、語順を正しく使って自然に話す練習をしてください。具体的には：1) 過去時制と前置詞（"at university" または "at my university"）を使う。2) 接続詞で時系列を示す（"After I started university, ..."）。3) 動詞の形を整える（"advised me to use a typing app"）。4) 1〜2文で簡潔にまとめる。

Example: I learned to type fairly recently at university. After I started there, a teacher showed me proper typing techniques and advised me to use a typing app to practice.

Suggestion: 改善方法は明確ですが、冗長な表現と文法を整理し、練習の頻度や具体的な方法を加えると良いです。具体的には：1) 同じ内容の繰り返しを避ける（"I improve..." と "I found I improve..."）。2) アプリ名や練習内容（タイピング練習、テスト、タイムトライアル）を具体的に述べる。3) 目的（正確さや速度向上）を一文で示す。

Example: I improve my typing by using a computer typing app and practicing every night. I usually do timed exercises and accuracy drills to increase my speed and reduce errors.

× That's because it is more faster than handwriting when for example, when I when I do assignment, I can finish more faster.

✓ That's because it is faster than handwriting; for example, when I do an assignment, I can finish faster.

'More faster' is incorrect because 'faster' is already the comparative form; do not add 'more'. Repeated 'when' is redundant. Include the article 'an' before 'assignment'. Use a semicolon or separate clauses for clarity.

× I type laptop keyboard every day, that's because it's brighter than desktop so it's allow me to carry on easily and also it's slim so I can put it put in my back.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day; that's because it's lighter than a desktop, so it allows me to carry it easily, and it's slim so I can put it in my bag.

Missing preposition 'on' before 'a laptop keyboard' and missing article 'a' before 'desktop'. 'Brighter' is likely meant to be 'lighter' when referring to weight. 'It's allow' should be 'it allows' (subject-verb agreement). 'Carry on' is incorrect for carrying an object; use 'carry it'. 'Put it put in my back' is ungrammatical; use 'put it in my bag'.

× Actually I learned recently and my university.

✓ Actually I learned recently at my university.

Missing preposition 'at' to indicate location/time of learning. 'Learned recently and my university' is fragmented; add 'at' and remove 'and'.

× After I attend my university, my teacher told me how to type and advise me to do typing application to improve my typing skill.

✓ After I attended university, my teacher taught me how to type and advised me to use typing applications to improve my typing skills.

Tense inconsistency: 'After I attend' should be past 'attended' to match 'told'. 'Told me how to type and advise me' needs past tense 'advised' and 'taught' is more natural than 'told' here. 'Do typing application' is incorrect; use 'use typing applications'. 'Typing skill' should be plural 'typing skills'.

× I improve my typing skill through application on computer.

✓ I improve my typing skills through applications on the computer.

Use plural 'skills' and plural 'applications' for general use. Add article 'the' before 'computer' for specificity or say 'on computers'.

× I practice it every night.

✓ I practice every night.

'Practice it' is acceptable but unnecessary; simpler 'I practice every night' is natural. Ensure present tense for habitual action.

× I found I improve my skill through it.

✓ I have found that I improve my skills through it.

Use present perfect 'have found' to link past discovery with present result. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills'. Add 'that' for clarity.

× I want to improve it more to.

✓ I want to improve it more.

Trailing 'to' is unnecessary and incorrect. Remove 'to' to complete the sentence.