Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 発音と語順、文法の明確さに注意してください。簡潔で自然なトピック文を最初に述べ、その後で具体的な理由や例を1〜2文で補足しましょう。不要なフィラー（uh, like）を減らし、単語の選択（"mistaking" → "mistakes"、"stamps or like the faces" → "emoji/stickers"）を適切にしてください。

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it makes editing much easier. For example, I can quickly delete mistakes and rearrange sentences, and I often add emojis or stickers to make messages friendlier.

Suggestion: 質問に直接答えた上で、理由や状況を具体的に一文か二文で述べてください。発話が途切れがちなので、簡潔で論理的な文構成（主語＋動詞＋目的語）を意識し、フィラーを減らして情報を整理しましょう。

Example: Yes, I type on a laptop every day because I use it for my university club, which organizes the school festival. I usually write emails and prepare event schedules on my laptop.

Suggestion: 時制と語彙をはっきりさせ、練習方法を具体的に述べてください。曖昧な表現（"I plugged this"）や繰り返しを避け、接続詞で文をつなげて論理を明確にしましょう。

Example: I learned to type before entering university. I practiced regularly with typing apps and spent about 30 minutes a day improving my speed and accuracy.

Suggestion: 回答を整理して、具体的な練習量や方法、結果を簡潔に述べてください。フィラーを削り、自然な表現（"I practiced for about three hours a day"）を使い、改善の成果を明示すると説得力が増します。

Example: I improved my typing by practicing about three hours a day when I was in the third year of high school. As a result, my speed and accuracy improved significantly, and I can now type quickly without looking at the keyboard.

× I prefer type to typing.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting.

The student used 'type' (a verb or noun) incorrectly; the comparative preference structure requires gerund nouns. Use 'prefer A to B' with gerunds: 'prefer typing to handwriting.' Improve by using the -ing form for activities (verbal nouns).

× It is because I can erase my mistaking easily and, uh, I can add the many, uh, stamps or like the faces on their sentence.

✓ It is because I can easily erase my mistakes, and I can add many stamps or emoji to my sentences.

Multiple issues: 'mistaking' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'mistakes'. 'Easily' is the correct adverb placement before the verb. 'the many' is unnecessary; use 'many' without article. 'faces' and 'on their sentence' are awkward — 'emoji' and 'to my sentences' are natural. Suggest using correct noun forms and placing adverbs before verbs for clarity.

× Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

✓ Do you type on a desktop or a laptop keyboard every day?

Missing article before 'laptop' makes the noun phrase sound incomplete. Use an indefinite article 'a' for singular countable nouns. Ensure consistency: 'a desktop or a laptop keyboard' or 'a desktop or laptop keyboard.'

× Yes, I type on laptop every day my uh, club, uh, which, uh, is the, which organize uh, the uh, school festival in my high school uh, in my university, uh, how, how in that club uh, if.

✓ Yes, I type on my laptop every day. My club, which organizes the school festival at my university, ...

The original is ungrammatical and run-on. Needs separation into sentences, possessive 'my laptop', correct verb form 'organizes' for the singular club, and 'at my university' for location. Suggest breaking into clear clauses and supplying missing verbs and articles.

× I learned it before I entered university.

✓ I learned it before I entered university.

This sentence is acceptable: past tense 'learned' correctly matches 'entered'. No change necessary. Keep past tenses consistent when describing past events.

× I plugged this, I practiced it by using apps for, uh, practicing typing.

✓ I practiced it by using apps for practicing typing.

'I plugged this' is incorrect and unclear; likely unnecessary. Use 'by using apps for practicing typing' or more naturally 'by using typing practice apps.' Ensure prepositions are used correctly: 'for practicing' rather than 'for, practicing.'

× Uh, it's sometime it sometimes was the.

✓ Uh, sometimes it was like that.

Original is fragmented and ungrammatical. Use 'sometimes' properly and a clear predicate: 'sometimes it was like that.' Advise simplifying and completing thoughts.

× As I said, I used up, uh, when, uh, I was, uh, third grade in high school, uh, I used up and practiced typing for three hours or like that, uh, a day.

✓ As I said, when I was in the third grade of high school, I practiced typing for about three hours a day.

Remove incorrect 'used up' which is not appropriate here. Use 'in the third grade' or 'in my third year' and 'about' instead of 'or like that.' 'A day' should follow the duration. Suggest clearer time expressions and removing filler words.

× Uh, and uh, my skills of typing really improved at the time.

✓ And my typing skills really improved at that time.

Use 'typing skills' (noun phrase) rather than 'skills of typing.' 'At that time' is more natural than 'at the time.' Rearrangement yields natural English.