Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence completeness, use linking words and reduce redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, follow with two concise supporting points, and correct verb forms and articles.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and makes editing and sharing much easier. In addition, typing is more eco-friendly since it reduces paper use, which helps save trees and lower waste.

Suggestion: Good structure and clarity. To improve further, add a short linking word for cohesion and a specific example (e.g., tasks) to make your answer more vivid.

Example: Yes, I use both a desktop and a laptop every day. I usually use my desktop at work for long tasks like writing reports because it’s more comfortable, while I use my laptop at home for studying and quick emails.

Suggestion: Fix grammar, avoid fragmented sentences, and use past tense consistently. Provide a clearer timeline and one specific detail about the lessons or exercises to support your answer.

Example: I learned to type in high school during our computer lessons. We practiced on desktop computers with regular typing exercises, which helped me improve both speed and accuracy.

Suggestion: Clarify and correct grammar, remove repetitions, and use linking words for coherence. Give a specific routine or time frame to make the answer more concrete.

Example: I believe practice makes perfect, so I train a little every day to build muscle memory and avoid looking at the keyboard. For example, I used online typing games for three months and my speed increased from about 40 to 65 words per minute.

× Personally I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and make editing or sharing more efficient and it's also more eco friendly since we don't need to use.

✓ Personally, I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and makes editing or sharing more efficient, and it's also more eco-friendly since we don't need to use paper.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' (third person singular). Also 'eco friendly' should be hyphenated as 'eco-friendly' when used as a compound adjective before a noun, and the sentence lacked the object 'paper' after 'use.' Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with their subjects (add -s for third person singular) and include the necessary noun to complete the idea.

× Yes, I type on both desktop and laptop every day. I usually use my desktop at work because it is more comfortable for long tasks and I use my laptop at home for study and quick writing.

✓ Yes, I type on both the desktop and the laptop every day. I usually use my desktop at work because it is more comfortable for long tasks, and I use my laptop at home for studying and quick writing.

When referring to specific items in a general context like the two devices just mentioned, use the definite article 'the' before 'desktop' and 'laptop.' Also, 'study' in this sentence should be the gerund 'studying' to match parallel structure with 'quick writing.' Suggestion: use articles for specific known items and maintain parallel verb forms (gerunds) in lists.

× Well, I think I learned to type around the time when I was in high school. During our computer lessons. We we practice on desktop computers and I remember do typing exercise to improve my speed and accuracy.

✓ Well, I think I learned to type around the time when I was in high school during our computer lessons. We practiced on desktop computers, and I remember doing typing exercises to improve my speed and accuracy.

Multiple issues: 'During our computer lessons.' is a sentence fragment and should be combined with the previous sentence. 'We we practice' has repetition and wrong tense; use past tense 'practiced' to match 'learned' and 'was.' 'Do typing exercise' is incorrect: use the past participle/gerund form 'doing typing exercises' or better 'doing typing exercises.' Also pluralize 'exercise' to 'exercises.' Suggestion: combine fragments into complete sentences, use past tense consistently for past events, and use gerunds or plural nouns where appropriate.

× Where I think practice makes perfect. If we practice enough, our muscle developed muscle memory can so we don't have to look at the keyboard which improves our speed and accuracy. For example, I use online typing games for months and my speed increase noticeably.

✓ Well, I think practice makes perfect. If we practice enough, our muscles develop muscle memory, so we don't have to look at the keyboard, which improves our speed and accuracy. For example, I used online typing games for months and my speed increased noticeably.

Several structural and tense errors: 'Where I think' is incorrect; 'Well' fits here. 'Our muscle developed muscle memory can so' is ungrammatical: correct structure is 'our muscles develop muscle memory,' plural 'muscles' and present tense 'develop' for a general truth. 'Can' is unnecessary and misplaced. The final sentence mixes tenses; if referring to past practice, use past tense 'used' and 'increased.' Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct subject-verb order, pluralize where needed, and keep tense consistent (present tense for general truths, past tense for past actions).