Part 1
Examiner
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Candidate
I prefer hand lighting. I often miss type when writing. And I can't type fast as other people do. That's why I prefer handwriting.
Examiner
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Candidate
No, I don't actually. I don't have neither desktop or laptop, but I use my iPhone everyday so I type. On.
Examiner
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Candidate
I think I learned how to type on a keyboard was when I was a university student entering a university university I used a computer for the first time. I didn't have my own, so I.
Examiner
How do you improve your typing?
Candidate
I didn't use any training program or applications, but I typed a lot at work, so gradually I improved my typing and that helps me get less misty mistyping.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答をより自然で明確にするため、誤った語彙や文法を直し、簡潔なトピックセンテンスと具体的な理由をリンク語(because, so)でつなぐ練習をしてください。また、最大5文以内にまとめ、発音上の混同(hand lighting → handwriting, miss type → mistype)を避けるためにゆっくりはっきり話す訓練をしてください。
Example: I prefer handwriting because I often make typing mistakes and I’m not as fast as other people. For example, when I type quickly I frequently hit the wrong keys, so I find handwriting more reliable for notes.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 否定表現と二重否定の誤り(I don't have neither → I don't have either)を直し、短く明確に答えてから補足を述べる練習をしてください。接続表現(but, so)を正しく使い、語尾の不要な単語を省くようにしてください。
Example: No, I don’t use a desktop or laptop every day. I don’t own one, but I type a lot on my iPhone for messages and emails.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 文の構造が不自然で不完全なので、まず簡潔な主文で時点を示し、その後理由や状況を説明する練習をしてください。重複語(university university)や不完結の文を避け、過去形と時を示す語を正確に使ってください。
Example: I learned to type when I started university. It was the first time I used a computer regularly because I didn’t have one at home.
How do you improve your typing?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 文法と語彙の誤り(didn't use → I haven't used or I didn’t use; misty mistyping → mistyping)を直し、時制を統一して論理的に説明する練習をしてください。接続詞(but, so)を使って経験と結果を明確につなぐと良いです。
Example: I haven't used any training programs, but I typed a lot at work, so I gradually improved. As a result, I now make fewer typing mistakes.
× I prefer hand lighting.
✓ I prefer handwriting.
The student used 'hand lighting', which is incorrect; the correct noun is 'handwriting'. This is a vocabulary/word choice error rather than grammar; replace the incorrect adjective+noun with the correct single noun 'handwriting'. Keep the simple present tense to express preference.
× I often miss type when writing.
✓ I often mistype when writing.
The student wrote 'miss type' as two words; the correct verb is the single word 'mistype'. Use the base form 'mistype' after the adverb 'often' to describe habitual action in the present tense.
× And I can't type fast as other people do.
✓ And I can't type as fast as other people do.
The sentence is missing the word 'as' before 'fast' in the comparison structure 'as fast as'. Insert 'as' to form the correct comparative phrase 'can't type as fast as other people do'.
× No, I don't actually.
✓ No, I don't, actually.
This is a punctuation and adverb placement issue: place the adverb 'actually' after the clause with a comma for natural spoken English: 'No, I don't, actually.' The original lacks natural flow but not a strict grammatical violation.
× I don't have neither desktop or laptop, but I use my iPhone everyday so I type.
✓ I don't have either a desktop or a laptop, but I use my iPhone every day, so I type on it.
The student used a double negative 'don't have neither' which is incorrect; use 'either' after a negative. Use 'a' before countable nouns 'desktop' and 'laptop'. 'Every day' is two words for frequency. Add 'on it' to clarify typing on the iPhone. Use commas to separate clauses for clarity.
× On.
✓ I type on it.
A fragment 'On.' is incomplete. Expand to a full clause that completes the previous thought: 'I type on it.' This provides the object of the preposition and is grammatically complete.
× I think I learned how to type on a keyboard was when I was a university student entering a university university I used a computer for the first time.
✓ I think I learned how to type on a keyboard when I entered university and used a computer for the first time.
The original contains redundancy ('university university') and an incorrect clause structure with 'I learned how to type on a keyboard was when...'. Use a correct time clause 'when I entered university' and combine related ideas with 'and'. Keep past tense 'learned' to match the time reference.
× I didn't have my own, so I.
✓ I didn't have my own, so I used the university's computer.
The sentence is a fragment ending with 'so I.' Complete the thought by specifying what was done as a result: 'so I used the university's computer.' Maintain past tense consistency.
× I didn't use any training program or applications, but I typed a lot at work, so gradually I improved my typing and that helps me get less misty mistyping.
✓ I didn't use any training programs or applications, but I typed a lot at work, so gradually I improved my typing and now I make fewer mistypes.
Use plural 'programs' to match context. Keep past tense 'didn't use' and 'improved' for past actions, then switch to present 'now I make' for current result. 'Less misty mistyping' is incorrect wording; use 'fewer mistypes' (countable errors) or 'fewer typing mistakes'. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects count noun usage and tense consistency.