Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), correct grammar (a office → an office; more comfortable with typing rather than handwriting), and keep supporting details specific. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word if adding reasons.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because I work as an office administrator and do most tasks on a computer. Therefore, I type notes and documents throughout the day, so typing feels faster and more efficient for me.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I use both), remove hesitations and small errors (I do be honest → To be honest), and use one linking phrase to explain why (because). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and correct collocations (desktop keyboard, laptop keyboard).

Example: To be honest, I use both a desktop and a laptop keyboard every day. I type so often at work that, after a lot of practice, I am comfortable using either keyboard without any problems.

Suggestion: Give a clear time frame and connect events with linking words (when, then, so). Remove fillers and correct tense/form (played a game; I have become). Keep it concise and provide a specific example of how you practised.

Example: I learned to type during my school days when I played computer games and later had to do assignments on the computer. After practising regularly for homework and school projects, I gradually became much more comfortable typing.

Suggestion: Be specific and complete: start with a topic sentence (I improve my typing by…), describe 1–2 clear methods with linking words (for example, additionally), and avoid vague or unfinished sentences. Use correct vocabulary (app, keys, practice exercises) and give a concise example of an app or routine.

Example: I improve my typing by practising with typing apps and timed exercises. For example, I use a game-style app where letters appear on the screen and I must press the correct keys quickly, and additionally I set aside 10–15 minutes daily for touch-typing drills to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because I am working as a office admin, so uh, most of my work is on computer and I have to type throughout the day when, uh, I have to make notes, uh uh, then I do little bit writing, but I am more comfortable comfortable with the writing in comparison with the another thing.

✓ I prefer typing because I am working as an office admin, so most of my work is on the computer and I have to type throughout the day when I have to make notes; sometimes I do a little bit of handwriting, but I am more comfortable with typing compared to the other.

Article errors: 'a office admin' should be 'an office admin' (though better phrasing is 'an office administrator' or 'an office admin'); 'on computer' requires the definite article 'on the computer'; 'a little bit writing' needs 'a little bit of handwriting' or 'a little writing'; 'the another thing' is incorrect—use 'the other' or 'another'. Also removed filler words and repeated words and improved parallel comparison. Suggestion: use correct articles (a/an/the) and choose consistent noun phrases (typing/handwriting).

× I do be honest, I use both as a laptop keyboard and the desktop most of the time.

✓ To be honest, I use both a laptop keyboard and a desktop most of the time.

Incorrect verb form and sentence structure: 'I do be honest' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'To be honest'. Also 'both as a laptop keyboard and the desktop' is incorrect; use 'both a laptop and a desktop' or 'both a laptop keyboard and a desktop keyboard'. Suggestion: start with fixed expression 'To be honest' and keep parallel noun phrases.

× I type throughout the day and I become more comfortable with both because of a lot of practice.

✓ I type throughout the day and I have become more comfortable with both because of a lot of practice.

Tense/subject-verb issue: 'I become more comfortable' sounds present simple but the context refers to a change over time; use present perfect 'I have become' to show resulting state from past practice. Suggestion: use present perfect to link past practice to present state.

× So I I don't have any issue with the desktop typing or key on the laptop typing.

✓ So I don't have any issues with typing on a desktop or using the keys on a laptop.

Awkward structure and repetition: 'desktop typing or key on the laptop typing' is confusing. Rephrase to parallel structures: 'typing on a desktop' and 'using the keys on a laptop' or simply 'typing on a desktop or a laptop'. Also remove repeated 'I'. Suggestion: keep parallel noun/verb forms and avoid repetition.

× I started learning how to type on keyboards during my school days when I played game on a computer and after that I had to complete my assignments on computer.

✓ I started learning how to type on keyboards during my school days when I played games on a computer, and after that I had to complete my assignments on the computer.

Plural and article errors combined with past tense: 'played game' should be 'played games' (singular/plural issue), and 'on computer' needs 'on a computer' or 'on the computer'. Tense 'started learning' is correct; ensure surrounding nouns and articles agree. Suggestion: use plural for habitual past actions and include articles with 'computer'.

× That's when I started typing and uh, uh, day by day I practiced a lot and now I am become more comfortable.

✓ That's when I started typing, and day by day I practiced a lot; now I have become more comfortable.

Incorrect verb form and tense mix: 'now I am become more comfortable' is ungrammatical; use present perfect 'I have become' to express a change that affects the present. Also remove filler words. Suggestion: use 'have become' after past practice to show present result.

× There are few ways in which we can improve our typing skills.

✓ There are a few ways in which we can improve our typing skills.

Quantifier/article issue: 'There are few ways' implies almost none; to mean some, use 'a few'. Suggestion: use 'a few' when indicating several options.

× The 11 and most popular thing is there is a app in which there are some letters which bubble to the top and we have to press that button and the ballot below.

✓ The most popular app is one where letters bubble to the top and we have to press the corresponding key below.

Confusing and ungrammatical structure: 'The 11 and most popular thing' is unclear; likely meant 'the most popular thing'. 'There is a app' should be 'there is an app' (article error). 'Press that button and the ballot below' is unclear; rephrase to 'press the corresponding key below'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, use correct articles, and use clear descriptions.

× So I used to play that game. Another thing is I.

✓ So I used to play that game. Another thing is that I also practice with typing exercises.

Sentence fragment: 'Another thing is I.' is incomplete and lacks a verb or object. Provide a full clause to complete the idea. Suggestion: always complete the thought with subject + verb + object.