Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and correct comparative errors. Add one brief reason using a linking word. For example, use “much better” instead of “more better” and replace vague phrases like “maybe this is because” with “because”.

Example: I definitely prefer typing because computers are used everywhere now, so I am much faster and neater when I type.

Suggestion: Use a clear topic sentence and tidy comparisons. Avoid awkward phrasing like “computer's with text desktop.” Use linking words to compare and give a short reason. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I usually type on my laptop because its keyboard is portable and comfortable. However, I sometimes use my phone keyboard for short messages since it's handy.

Suggestion: Begin directly with the time, avoid filler phrases, and simplify complex sentence structures. Use one linking word and a brief result. Correct prepositions ("at home") and reduce redundancy ("learning phase of typing skills").

Example: I learned to type in fourth grade when my father bought a desktop computer at home, so I practised a lot and became quite proficient.

Suggestion: Provide a concise topic sentence, correct grammar ("much faster"), and add a specific example of practice. Use a linking word to connect cause and effect. Avoid excessive wordiness.

Example: Social media helped improve my typing because I practised messaging friends daily; as a result, my speed became much faster, especially when chatting quickly.

× Definitely typing. Maybe this is because of technological advancement that we have to use computer everywhere, so my typing is more better than handwritten words.

✓ Definitely typing. Maybe this is because of technological advancements and we have to use computers everywhere, so my typing is much better than handwriting.

Errors: incorrect noun forms (advancement -> advancements, computer -> computers), incorrect comparative phrase 'more better' is redundant, and 'handwritten words' is awkward; use 'handwriting'. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns, use 'much better' or 'better' (not 'more better'), and prefer 'handwriting' for comparison. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I have a laptop and I prefer laptop's keyboard more than a computer's with text desktop.

✓ I have a laptop and I prefer the laptop's keyboard to a desktop computer's keyboard.

Errors: awkward wording and incorrect comparison structure; 'laptop's keyboard more than a computer's with text desktop' is ungrammatical. Use 'prefer A to B' construction and correct noun order 'desktop computer'. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' and include 'keyboard' after 'desktop computer'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× And I don't mind phone keyboards too.

✓ I don't mind phone keyboards either.

Error: 'too' is acceptable colloquially but when contrasting, 'either' fits negative sentence better. Suggestion: use 'either' with negative verbs for standard English. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× They're also quite handy and more comfortable.

✓ They're also quite handy and comfortable.

Error: 'more comfortable' implies a comparison but no comparison target is given; 'comfortable' alone suffices. Suggestion: remove 'more' unless comparing to something stated. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Oh, this is interesting. When I was in school in grade 4, my father bought a new desktop computer in home and that was the beginning of my learning phase of typing skills, and I think I'm quite good at it now.

✓ Oh, this is interesting. When I was in grade 4, my father bought a new desktop computer at home, and that was the beginning of my learning to type; I think I'm quite good at it now.

Errors: unnecessary 'in school' after 'was in school in grade 4' is redundant, 'in home' should be 'at home', awkward phrase 'learning phase of typing skills'—use 'learning to type'. Also run-on sentence; split or use semicolon. Suggestion: use 'at home', 'learning to type', and simplify sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I believe social media has played a vital role in my faster typing skills because that was the only time when I used to be so excited to talk to my friends and my hands would move just more faster than in normal days.

✓ I believe social media has played a vital role in improving my typing speed because it was the only time when I was so excited to talk to my friends, and my hands would move faster than on normal days.

Errors: 'in my faster typing skills' is awkward—use 'improving my typing speed'; 'used to be so excited' should be 'was so excited'; 'just more faster' is redundant and ungrammatical—use 'faster'; 'in normal days' should be 'on normal days'. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('typing speed', 'improving'), correct past tense 'was', avoid double comparative 'more faster', and use correct preposition 'on' for days. Grammar problem type ID: 6