Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be brief and direct: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., “on my point of view”) and grammar mistakes. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., “errors” instead of “grammatical mistakes or any kind of other network issue”) and correct articles and word forms.

Example: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me focus and avoids technical problems. For example, when I write by hand I make fewer careless errors and I don’t have to worry about battery or internet issues.

Suggestion: This answer is clear and direct but could be slightly expanded with a brief reason or context using a linking word. Keep it to one short supporting sentence to stay within the 5-sentence limit.

Example: I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I work from my home office and the desktop is more comfortable for long typing sessions.

Suggestion: Give a clear time reference and briefly describe how you learned. Use correct tense and a concise supporting detail. Avoid vague phrases like “when I'm free.”

Example: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. At that time I practiced with online typing lessons and games every week until I became faster.

Suggestion: Organize your answer: start with a topic sentence explaining your main method, then add one or two specific strategies using linking words. Use natural phrasing (e.g., “daily practice” and “identify my mistakes and correct them”) and correct word choice (not “solvent”).

Example: I improve my typing through daily practice. For instance, I spend 20 minutes on typing exercises and then review my errors to focus on troublesome keys or finger movements.

× On my point of view, I prefer handwriting instead of typing as there are many grammatical mistakes or any kind of other network issue which we suffer from a electric device.

✓ In my point of view, I prefer handwriting to typing because there are many grammatical mistakes or other network issues that we can suffer from with an electronic device.

The phrase 'On my point of view' is incorrect; use 'In my point of view' or better 'In my opinion'. 'Prefer handwriting instead of typing' should be 'prefer handwriting to typing' (use 'prefer...to...'). 'Any kind of other network issue' is awkward; use 'other network issues'. 'Suffer from a electric device' is incorrect preposition and article use; say 'suffer from with an electronic device' or better 'caused by an electronic device'. Also changed 'a electric' to 'an electronic' for correct article and adjective choice. Suggestion: use 'In my opinion, I prefer handwriting to typing because electronic devices can cause grammatical mistakes and network issues.'

× So handwriting we can write with our hand instead of any typing.

✓ So we can write by hand instead of typing.

The sentence has awkward word order and article use. 'So handwriting we can write with our hand' should be 'So we can write by hand'. 'Instead of any typing' is incorrect; use 'instead of typing'. Suggestion: keep subject-verb order and use the idiom 'write by hand'.

× I learned to type on a keyboard when I'm free.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was free.

The speaker describes a past learning event, so the time clause should use past tense 'was' not present 'I'm'. Use 'when I was free' or better 'when I had free time'. Suggestion: match tenses in main and subordinate clauses: past with past.

× I improve my typing by daily routine practice and find my mistakes daily routine to be a solvent and to work on them.

✓ I improve my typing through daily practice, find my mistakes, and work on them to fix them.

The original sentence has wrong word order and incorrect word choices: 'daily routine practice' is awkward (use 'daily practice'), 'find my mistakes daily routine to be a solvent' is ungrammatical—'solvent' is wrong word; use 'solve' or 'fix'. Also parallel structure is needed: 'I improve..., find..., and work...'. Suggestion: use clear parallel verbs and correct vocabulary: 'I improve my typing through daily practice, identify my mistakes, and work on them to correct them.'