Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Mention a brief reason and one specific example. Use linking word for coherence.

Example: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use a computer at work. For example, as a video editor I write scripts and notes on my laptop, which is faster and easier to edit than handwritten notes.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer and avoid repeating. Provide one supporting detail about your routine and link it with a reason. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Example: I type on a desktop keyboard every day because I work at my company's editing suite. Since the desktop setup has a larger monitor and better ergonomics, it helps me work more comfortably for long editing sessions.

Suggestion: Be clear and complete. State the time you learned to type, then give a brief supporting detail or example. Avoid hesitations and unclear fragments.

Example: I learned to type when I was a child, around primary school age, because my parents encouraged computer lessons. Later, I improved my skills at work by practicing regularly in the editing department.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear method you use or plan to use to improve. Use linking words to show contrast or sequence and give a specific example of practice routine or tools.

Example: I am improving my typing by practicing with online typing programs for 20 minutes a day. Although my speed was low at first, regular timed exercises and focusing on accuracy have already increased my words-per-minute.

× I like typing a computer because I usually use a computer on company.

✓ I like typing on a computer because I usually use a computer at my company.

The preposition 'on' is required with 'typing' (typing on a computer). Use 'at' with 'company' to indicate location (at my company). Also include the article 'my' before 'company' to specify ownership. Suggestion: say 'I like typing on a computer because I usually use a computer at my company.'

× Also I'm video editor so I I like typing.

✓ Also, I'm a video editor, so I like typing.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'video editor' and duplicated 'I'. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: 'Also, I'm a video editor, so I like typing.'

× I do type on a desktop because I'm a video editor so I usually work at my company.

✓ I type on a desktop because I'm a video editor, so I usually work at my company.

Unnecessary auxiliary 'do' can be removed in a simple present affirmative sentence. Add a comma before 'so' for clause separation. The rest uses correct prepositions and articles. Suggestion: 'I type on a desktop because I'm a video editor, so I usually work at my company.'

× So I work at my company every day. I don't.

✓ So I work at my company every day.

The fragment 'I don't.' is incomplete and unclear because it lacks an object or verb to negate. Remove the fragment or complete it with the intended meaning (for example, 'I don't work from home'). Suggestion: keep 'So I work at my company every day.' or clarify what you don't do.

× I learned it when I was a child, but I I worked at. MMM search your company.

✓ I learned it when I was a child, and I later worked at a company where I used those skills.

This sentence contains duplication 'I I', a fragmented clause 'I worked at.' and unclear filler 'MMM search your company.' Rephrase to connect ideas coherently and remove fillers. Provide a clear subject and object for 'worked at.' Suggestion: 'I learned it when I was a child, and I later worked at a company where I used those skills.'

× Actually my typing was very very. Low, not far, not fast because I don't like practice typing, but before my company I.

✓ Actually, my typing was very slow and not very accurate or fast because I didn't like practicing typing, but before I joined my company I improved.

Several issues: 'very very. Low' is incorrect adjective/adverb use and punctuation; 'low' is not appropriate for typing speed—use 'slow'. Use past tense 'didn't like' and gerund 'practicing' after 'like'. The fragment 'but before my company I.' is incomplete; clarify 'before I joined my company, I...' Rephrase to show contrast and correct verb forms. Suggestion: 'Actually, my typing was very slow and not very accurate or fast because I didn't like practicing typing, but before I joined my company I improved.'