Typing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and clear: give a direct topic sentence, then one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. For example, say you prefer typing because it’s faster and easier to edit, and briefly give a concrete example of when typing helps.

Example: I prefer typing because it’s faster and easier to edit. For example, when I write essays on my laptop I can quickly correct mistakes and rearrange sentences, which saves me time.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use clear linking words. State which device you use, give two specific advantages, and avoid fragmented sentences. Mention a brief specific situation to illustrate.

Example: I type on a laptop every day because it is portable and gives me a good view of the screen. For example, when I study in the library I can move my laptop easily and spot typos quickly.

Suggestion: Provide a clear timeframe and a concise reason with a specific example. Use correct tense (e.g., 'I learned' or 'I have known how to type since'). Avoid vague phrases and incomplete sentences.

Example: I learned to type in primary school when we had computer classes. For instance, I joined a school project where I had to type proposals and reports, so I practiced regularly.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and then one or two specific, concrete methods with linking words. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Mention how often and what resources or activities you use to improve.

Example: I improve my typing by practicing every day using online typing exercises and timed tests. For example, I spend 15 minutes daily on a typing website to increase my speed and accuracy, and I track my progress weekly.

× I more pref I prefer typing because it is more convenient because you don't need to write full sentence.

✓ I prefer typing because it is more convenient and you don't need to write full sentences.

The original sentence has redundancy and a quantifier error: 'write full sentence' needs plural 'sentences'. Also 'I more pref I prefer' is ungrammatical repetition. Combine clauses with 'and' to avoid repetition and use plural for countable nouns when generalizing. Suggestions: remove duplicated phrase, use 'and' to connect reasons, and use plural 'sentences' for general statements.

× Other than that, handwrite type typing also help you to reduce your time instruction.

✓ Other than that, handwriting also helps you reduce the time needed for writing.

Multiple issues: 'handwrite type typing' is garbled; choose 'handwriting'. Subject-verb agreement: 'handwriting' (singular) needs 'helps' not 'help' (see also problem 27). 'Reduce your time instruction' is incorrect phrase; use 'reduce the time needed for writing' or 'reduce writing time'. Suggestions: use a single noun 'handwriting', ensure verb agrees, and use a clear noun phrase for 'time'.

× I type on a laptop given everyday because it enables me to get a wide view of the screen.

✓ I type on a laptop every day because it enables me to get a wide view of the screen.

Error: 'given everyday' is incorrect; use adverbial phrase 'every day' (two words). Also ensure word order: 'I type on a laptop every day' is natural. 'Every day' is an adverbial modifier, not a quantifier. Suggestion: write 'every day' as two words when meaning 'each day'.

× Other than that it also helped me to. Spot my mistake easily.

✓ Other than that, it also helps me spot my mistakes easily.

Problems: tense inconsistency and sentence fragmentation. Use present tense 'helps' to match habitual action. Remove unnecessary 'to' before 'spot' and combine into one sentence. Pluralize 'mistakes' for generality. Suggestions: keep present tense for routines, don't split the verb from its object, and use plural when generalizing.

× I have learned how to type on a keyboard since I in primary school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard in primary school.

'Since' requires a specific starting point with a present perfect continuous structure (e.g., 'I have learned since...') but the construction is wrong here. Better to use simple past 'learned' with 'in primary school' to indicate a past event. Also 'since I in primary school' is ungrammatical; include verb 'was' if using 'since' ('since I was in primary school'). Suggestions: use simple past for past events or correct 'since' clause to 'since I was in primary school' with present perfect.

× This is because I participated in many activities that involve me that need me to make a proposal from the.

✓ This is because I participated in many activities that involved me and required me to write proposals.

Original has awkward and incomplete clauses: 'involve me that need me to make a proposal from the.' Fix tense consistency to past ('participated', 'involved', 'required'), remove redundant 'that', and replace vague 'make a proposal from the' with 'write proposals'. Suggestions: use parallel verbs, ensure completeness of clauses, and choose clear verbs ('write proposals').

× I improve my typing by practicing it every day.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing every day.

The original is mostly correct but 'practicing it' is unnecessary because 'practicing' already refers to typing. Omitting 'it' makes the sentence more natural. Suggestion: use gerund 'practicing' after 'by' to show method.

× For example, I force myself to write or to to make an easy everyday.

✓ For example, I force myself to write something simple every day.

Problems: repeated 'to', awkward phrase 'make an easy everyday'. Use 'write something simple every day' for clarity and correct adverb 'every day'. Suggestions: avoid double 'to', use 'something simple' and 'every day' (two words).

× From that it can help me to faster my.

✓ This helps me to type faster.

Original is fragmentary and ungrammatical: 'to faster my' incorrectly uses 'faster' as a verb and lacks an object. Use 'type faster' or 'increase my typing speed'. Also replace 'From that' with 'This' for coherence. Suggestions: use correct verb forms and complete object phrases.