Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Trả lời cần tự nhiên, ngắn gọn và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ngập ngừng (umm). Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ nơi bạn chụp, thiết bị hoặc cảm giác khi chụp). Giữ tối đa 5 câu. Ví dụ cách nối: "because", "so", hoặc "for example".

Example: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different views because it helps me notice details I might otherwise miss. For example, when I walk by the river I often photograph reflections and changing light, which relaxes me and improves my composition skills.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Câu trả lời cần rõ lý do cụ thể và dùng từ vựng chính xác (tránh 'vintage' nếu không phù hợp). Tránh lặp và sửa ngữ pháp (e.g., "the landscape... varies" hoặc "rural landscapes are varied"). Dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối ý. Thêm một ví dụ ngắn về khung cảnh bạn thích.

Example: I prefer rural areas because the landscapes are more varied and peaceful, with fields, forests and small villages. For example, I like photographing terraced rice fields at sunrise because the light and colors change quickly.

Suggestion: Cải thiện: Tránh tiếng nói ngập ngừng và dùng cấu trúc rõ ràng: chủ đề + lý do + ví dụ. Sử dụng từ vựng cụ thể (e.g., "coastal scenery, mountains, rice terraces") và sửa ngữ pháp ("Vietnam has many landscapes where people can... "). Giữ câu ngắn gọn và mạch lạc.

Example: I prefer views in my own country, especially in Vietnam, because it offers diverse scenery like mountains, beaches and rice terraces. For instance, Ha Long Bay's limestone karsts create unique photo opportunities that both locals and tourists enjoy.

× I really love taking pictures of different views. I'm really keen on taking pictures everywhere I go to and I think that's one of my hobbies that which makes me more umm, skillful in taking pictures and relax.

✓ I really love taking pictures of different views. I'm really keen on taking pictures everywhere I go, and I think that's one of my hobbies that makes me more skillful at taking pictures and helps me relax.

Wrong or redundant use of verb forms and relative pronoun: 'that which makes' is incorrect and wordy; use 'that makes'. 'Skillful in taking pictures' is acceptable but 'skillful at taking pictures' is more natural. 'and relax' lacks a verb form to match; use 'helps me relax'. Suggestion: simplify relative clauses and maintain parallel structure with verbs. Grammar problem type ID: 8.

× The reason is the landscape in rural areas vary vintage. That's why I I usually take pictures in rural areas. It is a place really.

✓ The reason is that the landscapes in rural areas vary and are more rustic. That's why I usually take pictures in rural areas. They are really nice places.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'landscape... vary' mixes singular/plural; 'landscape' should be plural 'landscapes' to match 'vary', or change verb to 'varies'. 'Vintage' is the wrong adjective for scenery; use 'rustic' or 'scenic'. 'I I' includes a repeated word. 'It is a place really' is awkward and ungrammatical — refer to 'they are really nice places' for plural 'rural areas'. Suggestion: ensure subjects and verbs agree in number and choose appropriate adjectives. Grammar problem type ID: 1.

× Umm, in my opinion, I prefer, uh, views in my country, uh, particularly Vietnam. Uh, the reason if Vietnam has a lot of landscape that people can go to enjoy and take a lot of picture pictures, uh, and I believe that, uh, tourists will love them.

✓ Umm, in my opinion, I prefer views in my country, particularly Vietnam. The reason is that Vietnam has a lot of landscapes that people can visit to enjoy and take many pictures, and I believe that tourists will love them.

Tense and sentence structure problems: 'the reason if Vietnam has' is ungrammatical; use 'the reason is that Vietnam has'. 'Landscapes' should be plural to match 'a lot of'. 'Go to enjoy and take a lot of picture pictures' has wrong verb and noun forms and repetition; use 'visit to enjoy and take many pictures'. Maintain simple present tense for general facts. Suggestion: use 'the reason is that' for explanations and correct plural forms and verb choices. Grammar problem type ID: 6.