Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện về phát âm, ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác; tránh lỗi chính tả và dùng cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn. Nên có câu chủ đề ngắn gọn rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, ở đâu, ví dụ) với liên từ phù hợp để mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ: sửa “pots” -> “post”, “modern views” nếu ý là “mountain views” hoặc “city views” cần chọn từ phù hợp.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different landscapes because I love capturing beautiful scenery. For example, when I go hiking I often take pictures of sunsets and mountain views, and later I post the best shots on social media to share with my friends.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi (urban or rural) bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng và sửa từ sai nghĩa; tránh dùng từ không phù hợp như “zoos” và cụm động từ sai (“dry fresh local food”). Thêm lý do cụ thể và minh họa ngắn gọn, dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Chú ý ngữ pháp (thì, danh từ số ít/ nhiều) và từ vựng mô tả cảnh quan.

Example: I prefer rural views because I like the fresh air and peaceful scenery. For example, I often visit the countryside to relax, try fresh local food, and take photos of calm fields and small villages.

Suggestion: Cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng thấy rõ (e.g. “countries”→“country”, “feel”→“feels”, “hen” nonsense, “beef food” unclear). Trả lời trực tiếp, nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể, dùng cấu trúc liên kết (because, however). Nếu muốn so sánh, dùng một câu ngắn rõ ràng. Sửa lỗi chính tả và dùng từ chính xác để ý nghĩa rõ rệt.

Example: I prefer scenery in my own country because it feels familiar and offers a wide variety of landscapes. For example, I can enjoy coastal views near my hometown, but I also like visiting places abroad such as Los Angeles for a different experience.

× For example, when I go hiking, I usually photograph sunsets and modern views, then pots the best shots on social media to share with my friends.

✓ For example, when I go hiking, I usually photograph sunsets and mountain views, then post the best shots on social media to share with my friends.

The sentence contains word choice errors and a typo: 'modern views' should be 'mountain views' to make sense in hiking context, and 'pots' is a typo for 'post'. This is a sentence structure/word choice problem; ensure the noun fits the context and check spelling. Suggestion: proofread for typos and use context-appropriate vocabulary. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer zoos in the rural areas because I enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.

✓ I prefer the countryside in rural areas because I enjoy the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.

'Zoos' is likely the wrong word here; 'countryside' fits the context. Also 'the rural areas' is awkward—use 'rural areas' or 'the countryside'. This is an incorrect word choice and minor article usage issue. Suggestion: choose nouns that match meaning and simplify articles ('the countryside' or 'rural areas'). Grammar problem type ID:11

× For example, I often go to the countryside to relax, dry fresh local food and take a photo of the calm landscape.

✓ For example, I often go to the countryside to relax, try fresh local food and take photos of the calm landscape.

'Dry fresh local food' is wrong collocation; likely intended 'try fresh local food'. Also 'take a photo' can be plural 'take photos' for general habit. This is a verb collocation problem and pluralization. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('try' for tasting food) and match singular/plural to general activities. Grammar problem type ID:8

× I prefer the scenery in my own countries because it feel familiar and hen diverse landscape.

✓ I prefer the scenery in my own country because it feels familiar and has a diverse landscape.

Errors: 'countries' should be singular 'country' to match 'my own'; verb agreement 'it feel' should be 'it feels'; 'hen' is a typo for 'then' or 'has'—context requires 'has a diverse landscape'. This includes plural/singular error and subject-verb agreement and word choice. Suggestion: ensure subject and noun number match and verbs agree with singular/plural subjects; proofread typos. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Far example, I can enjoy the beef food coastal views near my hometown but I also like visit places at Los Angeles.

✓ For example, I can enjoy the beautiful coastal views near my hometown, but I also like to visit places in Los Angeles.

Multiple issues: 'Far example' is a typo for 'For example'; 'beef food' is wrong—likely 'beautiful'; 'coastal views' is fine; missing 'to' after 'like' ('like to visit'); preposition 'at Los Angeles' should be 'in Los Angeles'. This covers preposition misuse, article/word choice, and infinitive omission. Suggestion: check prepositions after place names ('in' for cities), use 'like to' before verbs, and proofread for typos. Grammar problem type ID:11