Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitation, and provide one specific reason with brief supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and avoid repetition. For example, say you don't enjoy moving around to find new viewpoints and explain briefly why that bothers you (e.g., time, effort, or discomfort).

Example: I don’t really enjoy taking photos of many different views because it requires moving around a lot, which can be tiring. For example, I find it inconvenient to carry my camera and search for new spots after a long day of sightseeing.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct vocabulary and phrasing (e.g., "greenery," "peaceful," "refreshing") and avoid unfinished fragments. Provide a concise example to support your point.

Example: I prefer rural views because the greenery and open spaces feel peaceful and refreshing. For example, walking through a quiet forest or near a lake helps me relax and recover from a stressful workweek.

Suggestion: Give a clear balanced response: state your main preference, then briefly explain why with specific details, and use a linking word to introduce the contrast (e.g., "however"). Correct word choice and grammar (e.g., "memories," "abroad," "noble" is odd here) and give one concrete example for each part of the answer. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences each side).

Example: I prefer views in my own country because they are familiar and bring back personal memories of family trips to nearby mountains and lakes. However, I also enjoy views abroad because they offer different cultures and historic cityscapes, such as the old streets of a European town.

× I don't like taking picture of different views because, umm, if, uh, you want to take a photo, uh, of other views now make, make you uh, have to move, uh, many, many, uh, place and then.

✓ I don't like taking pictures of different views because if you want to take photos of other views you have to move to many different places.

Singular/plural errors: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' and 'place' should be plural 'places' when referring to multiple items. Also 'photo' should be plural 'photos' for the same reason. Suggestion: identify whether the noun refers to one or more items and use singular or plural accordingly; add necessary determiners like 'many' before plural nouns.

× I don't like taking picture of different views because, umm, if, uh, you want to take a photo, uh, of other views now make, make you uh, have to move, uh, many, many, uh, place and then.

✓ I don't like taking pictures of different views because if you want to take photos of other views, you have to move to many different places.

The sentence has disfluencies and a broken structure (repeated fillers and unclear connectors). Remove filler words and reorganize the clause 'if you want... you have to...' to create a clear conditional sentence. Suggestion: plan the sentence mentally before speaking and use concise connectors like 'because' and 'if... then'.

× I prefer views in rural areas because uh, the urban landscape and witness the greenery feel a peaceful and refesting, which helps me relax after a busy week.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the green landscapes there feel peaceful and refreshing, which helps me relax after a busy week.

Preposition and word choice issues: 'in rural areas' is fine but 'the urban landscape and witness the greenery' is incorrect. Use 'green landscapes there' or 'the greenery there'. 'Refesting' is misspelling of 'refreshing'. Suggestion: use appropriate nouns ('landscapes' or 'greenery') and place locative words ('there') to clarify contrast with urban areas.

× I prefer views in rural areas because uh, the urban landscape and witness the greenery feel a peaceful and refesting, which helps me relax after a busy week.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the green landscapes there feel peaceful and refreshing, which helps me relax after a busy week.

Adjective/adverb errors and word form: 'feel a peaceful' is incorrect because 'feel' should be followed by an adjective without an article: 'feel peaceful'. 'Refesting' is not a word; use 'refreshing'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms after 'feel' and check spelling.

× For example, walking among views, uh or huge gives me a sense.

✓ For example, walking among the scenery or wide open spaces gives me a sense of calm.

Fragment and unclear noun use: 'walking among views or huge gives me a sense' is incomplete and unclear. Provide a clear noun ('scenery' or 'wide open spaces') and complete the object of 'gives me a sense' (e.g., 'of calm'). Suggestion: complete the idea by specifying what feeling is produced.

× I prefer views in my own country because they are more fun, familiar and evoke a personal memories such as family trips to nearby mountains and lakes.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because they are more familiar and evoke personal memories, such as family trips to nearby mountains and lakes.

Pronoun and article errors: 'they are more fun, familiar' mixes adjectives awkwardly; 'more fun' isn't appropriate here—use 'more familiar'. 'A personal memories' is incorrect: 'memories' is plural so remove 'a' and use 'personal memories'. Suggestion: ensure agreement between determiners and noun number and choose appropriate adjectives.

× However, I also enjoy business abroad for their nobly and different landscape, for example seeing historic European cityscape or tropical.

✓ However, I also enjoy traveling abroad for their novel and different landscapes; for example, seeing historic European cityscapes or tropical scenery.

Multiple errors in word choice and structure: 'business abroad' is incorrect; likely 'traveling abroad'. 'Nobly' is wrong; use 'novel' or 'notable'. 'Different landscape' should be plural 'different landscapes'. The example list is incomplete—use 'historic European cityscapes or tropical scenery'. Suggestion: choose correct verbs ('traveling'), correct adjective forms ('novel'), pluralize 'landscapes', and complete examples for clarity.