Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời tự nhiên nhưng cần rõ ràng hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và những từ không liên quan. Nên mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn, tiếp theo là 1-2 chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể (ví dụ: loại cảnh bạn thích, cảm xúc khi chụp), dùng liên từ đơn giản và tránh tiếng ỳ (uh).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. I find photography relaxing and it helps me unwind after a busy day. I especially like capturing landscapes and architectural scenes, and I often share my favorite shots on social media to show new cultures and places.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, mạch lạc và chính xác về ngữ pháp. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ngắt quãng. Nên đưa ra một lý do rõ ràng và một ví dụ ngắn hỗ trợ. Sử dụng liên từ để nối ý (e.g., because, for example).

Example: I prefer urban views because city lights at night create a dramatic and lively atmosphere. For example, I enjoy photographing illuminated skyscrapers and busy streets, which look amazing in long-exposure shots.

Suggestion: Ý tưởng rõ nhưng câu còn lủng củng và có lỗi từ vựng/diễn đạt (ví dụ 'English Canary' không rõ nghĩa). Nên nói rõ lý do, nêu một ví dụ cụ thể về trải nghiệm khác biệt và dùng cấu trúc câu ngắn gọn, liên kết tốt.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me discover different cultures and landscapes. For instance, seeing historical architecture or coastal scenery abroad gives me a fresh perspective and helps me relax.

× Yes, I love taking picture of different views.

✓ Yes, I love taking pictures of different views.

'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'taking pictures' is a general activity that requires the plural form; use plural nouns when speaking about noncountable repeated actions or multiple items. Suggestion: Use 'taking pictures' when referring to the activity of photographing multiple scenes.

× For me, photography is so relaxing and healing.

✓ For me, photography is very relaxing and therapeutic.

'So relaxing and healing' is understandable but 'healing' as an adjective is less natural here; 'therapeutic' fits better. Also replace 'so' with 'very' for formality. Suggestion: Use 'therapeutic' or 'healing' as appropriate and prefer 'very' in formal answers.

× Uh, it had is a hat.

✓ Uh, it has a hat.

Original contains extraneous words and incorrect verb form 'had is'. The intended meaning seems to be 'it has a hat' but the sentence is unclear. Suggestion: Remove filler words and use correct verb 'has' for present possession.

× I love sharing the new culture, new scenery on social media.

✓ I love sharing new cultures and new scenery on social media.

'Culture' should be plural 'cultures' when referring to different cultures encountered; 'new scenery' can remain singular or plural depending but 'scenery' is uncountable so 'new scenery' is acceptable; using parallel plurals 'cultures and scenes' can also work. Suggestion: Use plural 'cultures' when talking about multiple different cultures.

× So I love taking picture of the Fernando views.

✓ So I love taking pictures of the famous views.

'Taking picture' should be 'taking pictures' (plural). 'the Fernando views' is unclear and likely a proper noun error; replaced with 'famous views' or specify a correct place name. Suggestion: Use plural 'pictures' and ensure proper noun/place names are correct.

× For me, I prefer views in urban areas because when, when at night, umm, the light is up, up and I will can, I can see the, the beautiful scenery of uh, city and uh, I love enjoy this.

✓ For me, I prefer views in urban areas because at night the lights are on and I can see the beautiful city scenery, and I enjoy this.

'When at night' is redundant; use 'at night'. 'the light is up' is incorrect; use 'the lights are on'. 'I will can' is ungrammatical; choose 'I can'. 'I love enjoy this' mixes verbs; use 'I enjoy this' or 'I love this'. Suggestion: Simplify time phrase to 'at night', use 'lights are on', avoid double modals, and use a single verb 'enjoy' or 'love'.

× For me, I prefer views in other countries because I love, uh, traveling and experience in other countries.

✓ For me, I prefer views in other countries because I love traveling and experiencing other countries.

'Experience' should be the gerund 'experiencing' to parallel 'traveling'. Maintain consistent verb forms after 'love'. Suggestion: Use parallel gerunds after verbs like 'love' or 'enjoy'.

× I want to see new culture and English Canary from uh, uh, from, uh, in other countries.

✓ I want to see new cultures and practice English with locals in other countries.

Original is unclear: 'English Canary' is likely incorrect word choice. 'New culture' should be plural 'new cultures'. To express language practice, use 'practice English with locals'. Suggestion: Use clear nouns and correct collocations like 'practice English' and plural 'cultures'.

× Uh, it's helped me relax and feel comfortable.

✓ It helps me relax and feel comfortable.

Using present perfect 'it's helped' is acceptable but inconsistent with general statement; 'It helps me relax' (simple present) fits better when describing habitual effects. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual or general truths: 'It helps me...'.