Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, and add one specific reason or example. Use linking words if you add details. Also correct basic grammar (e.g. "photography of different views" → "taking photos of different views").

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because it helps me capture moments and remember places. For example, when I travel I often photograph city skylines and seaside landscapes to remind me of the trip.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then one or two clear supporting details with linking words. Avoid filler sounds and repetition. Use a correct comparative phrase (e.g. "I prefer rural areas because they are more natural").

Example: I prefer rural areas because they are more natural and peaceful. For instance, I like walking in the countryside where there are fewer cars and more green fields, which helps me relax.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement ("I prefer views in my own country") and give specific reasons without hesitation or filler words. Use correct vocabulary ("country" not "control") and provide concrete examples. Keep it concise—one topic sentence and one supporting detail with a linking word.

Example: I prefer views in my own country because China has a wide variety of beautiful landscapes. For example, we have majestic mountains like the Huangshan and diverse scenery that I can easily visit and photograph.

× 'I really like photography of a different views.'

✓ 'I really like photography of different views.'

'a different views' is incorrect because 'a' signals singular but 'views' is plural; remove 'a' to make phrase grammatical. Also consider 'I really like taking photographs of different views.' for more natural English. Suggestion: remove the article before a plural noun or change to singular (a different view).

× 'Because it can record different different views.'

✓ 'Because it can record different views.'

'different different' is a repetition likely due to hesitation; remove the duplicate. There is no subject-verb disagreement here, but redundancy makes the sentence ungrammatical in natural speech. Suggestion: avoid repeating words; speak clearly.'

× 'Above rural areas because it's, uh, is more natural and I, I love nature.'

✓ 'I prefer rural areas because they are more natural and I love nature.'

'Above rural areas' is wrong preposition/phrase for expressing preference; use 'prefer rural areas'. Also 'it's, uh, is more natural' repeats subject and verb; change to 'they are more natural' to match plural 'rural areas'. Suggestion: use 'prefer' + noun phrase and ensure subject pronoun agrees with noun.'

× 'Uh, environment and uh, uh.'

✓ 'I like the environment.'

'Uh, environment' is an incomplete fragment and lacks an article; use 'the environment' or 'the natural environment'. Pronoun/ article needed to make noun phrase complete. Suggestion: complete fragments by adding articles and verbs.'

× 'Well, I prefer my control views because, uh, by control, China is a bigger conscious, uh, include, uh, very many, uh, beautiful views, uh, like, uh, uh, mountains.'

✓ 'Well, I prefer views in my country because China is a large country and has many beautiful places, such as mountains.'

Original sentence has multiple structural problems: 'my control views' is incorrect word choice; 'by control' is meaningless here; 'bigger conscious' is incorrect adjective/noun use; 'include, uh, very many' is ungrammatical ordering. Correction uses natural phrasing: 'views in my country', 'China is a large country', 'has many beautiful places, such as mountains.' Suggestion: simplify complex ideas into short clauses, use correct collocations (large country, has many), and avoid filler words.