Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural by correcting singular/plural and article use, and keep it concise with one clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Use linking words (for example, therefore) to connect ideas and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I find photography a great way to preserve memories, so when I travel I usually take pictures of landscapes and landmarks to remember the trip and share highlights with family and friends.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and correct grammar (use plural/forms and articles). Reduce fillers such as 'like' and add linking words to give coherent reasons. Be specific about what aspects of rural scenery you find relaxing.

Example: I prefer rural views because I live in a busy city and often feel overwhelmed. For example, I enjoy open fields, quiet forests, and small streams, which feel peaceful and help me relax and recharge.

Suggestion: Provide a direct, grammatically correct topic sentence and give specific reasons with clear linking words. Avoid vague phrases and repetition, and correct possessive/verb forms (e.g., 'Korea's scenery'). Give one concrete example of the foreign scenery you prefer.

Example: I prefer views in other countries because Korea's scenery can feel busy and crowded. For instance, I like visiting places with vast mountains or expansive national parks abroad because their majestic natural landscapes feel more peaceful and awe-inspiring.

× Yes, I like taking pictures of different view.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

The noun 'view' should be plural because 'different' refers to multiple kinds or instances; use 'views' to agree in number with 'different'. Replace 'view' with 'views' to match plurality. Suggestion: use plural nouns after words like 'different', 'many', 'several'.

× I think taking picture is one of the best ways to preserve memories.

✓ I think taking pictures is one of the best ways to preserve memories.

'Picture' should be plural ('pictures') because the gerund 'taking' implies the general activity of taking many pictures; 'one of the best ways' requires the activity to be expressed in general plural form. Suggest using 'taking pictures' to refer to the general action.

× For example, when I travel, I photograph landscapes and landmarks so I can remember those moments vividly and share them with family or friends later.

✓ For example, when I travel, I photograph landscapes and landmarks so I can remember those moments vividly and share them with my family and friends later.

The phrase 'family or friends' is grammatically acceptable but sounds more natural as 'my family and friends' to indicate possession and include both groups collectively. This fixes slight article/possessive usage and parallelism. Problem type assigned as singular/plural because 'family and friends' is a compound plural idea.

× I prefer views in rural area because I live in the city and I'm kind of tired of this like busy environment and high buildings and rural scenery really peaceful which can help me refresh and relax.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because I live in the city and I'm kind of tired of this busy environment and tall buildings, and rural scenery is really peaceful, which helps me refresh and relax.

Multiple issues: 'rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' to match general preference; 'this like busy' is colloquial and redundant—use 'this busy environment'; 'high buildings' is better as 'tall buildings'; missing verb 'is' after 'rural scenery' and run-on sentence needs commas and conjunctions. Corrections: pluralize 'rural areas', remove filler 'like', insert 'is' and adjust punctuation, change 'can help me' to 'helps me' for clarity and tense consistency.

× I prefer views in other countries because in Korea its scenery is like very busy and crowded and I'm not really the type of person.

✓ I prefer views in other countries because in Korea the scenery is very busy and crowded, and I'm not really that type of person.

Errors: 'its scenery' is incorrect reference; use 'the scenery' to refer to Korea's general scenery. Remove filler 'like' before 'very busy'; 'I'm not really the type of person' needs 'that' to complete the idiom 'not that type of person'. Also add commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: use 'the scenery' for general descriptions of a country.

× So I prefer like majestic environment.

✓ So I prefer a more majestic environment.

'Prefer like majestic environment' is ungrammatical: 'like' is a filler and 'majestic environment' needs an article and comparative modifier. Use 'a more majestic environment' to express preference relative to current environment. Suggestion: avoid filler 'like' and include appropriate articles and modifiers.

× Majestic like nature.

✓ I mean majestic natural scenery.

This fragment 'Majestic like nature.' is incomplete and ungrammatical. It lacks a verb and proper structure. Rephrase to 'I mean majestic natural scenery' to convey the intended meaning. Suggest speaking in full sentences and avoiding sentence fragments.