Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., “take pictures,” avoid sentence fragments) and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., “landscapes,” “wildlife,” “skies”).

Example: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. When I travel, I mostly photograph landscapes and wildlife, especially flowers, birds, and dramatic cloud formations because they show the character of a place.

Suggestion: Answer directly and organize ideas with linking words. Use correct grammar (singular/plural, tense) and avoid vague phrases like “and all.” Give one contrastive reason for each preference and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: I like photographing both urban and rural scenes. In cities, I focus on people, street life, and tall buildings because they create dynamic compositions, whereas in rural areas I prefer natural landscapes and wildlife for their calm atmosphere and vivid colors.

Suggestion: Clarify and correct grammar and vocabulary—‘interview’ is wrong here. State your preference clearly and give a specific reason with a linking phrase. Avoid vague phrases like “natural resource, says.”

Example: I prefer views in my own country because Nepal has diverse landscapes—from the Himalayas to lush valleys—and I feel more connected to those scenes, so I enjoy capturing them when I travel there.

× 'I love to take the picture of different views.'

✓ 'I love to take pictures of different views.'

'picture' should be plural as 'different views' implies multiple items; use 'take pictures' for general habit.

× 'Whenever I travel.'

✓ 'Whenever I travel, I take photos.'

This fragment lacks a main verb and does not form a complete present tense sentence. Combine it with a main clause in the present simple to describe a habitual action ('I take photos').

× 'I mostly capture natural resources like flower, birds, cloud, etcetera.'

✓ 'I mostly capture natural things like flowers, birds, clouds, etc.'

Use plural nouns ('flowers, clouds') when listing multiple items. Also 'natural resources' is not appropriate for flowers or clouds; 'natural things' or 'nature' is better. 'etcetera' can be shortened to 'etc.'

× 'Well, I liked capturing both places.'

✓ 'Well, I like capturing both kinds of places.'

The question asks about a general preference (present), so use present simple 'like' rather than past 'liked'. Also 'both places' is better specified as 'both kinds of places' (urban and rural).

× 'In urban area we can see like busy people, like running from here and here we can capture that and there is a tall building and all.'

✓ 'In urban areas we can see busy people running around and tall buildings.'

Use plural 'areas' when speaking generally. Remove filler 'like' and redundant phrases; pluralize 'building' to 'buildings' when referring generally. Use concise structure for clarity.

× 'And in rural area we can capture the natural resources, you can capture the nature.'

✓ 'And in rural areas we can capture nature and natural scenery.'

Use plural 'areas' for general statements. 'Natural resources' is incorrect term here; 'nature' or 'natural scenery' fits photography context. Avoid repeating the same idea.

× 'I prefer interview in my own country because I think Nepal is the most beautiful country where there is a natural resource, says.'

✓ 'I prefer travelling in my own country because I think Nepal is the most beautiful country with beautiful natural scenery.'

'Prefer interview' is incorrect; likely 'prefer travelling' or 'visiting'. Use present tense 'prefer'. 'Where there is a natural resource, says' is ungrammatical—replace with a clear noun phrase 'with beautiful natural scenery'. Ensure verb 'says' is removed or used correctly in reported speech.