Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use plural/singular correctly. Use one linking phrase to add a reason or result. Keep it within 3–4 sentences. For example, say you enjoy photographing landscapes, explain why, and mention how you use the photos.

Example: Yes, I enjoy photographing different landscapes. I especially like taking pictures when a scene looks unusual or breathtaking, because photos help me remember the moment. I usually use my smartphone so that I can easily share the images with friends or look back at them later.

Suggestion: Correct grammar and improve coherence. Begin with a clear preference sentence, use proper comparisons (prefer X to Y), and avoid unclear words like 'brief' here. Provide one specific reason and a brief example. Keep it concise and natural (2–4 sentences).

Example: I prefer views in rural areas to those in urban areas. The natural scenery—such as forests and hills—feels more peaceful and visually striking than rows of tall buildings. For example, when I work in a forest I feel relaxed and more connected to nature.

Suggestion: Avoid filler words and repetition. Start with a brief general statement, then choose and justify your preference with specific details. Use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary (e.g., 'rich in forests'). Limit to 2–3 sentences to be concise and effective.

Example: I believe every country has its own beautiful views, but if I had to choose I would prefer the scenery in my own country. It is rich in forests and natural parks, so I can find many peaceful and dramatic landscapes close to home.

× Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different landscape.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different landscapes.

The noun 'landscape' should be plural to agree with 'different' and 'pictures'. Use plural for countable nouns when referring to multiple items: 'different landscapes'. Suggestion: When speaking about multiple scenes, add -s to countable nouns (landscape -> landscapes).

× When the landscapes are breathtaking and unusual, I usually take the landscape with my smartphone so that I can easily share them or just rewind and recap it easily.

✓ When the landscapes are breathtaking and unusual, I usually take pictures of them with my smartphone so that I can easily share them or just rewind and recap them.

Mixed singular and plural references create inconsistency: 'take the landscape' (singular) conflicts with 'landscapes' and 'them'. Change to 'take pictures of them' to match plural. Also ensure pronoun agreement: use 'them' not 'it'. Suggestion: Keep number consistent across nouns and pronouns (landscapes -> them).

× To be honest, I prefer views in rural areas than the landscape in urban areas because the nature scenery is more brief a more breathtaking than the roles of high buildings in urban areas.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in rural areas to the landscapes in urban areas because natural scenery is more breathtaking than rows of tall buildings in urban areas.

Multiple errors: 'prefer...than' should be 'prefer...to' (incorrect conjunction type). 'the landscape' should be plural 'the landscapes' to match 'views'. 'nature scenery' is incorrect collocation; use 'natural scenery'. 'more brief a more breathtaking' is garbled; choose 'more breathtaking'. 'roles of high buildings' is incorrect word choice; use 'rows of tall buildings'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer A to B', use correct noun forms (landscapes), correct adjectives (natural), and correct collocations (rows of tall buildings).

× For example, I enjoy working in the forest, which makes me feel relaxed and connected to the nature.

✓ For example, I enjoy working in the forest, which makes me feel relaxed and connected to nature.

'To the nature' is incorrect; 'nature' as an abstract noun does not need 'the' or 'to' after 'connected'. Use 'connected to nature' or 'connected with nature'. Suggestion: Use 'connected to nature' for natural connection; omit 'the'.

× I think that, uh, in every country there will have breathtaking, their own breathtaking, captivating views.

✓ I think that, uh, every country has its own breathtaking, captivating views.

'There will have' is wrong structure; use 'every country has'. 'their own' should agree with 'every country' -> 'its own'. Also remove redundant commas and repeated 'breathtaking'. Suggestion: Use 'every country has its own...' and use singular possessive 'its'.

× So I kind kind of disagree with these questions, but if I had to choose one, I would prefer views in my own country because my own country is very is enriched with very forest.

✓ So I kind of disagree with this question, but if I had to choose, I would prefer views in my own country because it is rich in forests.

Several issues: 'kind kind of' is repetition. 'these questions' should be 'this question' (speaker refers to single prompt). 'my own country is very is enriched with very forest' is ungrammatical: use 'it is rich in forests' or 'it has many forests'. Suggestion: Remove repetition, match singular/plural for 'question', and use correct adjective constructions: 'rich in forests' or 'has many forests'.