Views— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하지만 몇 가지 개선할 점이 있습니다. 우선 첫 문장에서 ‘Absolutely’는 좋지만 토픽 문장을 조금 더 구체적으로 하면 더 인상적입니다. 또한 supporting detail을 연결할 때 연결어를 사용해 논리 흐름을 명확히 하고, ‘sceneries’ 대신 더 자연스러운 단어(views, scenery)와 구체적 예시(landscapes, cityscapes, sunsets 등)를 사용하세요. 마지막으로 문장 수를 3~4문장으로 유지하면서 어휘 다양성을 늘리면 점수가 올라갑니다.

Example: Yes, I love taking photographs of different views, especially landscapes and cityscapes when I travel. Taking photos helps me remember the atmosphere and small details of a place, such as the colors of a sunset or bustling street scenes. I also enjoy sharing my pictures with friends to relive those memories together.

Suggestion: 의견은 명확하지만 문법과 표현에서 오류가 있습니다. ‘scenery of urban areas’ 보다는 ‘urban views’ 또는 ‘cityscapes’가 자연스럽습니다. 두 번째 문장은 시제와 중복 표현(‘I feel...I feel’)을 고쳐야 합니다. 또한 연결어(for example, because, so)로 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하고 한두 개 구체적 예시(야경, 거리 풍경, 네온사인 등)를 추가하세요.

Example: I prefer urban views, mainly because cityscapes at night are vibrant and full of life. For example, I enjoy photographing neon signs and bustling streets, which look impressive in photos and make me feel excited and inspired.

Suggestion: 의견은 분명하지만 어휘 선택과 문장 구성에서 개선이 필요합니다. ‘scenario’ 대신 ‘scenery’ 또는 ‘views’가 적절하고, ‘our own country’는 ‘my country’가 더 자연스럽습니다. 또한 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하고 연결구문(For instance, because, therefore)을 사용해 흐름을 매끄럽게 하세요. 예시로 특정 장소나 활동(예: family gatherings, familiar landscapes)을 덧붙이면 설득력이 높아집니다.

Example: I prefer the views in my own country because they feel familiar and comforting. For instance, visiting local parks or coastal towns reminds me of family trips and local food, so I can relax more and enjoy taking photos without feeling like a tourist.

× I like capturing sceneries whenever I travel.

✓ I like capturing scenery whenever I travel.

The noun 'scenery' is an uncountable noun in English and should not be pluralized as 'sceneries'. Use the singular uncountable form 'scenery'. Suggestion: say 'capture scenery' or 'capture scenes' if you want a countable alternative.

× Taking photos always helps me remember the places and the moments.

✓ Taking photos always helps me remember places and moments.

Using 'the' before plural nouns here is unnecessary and sounds unnatural. When speaking generally about 'places' and 'moments', omit the definite article. Suggestion: remove 'the' to express general meaning.

× And I like to share.

✓ And I like to share them.

The verb 'share' requires an object; adding the pronoun 'them' makes it clear you share the photos. Suggestion: use 'share them' or specify 'share my photos'.

× I prefer scenery of urban areas because I can see the city lights and advertisements on buildings.

✓ I prefer the scenery of urban areas because I can see the city lights and advertisements on buildings.

This sentence largely is correct but sounds more natural with the definite article 'the' before 'scenery' when specifying a particular type (the scenery of urban areas). Add 'the' for natural phrasing.

× I feel whenever I saw that view, I feel excited.

✓ Whenever I see that view, I feel excited.

This sentence mixes past ('saw') and present ('feel') tenses incorrectly. Use present simple for habitual feelings: 'Whenever I see... I feel...'. Also remove the extra 'I feel' at the start. Suggestion: use consistent tense and avoid repetition.

× I prefer the scenario of our own country because whenever I visit domestic places, I feel relaxed and comfortable.

✓ I prefer the scenery of my own country because whenever I visit places at home, I feel relaxed and comfortable.

Use 'scenery' instead of 'scenario' ('scenario' means a situation or storyline). 'Our own country' is better expressed as 'my own country' or 'at home'; 'domestic places' sounds formal and unnatural in this context — use 'places at home' or simply 'home'. Also keep present tense for habitual actions. Suggestion: 'I prefer the scenery of my own country because whenever I visit places at home, I feel relaxed and comfortable.'